Dead Silence vs Young Flow (Young Flow Wins via K.O. 3-0)
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- Dead Silence
- God's Given Curse
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- Dead Silence
- God's Given Curse
- Posts: 3303
- Joined: Mon May 21, 2007 9:34 am
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- Location: Bloomsburg, PA
they say that money is the power to everything//
so i close my eyes and just think//
what i could do with all those digits//
i could grab life by the horns and just live it//
but its not what it all seems to be//
saw a homeless guy said this is what killed me//
He said he was out there hustle the streets////
reclined back with hundreds at his feet//
Everything was all good and grand//
untill he decided to fucked with the wrong man//
Dood started attacking and than he took his crew
Eye all black,they choked him till he turned blue
They took their share and left him tied up//
Than he said a prayer like he just died,FUCK//
He couldnt go on anymore//
he Said "If i only Knew before//
Man started to cry than looked up to me and said//
Internally you die or your already dead
make sure you pockets arent overly filled//
Too Much money could get you killed//
Someone is always wanting your money//
Look at me if you think its funny//
I thanked him and shook his old wrinkled hand//
and than he got up and started to stand//
Eyes shut tight and he grabbed his chest//
Told him everything's alright and he was blessed//
than he fell to the ground and died right there//
i looked around and said "This aint fair//
Money will get you killed no matter what you do//
If only he was still alive hed tell you//
Money will never bring you a Happy life//
Just enjoy the time u have with ur kids and wife//
Never let Money get in your way//
Or you wont live to see another day//
by the way flow
your track was over 2 and half minutes
but its kool
so i close my eyes and just think//
what i could do with all those digits//
i could grab life by the horns and just live it//
but its not what it all seems to be//
saw a homeless guy said this is what killed me//
He said he was out there hustle the streets////
reclined back with hundreds at his feet//
Everything was all good and grand//
untill he decided to fucked with the wrong man//
Dood started attacking and than he took his crew
Eye all black,they choked him till he turned blue
They took their share and left him tied up//
Than he said a prayer like he just died,FUCK//
He couldnt go on anymore//
he Said "If i only Knew before//
Man started to cry than looked up to me and said//
Internally you die or your already dead
make sure you pockets arent overly filled//
Too Much money could get you killed//
Someone is always wanting your money//
Look at me if you think its funny//
I thanked him and shook his old wrinkled hand//
and than he got up and started to stand//
Eyes shut tight and he grabbed his chest//
Told him everything's alright and he was blessed//
than he fell to the ground and died right there//
i looked around and said "This aint fair//
Money will get you killed no matter what you do//
If only he was still alive hed tell you//
Money will never bring you a Happy life//
Just enjoy the time u have with ur kids and wife//
Never let Money get in your way//
Or you wont live to see another day//
by the way flow
your track was over 2 and half minutes
but its kool
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Faith
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- Hard-Kore-X
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been waitin 4 ur drop son now look I don't want niggaz gettin all emotional cuz a nigga is castin his vote but Silence u need 2 put them vocals up kid I did not understand on word u said dawg I had 2 blast dat shit lol da way u pronounce shit sounds weird as hell I think in real life u talk like a normal kid I got no idea where u 4rm but u sound like ur scared 2 even record dis track, nigga put sum nutz in ur tracks dawg u sound like u r bored as hell and I don't tell u dis 2 put u down I do dis so I could help u out mayne. I had 2 read ur shit after I got done playin ur track dawg cuz I couldn't vibe 2 it as I could wit Flow's
So here's my vote Flow u got my vote on all cats I feel like u cat sweeped Silence cuz I could hear ur shit, ur shit kept me entertained, ur presence and flow where on point u fell off a lil when u said SINK u jus said sink and paused lol its koo tho i guess lol and u shatted on da concept like wat u did wit ur track. Liked dat lil echo effect u put on ur vocals. Only flaw u got is dat u also gotta put a lil nutz on ur shit 2 when u blaze da mic jus a lil fam not dat much but overall i liked ur track only thing dat really fucked ur shit up was da end when da beat cuts off lol no offense jus my opinion nigga
As 4 Silence nigga keep practicin dawg take every battle as a lesson learned and keep droppin son
So here's my vote Flow u got my vote on all cats I feel like u cat sweeped Silence cuz I could hear ur shit, ur shit kept me entertained, ur presence and flow where on point u fell off a lil when u said SINK u jus said sink and paused lol its koo tho i guess lol and u shatted on da concept like wat u did wit ur track. Liked dat lil echo effect u put on ur vocals. Only flaw u got is dat u also gotta put a lil nutz on ur shit 2 when u blaze da mic jus a lil fam not dat much but overall i liked ur track only thing dat really fucked ur shit up was da end when da beat cuts off lol no offense jus my opinion nigga
As 4 Silence nigga keep practicin dawg take every battle as a lesson learned and keep droppin son
- Dead Silence
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Presence - Yung Flow
Flow - Yung Flow
Mixing - Neither
Concept - Tie (because it was a topical)
Entertainment - Yung Flow
**Notes:
Dead Silence made it very difficult to hear, even though I know he was attempting to go for a softer feel but luckily for him, Flow's mixing wasn't extravagane either. But presence-wise and entertainment-wise, flow did take it this round in my opinion. But seeing how this is a 3 round battle, I think that D.S. should take this as a wake up call and really practice and recite the things he writes before recording them in order get to gain sometype of upper-hand before round 2 if he wants to make it to a 3rd round. Good job guys! Bring your A-Game next round.
Vote= Yung Flow
Flow - Yung Flow
Mixing - Neither
Concept - Tie (because it was a topical)
Entertainment - Yung Flow
**Notes:
Dead Silence made it very difficult to hear, even though I know he was attempting to go for a softer feel but luckily for him, Flow's mixing wasn't extravagane either. But presence-wise and entertainment-wise, flow did take it this round in my opinion. But seeing how this is a 3 round battle, I think that D.S. should take this as a wake up call and really practice and recite the things he writes before recording them in order get to gain sometype of upper-hand before round 2 if he wants to make it to a 3rd round. Good job guys! Bring your A-Game next round.
Vote= Yung Flow
- Dead Silence
- God's Given Curse
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- Ambiguous Realm
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