P_A vs Mic s
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P_A vs Mic s
6 bars due date is whenever u can drop mis s can take it first
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Re: P_A vs Mic s
checkin-in.. just saw this so ill drop in a few hours or so...
-- Tue Oct 18, 2011 12:00 am --
sorry forgot.. so i just did a quick six
plague_arsonist??? <wtf really?
I don't see you as sick and you definitely aint fire!
I guess "YOUR MOM" got fucked 2 hard and you came out a liar (his avatar)
Bitch wants me to drop first, like we having a shitting contest
How he expect to win, when he's 200% ahead of his own wins in losses!
get lost quick, before i have ya body dumped in PA!
you couldnt be important if you were a freeway
Look you got KO'ed 3 times, straight bodied and bagged!
So you know your making a mistake, like your mommy and dad! (think)
Fag! i'll beat you like a red headed step child
cuz i bet your parents got you everthing, except style!
I got this on "lock"! And I feel bad that you suck
even your computer knows your weak cuz of the "keys" that you touch!!!
-- Tue Oct 18, 2011 12:00 am --
sorry forgot.. so i just did a quick six
plague_arsonist??? <wtf really?
I don't see you as sick and you definitely aint fire!
I guess "YOUR MOM" got fucked 2 hard and you came out a liar (his avatar)
Bitch wants me to drop first, like we having a shitting contest
How he expect to win, when he's 200% ahead of his own wins in losses!
get lost quick, before i have ya body dumped in PA!
you couldnt be important if you were a freeway
Look you got KO'ed 3 times, straight bodied and bagged!
So you know your making a mistake, like your mommy and dad! (think)
Fag! i'll beat you like a red headed step child
cuz i bet your parents got you everthing, except style!
I got this on "lock"! And I feel bad that you suck
even your computer knows your weak cuz of the "keys" that you touch!!!
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Re: P_A vs Mic s
sorry for the wait internet connection was on the fritz
you like the type of bitch who cries if hes outmatched and throws a fit/
nooo u look like a pedophile who rides in a van with the word free candy written with chalk on the side thinkin that looks legit
the shotty will put a HOLE thru you and the GROUND we call it get WELL (think)/
im king koopa to me he a little troopa cuz im givin his back a shell
Swing at me? This bitch gotta be BLIND, DEAF AND DUMB he "Got a long way to go" like HIGHWAYS AND NUNS!! /
You finna REP YOUR MIC GAME CHUMP? Imma "Stare Master" ya face so you can STEP YOUR LIFE GAME UP /
I hope you embraced the moment Of sittin proud in ya thron boy
ill put the chrome to his dome, but I ain't 'stealin from a friend' when I take the CROWN From A HOMEBOY!
u are 23 doing a internet battling league seriously in ur case thats a FUCKING DISGRACE/
if im 23 and still battling online with my keyboard fucking stab me in the face
ur to weak and feeble underestimated my skills so ill make u fear my drops
gettin doctored by plague will always leave a dead mic....R.I.P king of pop
you like the type of bitch who cries if hes outmatched and throws a fit/
nooo u look like a pedophile who rides in a van with the word free candy written with chalk on the side thinkin that looks legit
the shotty will put a HOLE thru you and the GROUND we call it get WELL (think)/
im king koopa to me he a little troopa cuz im givin his back a shell
Swing at me? This bitch gotta be BLIND, DEAF AND DUMB he "Got a long way to go" like HIGHWAYS AND NUNS!! /
You finna REP YOUR MIC GAME CHUMP? Imma "Stare Master" ya face so you can STEP YOUR LIFE GAME UP /
I hope you embraced the moment Of sittin proud in ya thron boy
ill put the chrome to his dome, but I ain't 'stealin from a friend' when I take the CROWN From A HOMEBOY!
u are 23 doing a internet battling league seriously in ur case thats a FUCKING DISGRACE/
if im 23 and still battling online with my keyboard fucking stab me in the face
ur to weak and feeble underestimated my skills so ill make u fear my drops
gettin doctored by plague will always leave a dead mic....R.I.P king of pop
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Re: P_A vs Mic s
Well, Mic S get my vote. He started off stronger than he ended, the whole mistake child, and red head is rather played. But all together not a bad drop at all, i was a bit surprised.
As for PA. Man, its like two different writers. Your first bar in comparison to your 3rd, writing style, rhyme scheme, everything switched. Erno man, although you had those couple bars, it wasnt enough.
As for PA. Man, its like two different writers. Your first bar in comparison to your 3rd, writing style, rhyme scheme, everything switched. Erno man, although you had those couple bars, it wasnt enough.
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Re: P_A vs Mic s
wow this was a let down of a battle pretty disappointed at both you... vote goes to mic s
both your punches were weak name play was weak and no personals at all the avatar thing mic said was lame.... only thing that really won this for mic s was the fact his flowed... both need to elevate a bit so keep on battling and see you guys get better....
both your punches were weak name play was weak and no personals at all the avatar thing mic said was lame.... only thing that really won this for mic s was the fact his flowed... both need to elevate a bit so keep on battling and see you guys get better....
Re: P_A vs Mic s
Eh Mic S takes this one cause he had a couple decent punches (making a mistake, 200%). PA was making attempts but reaching too far. That hole/ground/well line, yeah I see the connection but the punch was just pointless and didn't come off as witty/offensive or anything. What's the point of making random wordplays like that in a battle ? Just because it's a wordplay doesn't mean it's gonna give you any kind of advantage. No wordplay at all > bad wordplay. Pedo punches involving vans are played, dead mic/Michael Jackson punches have been done to death and the rest of the punches were more like punchline-attempts. No hate man just giving you information that can help you win battles in future.
Mic S you had like one or two personals and a couple of somewhat effective punches and that made the difference. The rest of your verse was filler and had no personal element. You're getting my vote because you edged every category like personals, punches, flow, rhymes and your verse was less all over the place and confusing. I'd definitely work on using less filler, strengthening your punches and coming more aggressive on the personal tip.
3-0 Mic S wins.
Mic S you had like one or two personals and a couple of somewhat effective punches and that made the difference. The rest of your verse was filler and had no personal element. You're getting my vote because you edged every category like personals, punches, flow, rhymes and your verse was less all over the place and confusing. I'd definitely work on using less filler, strengthening your punches and coming more aggressive on the personal tip.
3-0 Mic S wins.
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