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Lycan The Apostle vs 360 (CLOSED)

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house rules, 4 bars, due 24 hours after both people check in..

check

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Re: Lycan The Apostle vs 360

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Check... 4 bars? That's weak... but whatever.

-- Wed Feb 29, 2012 4:03 pm --

360 can get murdered at 5 paces, for disturbin’ my hiatus...
You're gonna’ die prayin’ like a wounded German murmuring "mein laben"
When led bursts from the nine stainless...
You can ask your roster if this mans a monster
That can dance “circles” around this bad imposter like a shadow boxer
That can’t be conquered...
So bring on the killers and Iraqi bombers
I'll rain fire on you like Cannon Fodder from an apache chopper...
Just give me your votes & watch how I diminish this queer
Cuz’ around 360’s house “bottoms up” doesn’t mean finish a beer

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Re: Lycan The Apostle vs 360

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the psalms i'm unleashin' will bomb this dumb priestess
he calls himself Lycan, but I'm the one beastin'

fuck your life. i wouldn't care if you got snuffed tonight
you said you're a "new" music producer. you've produced nothin', right ?

I don't have much to go on with this herb, but apostle is a Christian word
so he probly aspires to be a priest and ogle boys 'til his vision blurs

you have zero mojo and your rap flows so so
and you're such a fag that I bet you say no homo - after sayin' no homo

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Re: Lycan The Apostle vs 360

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360 can get murdered at 5 paces, for disturbin’ my hiatus...
You're gonna’ die prayin’ like a wounded German murmuring "mein laben"
When led bursts from the nine stainless...
i liked the first line with the rhyme, the punch was ok but people here
normally dont speak german so you should prolly have a translation expo somewhere.


You can ask your roster if this mans a monster
That can dance “circles” around this bad imposter like a shadow boxer
That can’t be conquered...
this was ok i like the rhymes but the punchs arent landing
too great. you coulda flipped the Circle line into something better if you
took the time to work on it


So bring on the killers and Iraqi bombers
I'll rain fire on you like Cannon Fodder from an apache chopper...
Just give me your votes & watch how I diminish this queer
Cuz’ around 360’s house “bottoms up” doesn’t mean finish a beer
ok a cool closer. prolly your best line id say. the multis are str8
but the "rain fire" i woulda tried to flip it differently to actually
make it into more of a direct punchline


multis- 2.5 / 5 (some of them need some polishing and others were too forced)

Punchs- 3/8 *punchs have 8pts since they win battles mainly, you didnt have many punchs that i consider battle oriented*

Puns- 2/5 (just some basic wordplay with the bottoms up line but not enough of them)

Metas-4/5 (you had more metas then word play)
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11.5/23

*not too bad a verse the first i seen of yours too. if you stick around here youll elevate even more*

-- Wed Feb 29, 2012 6:09 pm --

the psalms i'm unleashin' will bomb this dumb priestess
he calls himself Lycan, but I'm the one beastin'
this was a pretty good opener

fuck your life. i wouldn't care if you got snuffed tonight
you said you're a "new" music producer. you've produced nothin', right ?
kinda stretching it but i see what you meant

I don't have much to go on with this herb, but apostle is a Christian word
so he probly aspires to be a priest and ogle boys 'til his vision blurs
was ok wasnt feeling it as much as the first line

you have zero mojo and your rap flows so so
and you're such a fag that I bet you say no homo - after sayin' no homo
wasnt feeling this one.

Multis-3.5/5
Punchs-4.5/8
Puns-2/5 (really the only pun was the beastin and producer line)
Metas-3/5
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13/23 (was an aite verse i never seen your battles before but this was str8, could have been polished a little more and more nameflips etc but w/e)


VOTE- that asshole 360
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Re: Lycan The Apostle vs 360

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now this was a pretty decent battle to read... so lets vote!!!!

Lycan... not a bad verse... though its spelled "mein leben"... but still it was a sick bar... you're new here and you already know whats up... i think you'd be a harder hitter if you went to the Center Of Elevation and upped you're game... i think you kept up with 360 tho...

moving on...

360... this verse was okay... the opener was cool but the rest of it seemed to lack in places... such as...

"fuck your life. i wouldn't care if you got snuffed tonight
you said you're a "new" music producer. you've produced nothin', right"

think you had nothing to go on from him so you used it as a filler...

all in all the rest of it was cool...

So Heres The Votes!!!

Punches - Tied
Personals - Lycan
Nameplay - Lycan had more to go off of... 360 did his thing tho...
Multies - Tied but Lycan's were doper
OVERALL - Lycan

MVGT: Lycan

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Re: Lycan The Apostle vs 360 *VOTE !!*

Post by The Gonz »

Punches - Lycan.

Both had punches, obviously, its a battle. But Lycan's had better setups and were slightly more effective in my opinion.

Personals - Tie.

Both of your verses were pretty universal. Nothing really stoodout since neither of you really know much of anything about each other's personal lives lol.

Nameplay - Lycan.

360 didn't really go at Lycan's name much while Lycan had a couple jabs stemming from 360's name. They could have been a lot more effective, but in this case they were enough to take this category.


Multies - Tie. Both had consistent use throughout their verses. I'd give the nod to Lycan for better rhyme schemes, but it wasn't so overwhelming that it warranted a win in this category.

Overall, good match-up. I think you two could really hammer it out if you knew a little bit more about each other or maybe had more time or more bars.

Final Vote: Lycan.

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Re: Lycan The Apostle vs 360 *VOTE !!*

Post by ILLoKWENT »

Punches lycan came wit slightly more flips

Personals 360 easily.... He made references to his name, and his music...although I wouldve liked to see better flips to it..still decent nonetheless.

Multis lycan. Just more complexity in each bar.... 360 had some but wasnt consistent.

Flow tie


This comes down to preference...very close battle... Both werent too strong in flips .but one came with one or two more flips, punches...360 I felt your last bar was weak wit the nohomo,and I think if you could flip those personals better..nameflip etc. you wouldve had the edge.because personals is a plus cause its a battle..but flipping them is even better.. In the end. Ima have to give it to 360 by default.. Because lycan had flips but wit the exception of a playd circle reference to his name...the rest of his shit coulda been thrown at anyone... 360 came wit albeit weak personals but he at least attempted them and tried to incorporate a diss in em..remember this is a battle and unless that person has a tough as hell name to flip or zero history to go on. Then random punches will be effective in my voteing..otherwise, I expect at the very least nameflip personals or maybe a prior battle etc...
Mvgt 360

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-- Sat Mar 03, 2012 7:40 pm --

good battle boys.... And lycan you got potential... Just throw in more personals wit them randoms..and youll do fine..same wit 360.. Learn to add flipping in your repetoire.and youll be blazing

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Re: Lycan The Apostle vs 360 *VOTE !!*

Post by K KiLLaH »

This battle was very close however Lycan def put more work in his verse.BUT!!!! you don't have one personal punch in ya whole verse!!! you mentioned 360's name once and if you replaced his name with anyone elses name ya verrse you could say it was aimed at them which is basically a free verse... 360 got on you about being a lycan new producer an apostle etc...

I vote for 360 cuz his verse was aimed at you...lycan ya verse was more of an add name here type of verse ... it was hott but not direct enough for a battle no personals


mvgt:360

-- Sat Mar 03, 2012 11:36 am --

This battle was very close however Lycan def put more work in his verse.BUT!!!! you don't have one personal punch in ya whole verse!!! you mentioned 360's name once and if you replaced his name with anyone elses name ya verrse you could say it was aimed at them which is basically a free verse... 360 got on you about being a lycan new producer an apostle etc...

I vote for 360 cuz his verse was aimed at you...lycan ya verse was more of an add name here type of verse ... it was hott but not direct enough for a battle no personals


mvgt:360

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Re: Lycan The Apostle vs 360 *VOTE !!*

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3-2 in 360's Favor... Lets get some votes!!!!
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Re: Lycan The Apostle vs 360 *VOTE !!*

Post by PyDizZLE21 »

I feel like sum dudes be dick riding sick with it status and I don't care if this offends anybody, and anti I don't agree with ur vote at all come on man, lycan took this battle more punches or attempts for a punch, a bit better flow, structure wise both were pretty easy to read, 360 had an ok verse but it seems he had nothing to really say anything about the kid since he didn't have dirt but come one lycan the apostle u can totally play with his name....

all in all was a pretty ok battle but my vote goes to, LYCAN...

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Re: Lycan The Apostle vs 360 *VOTE !!*

Post by witecobra »

Multies-Lycan

flow-Tie

Punchlines/Personals- Lycan

Vote- It was a close battle but my vote goes to Lycan

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Re: Lycan The Apostle vs 360 *VOTE !!*

Post by Pagli »

360

The psalms i'm unleashin' will bomb this dumb priestess
he calls himself Lycan, but I'm the one beastin'

:::ok bar, you didn't really diss anyone. Just bragged about how good you are..


fuck your life. i wouldn't care if you got snuffed tonight
you said you're a "new" music producer. you've produced nothin', right ?

::: better than the last bar, decent..

I don't have much to go on with this herb, but apostle is a Christian word
so he probly aspires to be a priest and ogle boys 'til his vision blurs

:::lol I like it. Best bar in your verse. Personals are ok

you have zero mojo and your rap flows so so
and you're such a fag that I bet you say no homo - after sayin' no homo

::: not a hard punch but ok finisher. I guess its better if you say it out loud
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Lycan

360 can get murdered at 5 paces, for disturbin’ my hiatus...
You're gonna’ die prayin’ like a wounded German murmuring "mein laben"
When led bursts from the nine stainless...

:::decent bar. Nice flow

You can ask your roster if this mans a monster
That can dance “circles” around this bad imposter like a shadow boxer
That can’t be conquered...

:::cool metta...that's about it

So bring on the killers and Iraqi bombers
I'll rain fire on you like Cannon Fodder from an apache chopper...

:::cool metta. Getting a little complex. That's cool..


Just give me your votes & watch how I diminish this queer
Cuz’ around 360’s house “bottoms up” doesn’t mean finish a beer

::: lol funny finisher. Nice punch

Punches - Lycan(just connected more)
Personals - 360(didn't have much to say, but what he said worked for me)
Nameplay - Lycan
Multies - Tied
OVERALL VOTE - Lycan

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Re: Lycan The Apostle vs 360 *VOTE !!*

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i'm gonna say its 5-2 Lycan Wins

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next time explain ur shit better than that you're vote doesn't count in this battle
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