M33Kish vs Arvincible (1st Round)

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M33Kish vs Arvincible (1st Round)

Post by The Architect » Tue Jul 26, 2011 10:04 am

Rules
7 Bars/14 lines (MAX)
Due 96 hours(4 days) from time of this thread
First to 5 votes (3-0=ko/4-1=tko). Each day late is 1 against you
Voting must use categories with brief explanations.

Categories
-Storytelling
-Flow
-Creativity
-Rhyme scheme
-Metaphors & Similes
-Consistency
-Impact


M33Kish's topic is "Taking over the world"

Arvincible's topic is "My sick obsession"
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Re: M33Kish vs Baron Enders (1st Round)

Post by M33Kish » Tue Jul 26, 2011 11:51 am

Check.

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The Meek Shall Prosper... So they say :P

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Re: M33Kish vs Baron Enders (1st Round)

Post by Arvincible » Thu Jul 28, 2011 5:55 am

is this my battle? guess so.. check
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Re: M33Kish vs Arvincible (1st Round)

Post by M33Kish » Thu Jul 28, 2011 1:22 pm

Hi,
My name is Revolution.

Making quick work of a walk to remember on an island of embers.../
I've been gone since December yet the ash is still fresh on the timber/
My pocket is heavy from the letter reading "return to sender"/
Tenderly writtin with the slender slur that only my mother could render/
The wind whimpers in my limp ear, but I can still hear the tears fall/
Sweat simmers above my left brow as I anticipate the result of a rolecall/
The night creeps silently, blooming from the cracked streets core/
Greeting me as I weep my native country I've fought so hard to die for/
I came from a reason for being, to just wanting more/
The glory of leading my brothers to different shores was an outcome I hadn't thought of before.../
I fix my posture amidst the roar of the copters soaring above me/
The deafening throttle of their engines rumbling the crown set before me/
According to the history books, this will be the fall of a nation/
But in truth, this is my first step on the road of world domination/

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Re: M33Kish vs Arvincible (1st Round)

Post by Arvincible » Thu Jul 28, 2011 8:46 pm

Rage, at the early stage of wrath, makes its path and way within me
Drained...im Feelin empty, Manifested from the pain, greed and envy
I used to keep it steady..
had kicks and the dopest shades where I now keep smoke grenades
and ropes and blades that i use to attack hotels and choke the maids
give the ho a fade while the blood and tears soak her braids..
Its all a joke i play, stalk em home and watch em unaware,
undress and shower they dont catch my stare, until i snatch their hair..
naked bare, they scream but the duct tape-solves-that..
I love the rush i get when i knock em with a baseball-bat
have their face fall flat, the pussy's great when its ripped-open!!
and head from a chick-chokin?! i cant get enough of leaving a bitch-broken!
Dominance, i get thrills from the adrenaline rushed down-my-spine
We all have a similar obsession, I just make a reality out-of-mine ..>:D
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Re: M33Kish vs Arvincible (1st Round)

Post by Defiance » Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:56 am

-Storytelling-M33k
-Flow-Tie
-Creativity-Tie they both came correct
-Rhyme scheme-Tie
-Metaphors & Similes-Tie
-Consistency-Arv
-Impact-M33K

this shit was close.. but i'm edging more towards m33k simply for the reason, that his shit was an abstract view of the topic.. painted a great picture..

while arv on the other hand.. his shit was tight great multis and content.. but it didn't grab me like m33kish shit did


vote M33kish

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Re: M33Kish vs Arvincible (1st Round)

Post by Sir Kevin O Shea » Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:04 am

This is an amazing show you guys put on. Much respect to both of you.

Storytelling: Arv
Flow: Arv
Creativity: M33k
Rhyme scheme: Arv
Metaphors & Similes:M33k
Consistency: Tied
Impact: Arv

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Re: M33Kish vs Arvincible (1st Round)

Post by Shazo » Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:25 am

Storytelling: Arv
Flow: Tie
Creativity: M33k
Rhyme scheme: Arv
Metaphors & Similes:M33k
Consistency: Tie
Impact: Arv

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Re: M33Kish vs Arvincible (1st Round)

Post by AntiMaTTer » Fri Jul 29, 2011 12:28 pm

M33Kish wrote:Hi,
My name is Revolution.

Making quick work of a walk to remember on an island of embers.../
I've been gone since December yet the ash is still fresh on the timber/
My pocket is heavy from the letter reading "return to sender"/
Tenderly writtin with the slender slur that only my mother could render/
hmm so far not exactly sure where this is going but rhymes is decent flow decent. but still lil ruff

The wind whimpers in my limp ear, but I can still hear the tears fall/
Sweat simmers above my left brow as I anticipate the result of a rolecall/
The night creeps silently, blooming from the cracked streets core/
Greeting me as I weep my native country I've fought so hard to die for/
I came from a reason for being, to just wanting more/
The glory of leading my brothers to different shores was an outcome I hadn't thought of before.../
I fix my posture amidst the roar of the copters soaring above me/
The deafening throttle of their engines rumbling the crown set before me/
According to the history books, this will be the fall of a nation/
But in truth, this is my first step on the road of world domination/

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hmm... well to be honest i was expecting a little bit more. I dont feel that it really pieced together as a story but as a spoken word but it did flow pretty well and had some decent stuff in it.


Arvincible wrote:Rage, at the early stage of wrath, makes its path and way within me
Drained...im Feelin empty, Manifested from the pain, greed and envy
I used to keep it steady..
had kicks and the dopest shades where I now keep smoke grenades
and ropes and blades that i use to attack hotels and choke the maids
lol liked the rhyme scheme there at the last two lines. good imagery so far

give the ho a fade while the blood and tears soak her braids..
Its all a joke i play, stalk em home and watch em unaware,
undress and shower they dont catch my stare, until i snatch their hair..
naked bare, they scream but the duct tape-solves-that..
I love the rush i get when i knock em with a baseball-bat
diggin this part, the "rush" gave good imagery of a couple movies that remind me of this. good flow too

have their face fall flat, the pussy's great when its ripped-open!!
and head from a chick-chokin?! i cant get enough of leaving a bitch-broken!
Dominance, i get thrills from the adrenaline rushed down-my-spine
We all have a similar obsession, I just make a reality out-of-mine ..>:D
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I was feeling this verse more than Av, both were good but i feel M3 brought it harder with the imagery, flow and just all around story telling.



Storytelling: M3
Flow: M3
Creativity: TIE
Rhyme scheme: M3
Metaphors & Similes:M33k
Consistency: Tie
Impact: TIE

VOTE=M33k

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Re: M33Kish vs Arvincible (1st Round)

Post by The Architect » Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:14 pm

nice... this could've gone either way from just reading it..

Storytelling:Tie (both delivered it well)
Flow: Arv
Creativity:Meek (seemed less "direct")
Rhyme scheme:Arv
Metaphors & Similes:tie
Consistency:tie
Impact:Tie (both had a solid closer)

vote: Arv

(reading his just felt smoother to me, arv was a bit more generic in his topic than meek, however i enjoyed some of the detailing, i did expect a bit more from arv but overall i think he barely edged this)



ALSO ADDING... anti after reading your post i think you confused meek and arv, the one you were complimenting was arv, although u ended up voting for meek :lol:

anyways... guys if you're part of the tournament (which all of you are lol..) please wait until i announce open voting for the tournament

until then... hold back on voting for this tournament and let the non-tourny participants do the voting


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Re: M33Kish vs Arvincible (1st Round)

Post by Arvincible » Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:55 pm

lol i read antimatter's vote i was like wha? lol
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Re: M33Kish vs Arvincible (1st Round)

Post by AntiMaTTer » Mon Aug 01, 2011 7:24 am

lol? im so confused anymore.



wow i may have been drunk when i did that...

it went to the second verse i quoted... which is ARV ... my mistake.

VOTE=ARV, same goes to the categories
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Re: M33Kish vs Arvincible (1st Round)

Post by The Architect » Tue Aug 02, 2011 10:09 am

4-1
arv wins by tko

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