AUDIO TOURNAMENT: LOON VS TRETRU (TreTru wins 5-2)

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AUDIO TOURNAMENT: LOON VS TRETRU (TreTru wins 5-2)

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STRAIGHT BEEF

PICK YOUR OWN BEAT!

DUE DATE: TUESDAY JUNE 14th, 2011

TIME LIMIT: 3 MINUTES MAX. YOU DECIDE HOW TO USE THOSE 3 MINUTES.

WINNER TAKES THE AUDIO TITLE BELT.

CATEGORIES TO VOTE ON:
-DELIVERY-
-PUNCHES-
-CREATIVITY-
-PERSONALS-
-NAME-FLIPS-
-CONSISTENCY-
-RHYME-SCHEMES-

FIRST TO 5 VOTES WINS
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Re: AUDIO TOURNAMENT: LOON VS TRETRU (FINAL ROUND)

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check. gl tre lets have some fun brotha!
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Jyeah srry bout da l8 check..imma need at least a week from today...got some fam issues right now..dont worry this will happen ..i wouldnt no show ya bro
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Re: AUDIO TOURNAMENT: LOON VS TRETRU (FINAL ROUND)

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[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/loonelou831/trewho-tretru-diss[/soundcloud]

Listen as I slam this tre(tray) down like high school lunches,
Break his legs, turn him into a REAL crypt(crip) in crutches 1.
Tre who?! oh, yea, you mean TRAVIS? naaah.
He aint a rapper, he jus lettin shit leak from his jaw.

Only thing that he be wrappin is his lips around balls!
This square's gettin passed like pads benieth stalls.
You really oughta change that name ya bein called,
Cus sayin you that truth, is like sayin a smurf's tall!

This beach loser tryna battle me in sandels,
man, you're better tryna ride around a bike with no handels.
Im here to dismantle, and go rambo on this island boy.
You aint lost yet? well how's it feel to get destroyed!

Imma, murdah dis boy, little TRAVIS LEE HUNTER.
I''ll expose this fake, call me the master myth buster.
Sending shots through Tru, punches right at ya temple,
I'll put the barrell to ya cheek and leave ya sleepin with a dimple!

Bitch its simple! Dont be tryna complicate this shit.
Tre Tru? ya, that name seems falsified a bit.
yea, ya ass is gay Tre, sorry, no hate.
I guess that's why ya faget ass reps the rainbow state 2.

No play on ya mixtape, that shit dropped and flopped
You couldn't drop a dope hit, even if you smoked rock.
Imma, finish you off, and I aint even tryin.
It's like I ordered pizza, HAWAII (how I) devour Hawaiians.

Im flyin flamed up, spittin while rippin this lame up.
His brains and guts, all over the place and such.
The pain is much, greater when my thangs erupt,
This Tre is nuts, Im leavin dude engraved wit cuts.

And like a stain, I'm stuck on blowin up this sitting duck.
I'll have him shakin like a hula dancer when I drop this cut.
Fuck this grass skirt wearin, pussy ass mo fucka.
My bars will put you on ya back, like its limbo brotha.

Yea, you couldn't spit sick dying from pneomonia.
I'm aiming for ya crown, I'll take you down and de-throne ya.
I own ya, so now i guess your name depreciates.
I'm guessin afta this massacre, I'll be TheOneYouHate!!

And sayin Tre's the illest, simply proves you have an illness.
Cus I'm the only loss, Tre will NOT survive to witness.
It's like fitness, the way I'm workin in these types of punches.
My Tae Bo Flow, will work ya like a million crunches BITCH!!!

1. His mixtape is called Big Island Crypt
2. Hawaii is the Rainbow state
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Re: AUDIO TOURNAMENT: LOON VS TRETRU (FINAL ROUND)

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^^^Nice Drop....you ALMOST had it...hahaha..G/L



you gotta beat a champion, to be a champion~
yeah looney you! shook ya boots once you knew.. "it's tru"
You Gotta Beat a Champion, to be the Champion~
Nowadays.. kids dont give a fuck about Looneys Tunes


im flo's above this puny dude named loon e lou
so will loon e lose? aint no mystery like scooby doo

once ya truly knew you was shakin in ya fruity looms
ya might be 'nice' but were never '2 good to beat Tru'
when i let loose the truth pops shots , scar. damaged hard
and i put 8 in ya chest ...go check ya avatar

you aint a fuckin star!maybe you are Poser
'performing' car maintenence down at 'Gold Star Motors' <<he works there
yall can call this one over aint no way looney can stop me
my shots leave this asian punchd Drunk..without the Sake

watch the truth unfold this paperweight call it origami
Lou be blowin up? nah not even as a kamikaze
'Banzai'scream it like mister miyagi did
but ya never punchin or kickin you aint Karate kid

so fuck a punch ill pull ya card this rookie might get pissed
bout you lettin yezzir.. make you look like a bitch
he's like if you got you got it!?! you aint made it yet
you bent over like yezzir!! just takin the shit

remember he was talkin swift how he makin it rich
said you wont succeed with ya dreams you agreed
saw ya 'slit bleed' like a 'virgins first time takin a dick?'
you showed ya 'bitch breed' no i aint fakin this shit

'exposed ya' 'strip tease' bitch please flip these
hethens on the spot 'beleive it or not ' 'ripleys'

interlude...

ill pull this bitches 'cardagen' 'no play 'i wont 'sweat her'/sweater
ya aint got my nerves raised no ways dos was better
so let the 'chips fall' where they may 'stakes are raised'
ya got 'heart jack' but out of place gainst the 'ace of spades'

the games changed a ways..since tres recent return
you was a 'major player' now you on 'injured reserve'
so prepare to be curb'd ....your reality blurred
'couldnt even get me started'..like ya 'battery's burned'

your anologys herb, but not as chronic now
better keep ya job ya not as.. hot as they make you out
this cats pressured to try and better my fighting style
ill serve this pussy up special like down in chinatown

and people shoutin out swearin that your asian
even though when you leave feed you droppin spanish quotations
ya fakin gotta go out this tourny for audio
but i dont know weather to 'sayanara or adios?'

are ya carzy?or just loon e dude..cuz i snipe angles
that'll have ya fly with the 'angels' ..no 'lucy liu'/loosey Lou
you got no seoul/soul and ya whole korea/Career my songs kill
arms ya throw aint nuclear you aint kim jong ill

ya gettin bodied quick chop ya up like a saw mill
my lines are too raw yeah i should get bars grilled
i gotta say this... ya 'rhymes well' they basic ...
you couldnt 'spit this sick' if you were 'suckin a aids dick'

pretty self explan..errybody says he's asian but he
always leaves spanish salutations..

if you dont get da punches plz ask...1




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Re: AUDIO TOURNAMENT: LOON VS TRETRU (FINAL ROUND)

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Whoa!!! pretty good battle you guys I enjoyed listening to both... aight let me cast the 1st vote on here. I'm voting based off the cats on here also on which track I think is the hottest to me. I got mad respect to both of you guys so imma keep it really detailed & 100 on my vote. I had trouble voting for this battle since I know the both of you & done songs with you 2. I had to step outta the homie zone for a while & look @ both of you guys as competitors. This is probably 1 of the hardest times I've had to vote for an audio battle & no lie it was a fun comparing both diss tracks. I have heard both of your songs since 10:30am central time until now so I was listening to both back & forth for hrs now lmao. Was meaning to vote a few hrs ago but a dude was working you know the biz. I'm kinda suprised no one has voted yet so let me proceed with this vote....


Loon E your delivery was on point as always & this is by far my fav diss from you so far fam. Punches were prob the best I've heard from you (another reason why it's my fav diss from you so far lol) & for a challenger against the champ I felt like you held your own better then most would've. Creativity wise you were spitting some sick lines towards Tre; for example the Hawaii pizza line was ill. Your Hawaii punches were actually all dope to me props on that. Creativity wise you had dope punches- Personals... didn't really hear none from you besides the mixtape he dropped & the rainbow state line. Name flipping could've used some work from the 1st bars that's the only time I heard you use his name against him (including the crip 1). I didn't hear no falling off when it came to your verse you were on point with the beat you picked for this battle. I liked the beat you picked as well seemed ol skoo to me.

As for Tre Tru your delivery was also on point (it's always automatic for both you & Loon E) didn't hear any falling off. When it came to your punches I felt like you outshined Loon E in that cat. Your intro was ridiculous you come in straight clowing Loon E about the belt. I gave you creativity because of that including you bars of course. Creativity & punches & personals mixed well together when it came to your diss. I felt like from the jump of your track it was going to be like that throughout the whole diss. Personals were very bogus to me you was dissing Loon E on how he looked Asian. Even knowing that he ain't Asian you used that against him which made the personals stronger & bogus at the same time. This also includes the interlude when you paused the beat just straight talking on how Loon E was being put down by Yezzir & you backed him. The name-flips were sick to me you def had more then Loon E & you used them wisely. The beat you picked was very hype-ish to me.


Overall this was a dope ass battle... I feel like if Loon E would've researched Tre a lil more he could possibly gotten other cats I gave to Tre. I felt like if he gotten some personals in his diss it would've been a different battle. Both had very ill punches but Tre's were packing more heat due to his creativity. In my opinion I felt like Tre had the better diss track due to his punches, creativity, personals & the name flipping. Both had nice word play I personally liked Tre's track more then Loon E's (Tre no lie you had me singing the intro after I heard it a few times lol). His drop was a straight diss towards Loon E from the jump of his song. Loon E had ill punches but was lacking in the cats I gave to Tre.

DELIVERY- Both
PUNCHES- Tre Tru
WORD PLAY- Both
CREATIVITY- Tre Tru
PERSONALS- Tre Tru
NAME-FLIPS- Tre Tru
CONSISTENCY- Both
RHYME-SCHEMES- Both
ENTERTAINMENT- Both

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Mad respect for droppin this vote...very detailed!!!
we need more people to explain them votes as such...koo


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tre was more consitent although loon's flow was a lil nicer in my opinion and even had some decent wordplay i feel like tre edged it out by coming with hardened and more vicious punches i really dont want to break this down but let me see

tre had more bars more bars more bullet holes
i also always thought loon was mexican

yeah im not gonna break it down any further tre had a better dis track simple

MVGT tre tru
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Now I'm going to be honest...

...to be real with y'all, I wasn't even going to vote on this battle in the first place. And it isn't because it lacked appeal at all...it's actually one of the best audio battles to ever grace this site, if not the best of all time. But Tre and Lou are both my niggaz on the real, and if it were a legit beef with either of them with anybody else...I'd have their back without any question and thats a fact. ...so when it came to this battle, I really hated the idea of voting for only one of my niggaz cause I don't want the other to feel like I chose someone over them, or for one to think his shit wasn't better than the other. I fuck wit these dudes because their MONSTERS at what they do, and they do it with finese. But I also felt like I'd be being bogus by not voting, seeing how for years I fought to get the audio chamber and audio battle league jumpin to begin with. So against my better will, I'm going to vote.


Tre's Track
What I liked about it: That little harmonized intro was off the chain, that shit catches your attention right out the gate. I remember thinking to myself, "Damn, that shits too hott right there!" haha And that's what you want...you want to grab the listener and their attention...Tre unquestionably does that with ease right there. I personally think he should've made that lyricaly prologue into a hook...but none the less it served it's purpose. Another thing Tre execised very well was the fact that his punchlines seem to have a deeper impact than Lou's did. Better thought out frames, direct hits on the persona. Lyrically it was everything a diss should be.
What I didn't like about it: I felt that break in the middle of the track to kinda air out "dirty laundry" on Lou was very unneccessary. It came off kinda corny to me, thus lowering the overall impact of the diss. I'm thinkin, "Ehh, why would he break the track to do this!?" You should've just kept riding the ride. That, and I wasn't found of the production you chose. The beat you choose can make or break the overall mood-setting of your diss, and it just came off too cliche for my taste, thus making it sound like any other diss track in the world. So that with the combination of that break in the middle just turned what seemed like a solid diss, to a mediocre one.

Lou's Track
What I liked about it: The amount of swagger and emphasis you put into your tracks is kinda unmatched. And combined with your ad-libbing, you really know how to paint a mental image for the listener to really enjoy. Your style seperates you from all the other audio artists on illest and you really let it shine on tracks like these. To say that you "don't" entertain would be a boldface lie. ANDDD your choice of production to execute your gameplan of a diss was precisely on point. This beat has a nasty underground vibe to it and really served as a foundation to the track you just dropped. Personally...I don't think you could've chose something better. It brought everything together full circle and really helped bring your presentation to the table. Last but not least, you had a strong approach with the flipping of Tre's name in your opening line. Again...opening strong is a brilliant approach.
What I didn't like about it: Now as much as I did see you put personals, punches and nameflips to use, in the end, they just didn't carry the same luster as Tre's punches. Where you were throwing jabs and crosses...Tre was throwing haymakers and uppercuts! Now I'm not trying to take away from the humor in your punchlines, but Tre is a witty character, so to get the best of him, you need to beat him at his own game to insure a knockout. But other than that...I feel like that was your only setback in this track.

DELIVERY- Loon E. Lou
PUNCHES- Tre Tru
CREATIVITY- Tie
PERSONALS- Tre Tru
NAME-FLIPS- Tru Tru
CONSISTENCY- Loon E. Lou (by an edge)
RHYME-SCHEMES- Loon E. Lou


Overall Presentation AND Vote- Loon E. Lou


...and that vote isn't by that big of a margine, this was an extremely close call, but I'm basing this off of the categories given and by MY overall enjoyment. Great battle guys...hope I didn't offend anyone.
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Post by Enlightend »

ok i have listened to both of these tracks a few times now and im finally ready ta vote...

ok loon... i liked your flow and the delivery of your punches and the way you kept your attack on a personal level almost the whole way through... but on the other hand it seemed as if u played it a lil safe... as far as punches go... but everything came together real nice..

tre tru... you were throwing hard punches right out the gate and kept it pretty consistent... and i respect that in a diss track... your flow was nice... but i think the beat was a lil simple so it made your rhyme scheme seem a bit simple as well... and u kinda came away from hitting loon directly at points in the verse... but still a good all around track

DELIVERY- loon
PUNCHES- tre tru
CREATIVITY- tie
PERSONALS- tie
NAME-FLIPS- tre tru
CONSISTENCY- loon
RHYME-SCHEMES- loon

mvgt... loon... but every category was very very close.. and this was a great battle
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-DELIVERY- loon (i felt like u styled on tre here)
-PUNCHES- tre (felt tre's punches so much more)
-CREATIVITY- tie (both had nice adlibs goin on)
-PERSONALS- tre (felt he was way more person, i like the 8 on your chest line)
-NAME-FLIPS- tie (both had some decent name flips and recognition)
-CONSISTENCY- tie (felt like both of you were equally consistent bout it all)
-RHYME-SCHEMES- tre (i did see more some decent multis coming from loon in this)

vote: tre

overall i think tre edged it a bit with punches personals and his rhymescheme, i felt loon had a better presence and more energy that made his swagger style on tre, if this was who's song sounded better and was more enjoyable it could've gone the other way but for a battle tre took this one, good battle to both
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DELIVERY- ( I thought both did really well with this, but Tre just seemed to have a little more presence with his )
-PUNCHES- ( Once again, both did really well with this, but in my opinion, Tre seemed to come more consistantly with punchlines )
-CREATIVITY- (I would say this is a tie )
-PERSONALS- (Tre by having more from what I could find )
-NAME-FLIPS- ( This was more or less a tie in my eyes )
-CONSISTENCY- (Tre, as stated above )
-RHYME-SCHEMES- ( I have no problem saying this was a tie. Both people ripped their beats respectively )

I know this seems to show Tre winning this in a landslide, by my vote, but it is indeed much closer than the catagories show. I was impressed by both tracks, and would really like to see a re-match in the future. Props on both of you for throwing down! Great fucking battle. Kept me entertained throughout!!!

Vote - TreTru

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alright i wanna thank everyone for voting in this one..

Uppin this for More Votes!!!
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Tre-
Man you fuckin came for loons head, that begining lil "champion" hook really set the tone for the rest of your verse. The flow was nice and your punches were solid as fuck, and you came with a real nice variety with all the flips and personals nd shit. (imo the pause in the middle of the song was a lil too much though). Oh and i thought this beat was pretty fuckin coo and you rode it pretty good the whole time. very very very solid battle verse...

Loon-
im diggin this beat... alot. so thats wassup, delivery is dope as fuck, you had some nice punches and metas in this. Dope outro lol you bring alota energy to your tracks so they all come out to be some real bangers, whether its a battle or not, you stay with some fuckin fire.

Mvgt Tre, Loon had some great ass fuckin punches, but when put against all the personals tre incorporated into his battle verse he kinda fell short. Both of yall came at this from different angles as well though, I feel like as a battle tre won it, but loon made his something that i would wanna bang in the car on some hyphy shit lol.

Props to both, yall did a helluva job :clap:
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