88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green (88SkyLink wins KO)

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88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green (88SkyLink wins KO)

Post by 88SkyLink »

! House Rules !

5 bars/10 lines
Due Tomorrow

Consider this my check ...

-- Fri Oct 28, 2011 7:11 am --

Yo .. its 10pm over here in london, so I will certainly post my verse before tommorow night
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:: Leeroi Green :: 4-0
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Re: 88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green

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Check cool I will post in bout 13 hours from.........now!

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Re: 88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green

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Will edit vote$ here
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Re: 88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green

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Here's my drop, Good luck Green..
Guess who's back-Green, the dude who be running this like Track-Teams
the same guy who's gonna hang L.G. like mounted Flat-Screens

Got 'Green on my hand' like 'I got me-some-cash', you produce 'weak shit' like the 'sloppiest-ass'
This battles ya worst and possibly-last, cuz Bitch, this is '88SL', I'm known for 'bodying-trash'

My punches are martial arts, cuz I'll put the (bruce) 'bruise'-in-'Lee', it aint no surpise that you're losing G Just by choosing me
Only time 'Green gets laid on' is when a kids at a park crying cuz he bruised his knee

This Bitch lost nearly half his battles, by spitting the most inappropriate of rhymes
Add another L by leaving 'Green on the wall', call that a 'foliage design'

When I enforce the rhymes, I'll have Green isolated dead like an abandoned tree
Bitch I 'endorse demise', so after we're on the 'set', I'll put a 'Brand-on-Lee' (Brandon Lee)
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[center]BodyBagged
:: Catastrophe :: 3-0
:: Jayzon_Black :: 4-0
:: Leeroi Green :: 4-0
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[center]Lost to
:: Enlightend :: 4-1[/center]


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Re: 88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green

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I get sick of these lame guys with the same lines gay right?
Cus you are definately ass and that says 88's k-y

Before you cross me fag You get pineapple xpress coffee slapped and body bagged
But I hate waste so if Ate 8 would that make me a copy cat

I'll Poke this geek in his eye and choke link till he dies
with no breathe how you gonna use the Ocarina of time

I beat the shit outta you til ya eyes is swelled shut
For 12 months the only thing link ever gets iz "L" duh


Crazy face me I could drop a lyrical nuke and irradiate link
But all I needs this .44 to make a kyl vanish and an 88 sink

Easy

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Re: 88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green

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Nice drop .. Uppin for votes
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:: Jayzon_Black :: 4-0
:: Leeroi Green :: 4-0
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Re: 88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green

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Punches: SL
Multies: LG
Personals: SL
Flow: SL
Overall: SL

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Re: 88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green

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^ NO ^


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Re: 88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green

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Punches: 88, just had more bite line by line
Multies: LG, pretty clear
Personals: I liked the whole Zelda shit LG, that was dope, but 88 just had more name drops and straight personal plays, so I have to go with that. 88.
Flow: this was hard. They're both a little choppy in places, but still work well, however, as a matter of preference, I liked 88's better
Overall: Definitely a good read, and a good battle, definitely not a landslide, but I gotta go with 88.

-- Fri Oct 28, 2011 1:11 pm --

that's assuming I'm allowed a vote. nocount it if you need to, I know I'm new.
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Re: 88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green

Post by Defiance »

punches- sky
creativity-sky
flow-Leeroi
metas-sky
enjoyment-sky

Vote goes to sky


just a more thought of verse
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Re: 88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green

Post by ahmedkerim »

Battle was pretty good imho
i enjoyed reading both side's bars, LG kept a steady flow which was easier to follow but i enjoyed 88's flow more, felt more at home to me

Punchline wise, 88's shit was more complex *points at foliage design line* than LG's and had more umph to it, lol
LG's hottest bar was the Ocarina of time bar, build up was crucial and the punch delivered was sick
but i'd have to say i enjoyed 88's verse more
Nameplay and Personals both have to go to 88, his personals hurt more in my opinion
Multies have to go to 88, cos as much as i'd like to say it's a tie, 88's multies were on point, just when the line's about to start flowing off he comes in with another multi that doesn't mess up his subject matter and at the same time fixes up the parts where the flow starts falling off

Overall : 88SkyLink
this might seem like a one sided battle from this vote, but it isn't, it wasn't the closest of battles but both sides were pretty dope
actually took me a second read to find the umph in LG's verse but i enjoyed it much more the second time i read it.

Good battle people.
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Re: 88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green

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88skylink

Guess who's back-Green, the dude who be running this like Track-Teams
the same guy who's gonna hang L.G. like mounted Flat-Screens

first lnie is played, but the second was good nice name play 3/5

Got 'Green on my hand' like 'I got me-some-cash', you produce 'weak shit' like the 'sloppiest-ass'
This battles ya worst and possibly-last, cuz Bitch, this is '88SL', I'm known for 'bodying-trash'

name play was ok, shit punches are way over used again second line was better still only ok though 2/5

My punches are martial arts, cuz I'll put the (bruce) 'bruise'-in-'Lee', it aint no surpise that you're losing G Just by choosing me
Only time 'Green gets laid on' is when a kids at a park crying cuz he bruised his knees

wordplay was good, but then u added too much filler imo, then the second line could have been hard hitting but it was worded badly and streched 2/5

This Bitch lost nearly half his battles, by spitting the most inappropriate of rhymes
Add another L by leaving 'Green on the wall', call that a 'foliage design'

i liked this bar all the way through good set up good punch 4/5

When I enforce the rhymes, I'll have Green isolated dead like an abandoned tree
Bitch I 'endorse demise', so after we're on the 'set', I'll put a 'Brand-on-Lee' (Brandon Lee)

as a closer i didnt think this was a good bar the concept was ok but it just didnt hit 1/5

total 12/25



Leeroi Green

I get sick of these lame guys with the same lines gay right?
Cus you are definately ass and that says 88's k-y

this was just ok, namply was there but not very hard hitting and y and right dont rhyme very well 2/5

Before you cross me fag You get pineapple xpress coffee slapped and body bagged
But I hate waste so if Ate 8 would that make me a copy cat

ok punch worded wierd but i got the point 1/5

I'll Poke this geek in his eye and choke link till he dies
with no breathe how you gonna use the Ocarina of time

this was a nice punch but the rhyme scheme sucked, because this shit just didnt 2/5

I beat the shit outta you til ya eyes is swelled shut
For 12 months the only thing link ever gets iz "L" duh

i wasnt feeling this at all seemed kinda like filler to me 1/5

Crazy face me I could drop a lyrical nuke and irradiate link
But all I needs this .44 to make a kyl vanish and an 88 sink

this was ok but the whole thing just seemed forced 2/5

total 8/25


so all in all 88skylink gets it based on better punches rhyme scheme and nameplay

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Re: 88SkyLink vs Leeroi Green

Post by Alvin »

88 wins KO

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