J steel vs cbk (Ready For Votes)

[Jsteel]

4 bars 3 days from check in,house rules...break down votes

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[CBK]

checkity

[Jsteel]

Check

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[Jsteel]

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[CBK]

ahhh i comprehend now...

-- Thu Dec 01, 2011 10:57 pm --

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[Speakers]

CBK

J throws less punches than a FISTLESS FIGHT, so SIT TIGHT an LISTEN RIGHT to the SHIT I TYPE,
i'll get straight to the point like a KITCHEN KNIFE.
you might be the man of steel son,
but im fucking LINGUISTIC KRYPTONITE with a diss AIIIGHT.
winner? no need to WAIT TO TELL, coz he's FAKE AS HELL wreck steels bars like i'd BREAK A CELL,
even the name "steal j's" displays your only gonna TAKE AN'L
i'll DENT YOUR HEALTH, yo in fairness (furnace) my temperatures one HUNDRED PERCENT SET TO MELT SON,
steel's bars are so shit an badly structured
you'd think he'd fuckin forgot to SMELT SOME.
compared to my hot gold bars STEELS GOT NOTHIN ON EM
a shitty records the only thing for REAL WE GOT IN COMMON
i'll drown this CRYING WHORE,what's he TRYING FOR?
his flows SHIT DEEP up PISS CREEK,
don't type battle kid when your paddling with..
a PROFILE FORMED from IRON ORE and your WRITS WEAK (wrists)
the way im fucking this metal FREAK you would think i was MYSTIQUE.
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Jsteel


Im ADAMENT ,
that this
techs/texts
would
leave his wrecked form IRRELEVANT
cuz your RAPPINGS SHIT.

Its water pistols to my ACID SPITS,
can ya HANDLE THIS 'SCRIPT'?
biter ,
whos your 'writer'.
U 'act' like the ACTOR WHICH is your ACRONYMs flip

'C.b.k/See, b.k ' cant hit the target when 'shooting' like ' a bad CAMERA MEN'

,that aint your role,cuz your being 'shot' while you hold *gandi`s 'peace'(gun) ,and you think youd be DAMAGIN ?

The flesh of 'SEE SAWED' /C sawed like 'KIDS in PLAYGROUNDS',
excuses when 'HE FALLS', too much 'Rum' got him in a GRAVE NOW
he loses THESE BRAWLS.
For the king ,'come 'rushed thru his verse,like he jerked on his page.wow

A
SHMUCK AT BIRTH,
your mom probably tryta DUCK the SQUIRT
of semen and kept beating on her belly,
pathetic abused child when you were STUCK IN HER.

This 'kids' age is 'twenty',cant ELEVATE MENTALY,his TALENTS FACE NEVER SEEN cuz his CHALLENGED BRAIN ENDS in PIQUE

'COMEBACK KID' when you`ve 'grown '
my GUNS CLAP WEAK bred in their dome
his minds 'smaller' ,even he 'sees/cease his growth that way'
like intense weight lifting too young, cuz hes slow





---Jsteel Expo---
line 1:simple
line 2:small set up uses 'script' and 'act ' for the next bar.and 'acronyms flip' refers to the initials of his name that i flipped and changed

line 3 and 4:b.k is ben kingsley,an actor who played ghandi in a movie and ghandi is known to use peace in war ...notice the wordplays. And notice the wordplay with shoot

line 5:he versed king rum,who beat him and when cbk was losing,he made an excuse that he had to rush through writing his verse...check the play ...

Line 6:simple

line 7 and 8: hes twenty,hes still a kid...because he calls himself comeback kid ..hes smaller and slower than normal 2o year olds...the last line,kids who exercise too young tend to stop growing ...

[Kuhlerblynd]

Punches- CBK
Flow- CBK
Wordplay- CBK
Multis- CBK
Enjoyment- CBK
Personals- CBK
Overall- CBK


A cat sweep IMO. I have seen both of u come more correct though... Keep battling!

[Enlightend]

i agree on the cat sweep to cbk he had a all around better verse but he really came nice on the first couple of bars, i see flashes of serious elevation, then get disappointed by run on mutie bars with no real punch or lyrical content...

Jsteel... i feel like u need to step up man you have been battling now for a while and ur still coming with the same shit... u either try to hard to drop complex stuff and it comes out badly worded and stretched or you come so simplistic it comes off as played or lame....

anyways vote cbk

[Jsteel]

I guess topical is my thing...aint talented text battler

upping for votes

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[KING RUM12]

both came with decent verses but to both battlers u shud kill any type of self hype shit, its a battle...u hv to constantly stab ur opponent shoot ur opponent kill ur opponent punch ur a opponent spit on ur opponent ...save the: I this and i'll that for the written shit...

this battle for me is hard to explain or call so you can count my vote or not...both to me had the same amount of consistency..

Punches-Tie

Flow-Tie

Creativity-Tie

Multies-CBK

Entertaiment-I just enjoyed CBK's more

vote:CBK

[JDR]

3-0 KO for CBK

Battle locked & records updated