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EL vs cbk(UNFINISHED-CLOSED)

Post by EL tots irA » Fri Jan 13, 2012 9:54 am

5 bars
houserules
48 hours
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Re: EL vs cbk

Post by CBK » Fri Jan 13, 2012 10:01 am

check.

-- Fri Jan 13, 2012 5:34 pm --

EL's the dope type?,thats a joke right,one toke from a blowpipe an you'd go white
you want a battle? but want my help? yeah hows about i ghost write for this low life
i checked your profile, no style, no hype, probably no winning aims.
does there actually happen to be a rapper alive that you didn't name?
look son, i'll come to Tucson, with a tux on,fuck this shook one,
"i'll come" just to touch the cups an bust a nut on the jugs that once upon a time you sucked on.
so watch this faggit wobble,stagger, topple, backwards aristotle,
an after i've smashed this battle i'll just kick back an crack a bottle.
i'll leave you chokin dude with open wounds,soaking, bruised.
im so confused what do i do? call the mods i think i broke a noob.
Last edited by CBK on Sat Jan 14, 2012 9:36 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: EL vs cbk

Post by EL tots irA » Sat Jan 14, 2012 8:55 am

grand shit...

wow i thought you would have a Slight Chance to show My Ass!
and every Mc on the Site That!
your record doesn't reflect your Type Rap! (txt battles)
I WAS SO WRONG
can't say good written's (riddance) But SO LONG!
believe that his weed tracks are the kids only Dope Songs..
HE WRITES !?!, besides this verse ,& one written drop
your only rhyming one Syllable
Pitiful !! losing 15 times for you its a Ritual
literal! my flow raging yours a trickle
put two holes in CBK Like Initials (C.B.K)
MY CITY WILL EAT HIS, SIDE RIDER FOR THE EAST BITCH!
(most active topic) what not to stick in your PENIS??
ONLY A HOMO POST MEAT SPIN ...CBK DEFEATED
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Re: EL vs cbk

Post by SpawnTrueForm » Sat Jan 14, 2012 7:33 pm

Woah, the originality in this battle really was off. You both came ok to be honest with this and was much closer than i thought it would have been.

EL TOTS:::

wow i thought you would have a Slight Chance to show My Ass!
and every Mc on the Site That!
your record doesn't reflect your Type Rap! (txt battles)
^^ structures fucked up.. ok.. pretty forced though

I WAS SO WRONG
can't say good written's (riddance) But SO LONG!
believe that his weed tracks are the kids only Dope Songs..
^^ ok personal, but the weed/dope songs thing is SO played out

HE WRITES !?!, besides this verse ,& one written drop
your only rhyming one Syllable
Pitiful !! losing 15 times for you its a Ritual
^^ nah... had intent, but didnt really have a punch

literal! my flow raging yours a trickle
put two holes in CBK Like Initials (C.B.K)
^^ they are dots... not holes?

MY CITY WILL EAT HIS, SIDE RIDER FOR THE EAST BITCH!
(most active topic) what not to stick in your PENIS??
ONLY A HOMO POST MEAT SPIN ...CBK DEFEATED
^^ best bars of the battle, humour and had a punch (didnt need 'cbk defeated' though)


CBK:::


EL's the dope type?,thats a joke right,one toke from a blowpipe an you'd go white
you want a battle? but want my help? yeah hows about i ghost write for this low life
^^ set up was better than the punchline, personal.. but average

i checked your profile, no style, no hype, probably no winning aims.
does there actually happen to be a rapper alive that you didn't name?
^^ didnt feel it

look son, i'll come to Tucson, with a tux on,fuck this shook one,
"i'll come" just to touch the cups an bust a nut on the jugs that once upon a time you sucked on.
^^ no end multi, the whole i fucked your mom shits played

so watch this faggit wobble,stagger, topple, backwards aristotle,
an after i've smashed this battle i'll just kick back an crack a bottle.
^^ set up again better than the punch

i'll leave you chokin dude with open wounds,soaking, bruised.
im so confused what do i do? call the mods i think i broke a noob.
^^ boasting finished, should of tried to insult him more


To be hoenst based on this i'd give structure/flow/personals maybe to CBK.
BUT i'd give punches, originality (just), multies and humour to EL.. so this is a suprise for me to even say this but

VOTE - EL
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Re: EL vs cbk

Post by Emtu » Sun Jan 15, 2012 12:09 am

Flow: El- His stuff flowed more smooth while cbk was forced
Multi: Cbk- El only had 2 multi
Punches: El- Cbk word of advice stop trying to tell a story and attack yer opponent
Word play: Cbk hands down

Close battle fellas but El edged this a little by attacking the main areas.

Mvgt: El :clap:
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Re: EL vs cbk

Post by CBK » Sun Jan 15, 2012 12:18 am

can we get some vets voting?... or atleast somebody who holds a lil weight...

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Re: EL vs cbk

Post by Enlightend » Sun Jan 15, 2012 12:51 am

hhhhmmmmmm!!!!

well as i see it...

this battle wasnt very good punches were simple and played(bad combo) from both...

but someone must get my vote sooooo

punches... im a say that cbk... his lines were less played, and forced then el's... not by much though

flow... cbk again... the way i read it el had a weird flow that just didnt work for me where as cbk had a more complex rhyme scheme some forced multies but it still was a smooth read

nameplay... blah

wordplay... cbk but blah

overall... cbk

now post your links before i close this thread 24 hrs
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Re: EL vs cbk

Post by Mick Ross » Sun Jan 15, 2012 1:01 am

CBK

EL's the dope type?,thats a joke right,one toke from a blowpipe an you'd go white
you want a battle? but want my help? yeah hows about i ghost write for this low life

Multi's and flow was nice, punch was quite weak, but not a bad start.

i checked your profile, no style, no hype, probably no winning aims.
does there actually happen to be a rapper alive that you didn't name?

OK personal.

look son, i'll come to Tucson, with a tux on,fuck this shook one,
"i'll come" just to touch the cups an bust a nut on the jugs that once upon a time you sucked on.

Although i banged your mom punch is played, the cups/jugs wordplay had potential to hit alot harder.

so watch this faggit wobble,stagger, topple, backwards aristotle,
an after i've smashed this battle i'll just kick back an crack a bottle.

Filler.

i'll leave you chokin dude with open wounds,soaking, bruised.
im so confused what do i do? call the mods i think i broke a noob.

Again, filler, no real punch.

El Tots Ira

wow i thought you would have a Slight Chance to show My Ass!
and every Mc on the Site That!
your record doesn't reflect your Type Rap! (txt battles)

Ok.

I WAS SO WRONG
can't say good written's (riddance) But SO LONG!
believe that his weed tracks are the kids only Dope Songs..

OK again, but played.

HE WRITES !?!, besides this verse ,& one written drop
your only rhyming one Syllable
Pitiful !! losing 15 times for you its a Ritual

Swing and a miss with the punch here.

literal! my flow raging yours a trickle
put two holes in CBK Like Initials (C.B.K)

I think this is unintentially not bad, i'm guessing since you put (C.B.K) with the .'s you mean them, but if you leave CBK how it is, theres two holes in the letter B which works alot better.

MY CITY WILL EAT HIS, SIDE RIDER FOR THE EAST BITCH!
(most active topic) what not to stick in your PENIS??
ONLY A HOMO POST MEAT SPIN ...CBK DEFEATED

The personal could have been used better but OK punch.

Personals: El for last punch.
Punchlines: El just becuase he had more blatent attemps, CBK's last 4 lines let him down for me.
Wordplay: El just edged this for me.
Multi's: CBK
Flow: CBK
Humour: Tie

All the Cats was tight apart from Multis and Flow which CBK took easy for me. El, i hate the way you structure your verse, its horrible. El for me though just edged out the cats which matter most - Wordplay, Punches and Personals so he just steals this one.

Vote - El.

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Re: EL vs cbk(READY FOR VOTES)

Post by smallsuno » Sun Jan 15, 2012 4:49 am

this was a pretty good battle to me...

CBK had dope lines...and a stronger flow...some good punches

El had some strong multies and some good nameplays...

all in all...

MVGT=C.B.K there was more in his bars that stood out to me...
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Re: EL vs cbk(READY FOR VOTES)

Post by EL tots irA » Sun Jan 15, 2012 1:42 pm

thanx for the feed back ill switch the structure and come with stronger punches with more wordplay

-- Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:01 pm --

Let's get some more votes close this battle up
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Re: EL vs cbk(READY FOR VOTES)

Post by Blake Downs » Tue Jan 17, 2012 1:30 pm

cbk -

EL's the dope type?,thats a joke right,one toke from a blowpipe an you'd go white
you want a battle? but want my help? yeah hows about i ghost write for this low life
(ehh,the flows there )

i checked your profile, no style, no hype, probably no winning aims.
does there actually happen to be a rapper alive that you didn't name?
(ehhh not to strong really)

look son, i'll come to Tucson, with a tux on,fuck this shook one,
"i'll come" just to touch the cups an bust a nut on the jugs that once upon a time you sucked on.
(not feelin dis really)

so watch this faggit wobble,stagger, topple, backwards aristotle,
an after i've smashed this battle i'll just kick back an crack a bottle.
(ahh i see what u did there)

i'll leave you chokin dude with open wounds,soaking, bruised.
im so confused what do i do? call the mods i think i broke a noob.
(lol )

vs


wow i thought you would have a Slight Chance to show My Ass!
and every Mc on the Site That!(NAH)
your record doesn't reflect your Type Rap! (txt battles)
(nah)
I WAS SO WRONG
can't say good written's (riddance) But SO LONG!
(nahhh not feelin)
believe that his weed tracks are the kids only Dope Songs..
(nahh)
HE WRITES !?!, besides this verse ,& one written drop
your only rhyming one Syllable
Pitiful !! losing 15 times for you its a Ritual
(ohshit)
literal! my flow raging yours a trickle
put two holes in CBK Like Initials (C.B.K)
(nah)e
(dude ur a fag u say alota gay shit ruins the verse)
ONLY A HOMO POST MEAT SPIN ...CBK DEFEATED
(nah)

well this battle was weak,cbk lets battle u got this one,cbk had punches,flow,goin his way and el had nothin goin
vote=cbk

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Re: EL vs cbk(READY FOR VOTES)

Post by EL tots irA » Thu Jan 19, 2012 6:23 am

favorites yo stop that shit
just cuz i voted against you? wow

-- Wed Jan 18, 2012 12:25 pm --

foreal blake downs your a dik riding pussy yo you battle me next...you cant even explain my lines cuz your a fuking bitch

-- Wed Jan 18, 2012 12:44 pm --

blake downs is a cry baby bitch hahaha
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Re: EL vs cbk(LOCKED WAITING 4 LINKS)

Post by Enlightend » Thu Jan 19, 2012 8:08 am

yall have been warned.. but well over 24 hrs have passed and still no links... send me the links and i will reopen for voting.... CLOSED AND WAITING FOR LINKS
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Re: EL vs cbk(LOCKED WAITING 4 LINKS)

Post by Alvin » Fri Jan 20, 2012 3:10 am

EL tots irA, THANK YOU FOR USING THE REPORTING SYSTEM.

I REGRET TO INFORM YOU, YOUR OPPONENT ALSO HAS TO UPDATE LINKS. AS SOON AS HE DOES, THIS WILL BE RESUMED.

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Re: EL vs cbk(READY FOR VOTES)

Post by Lawgix » Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:57 pm

Blake Downs wrote:cbk -

EL's the dope type?,thats a joke right,one toke from a blowpipe an you'd go white
you want a battle? but want my help? yeah hows about i ghost write for this low life
(ehh,the flows there )

i checked your profile, no style, no hype, probably no winning aims.
does there actually happen to be a rapper alive that you didn't name?
(ehhh not to strong really)

look son, i'll come to Tucson, with a tux on,fuck this shook one,
"i'll come" just to touch the cups an bust a nut on the jugs that once upon a time you sucked on.
(not feelin dis really)

so watch this faggit wobble,stagger, topple, backwards aristotle,
an after i've smashed this battle i'll just kick back an crack a bottle.
(ahh i see what u did there)

i'll leave you chokin dude with open wounds,soaking, bruised.
im so confused what do i do? call the mods i think i broke a noob.
(lol )

vs


wow i thought you would have a Slight Chance to show My Ass!
and every Mc on the Site That!(NAH)
your record doesn't reflect your Type Rap! (txt battles)
(nah)
I WAS SO WRONG
can't say good written's (riddance) But SO LONG!
(nahhh not feelin)
believe that his weed tracks are the kids only Dope Songs..
(nahh)
HE WRITES !?!, besides this verse ,& one written drop
your only rhyming one Syllable
Pitiful !! losing 15 times for you its a Ritual
(ohshit)
literal! my flow raging yours a trickle
put two holes in CBK Like Initials (C.B.K)
(nah)e
(dude ur a fag u say alota gay shit ruins the verse)
ONLY A HOMO POST MEAT SPIN ...CBK DEFEATED
(nah)

well this battle was weak,cbk lets battle u got this one,cbk had punches,flow,goin his way and el had nothin goin
vote=cbk
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-Hating for no valid reason
-An attempt at payback for a disagreement online or offline
-An attempt at getting payback for you voting against them recently


El when this re-opens after BOTH of you get links sent to Enlightend send the link where you voted against him and it will be examined...

you'd think after this was posted January 12th and its now January 22nd... you two would have some fucking links to battles you posted... if there are no links posted to votes one to two days old... i will move this to the Closed Battles section... and it WON'T be unlocked...

-- Tue Feb 28, 2012 12:54 am --

you two have had an ample amount of time to pick a topic... this is closed...
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