Arvincible vs Comeback Kid (ARV wins KO)

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Arvincible vs Comeback Kid (ARV wins KO)

Post by Arvincible »

5 bars
no biting recycling or flipping

cats are

punches
personals
flow

due 2 days after check in

gl this is my check in
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Re: Arvincible vs Comeback Kid

Post by CBK »

check!

-- Wed Sep 14, 2011 12:44 am --

If you think you got me figured out bitch your brain is smaller than the way your built,
im the type to pull a sword out an just slay you with the hilt,feel no wave of guilt, this poor ass bum eats cereal with forks just to save the milk.
i'll be hurting this prick with the force you lack,your whack how does it feel an mvp ""UNSTOPPABLE EMCEE"" losing out to a third string quarter back???.semi-"final cut" like goldust.watch this bitch fold up, he couldn't "drop hot bars" if he spilled the swag sack in a bank hold up
60 + battles ? an still you aint a true contender not a crew member, there's no crew on here desperate enough for you to enter.
lyrical homicide ,after this its gonna be a miracle if you survive
hip hops like a mountain not gonna lie, but a midget like you couldnt reach the top if the pinnacle was on the side.
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Re: Arvincible vs Comeback Kid

Post by Arvincible »

Check this..Witness the Master of this text shit, ill have ur morale shattered and rejected-
when i tell ya u are wacker than expected cuz I didn't know u were this bad till after I accepted!!

Name switched from "Comeback " to "JUST LEFT" kid..now u really need ta start actin proper!! .
Cuz my flows keep my foes threatened ur no legend but imma kill MIKE like JACKSON'S DR!!

only place people C-BK is where they ask for WHOPPERS! See what u lack i offer: skill and confidence!
facing Arv? ur not filled with common sense!! cuz ill have "back down" and make em kneel to dominance!!

Wack cats im killin all of em! I read your scripts and all i see is stacked shit lines
that lack sick lines... And after I spit Mike would think twice and he aint comin back this time!!

Tryna be a man he's not..just went to learn that talent cant be taught..this joke is worthless!!
now he's choked and nervous.. cuz we know dude submits to Males like a fuckin postal service!!! **



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comeback kid - Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:32 am
im already better than alvin ........ but i submit to you
3rd String QB - Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:31 am
if he submits to me...I think I can make him better than Alvin
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Re: Arvincible vs Comeback Kid

Post by FlipSide »

Ok it is obvious who wins this battle. Vote ARV-

Comeback Kid- You have lack of structure and creativity. U can use Arvs verse to learn off of. He set up and hit with every bar. He did not go too hard on you though. I did laugh at the cereal with a fork to save milk line. Shit was funny but not set up right. Personals were misses too. Try to do a little research on the person you are battling before you write. Any ways. Arv wins on all cats.
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Re: Arvincible vs Comeback Kid

Post by Blake Downs »

a very one sided battle,comeback kid you had terrible structure and bars,
i think arvincible got all categories,
MVGT ARV

-- Thu Sep 15, 2011 6:26 pm --

punches,arv
personals,arv
flow,arv
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Re: Arvincible vs Comeback Kid

Post by Sir Kevin O Shea »

Punches: Arv
Personals: Arv
Flow: Arv
Enjoyment: Arv

Vote: Arv

This wasn't a close battle, Arv is a much better writer and it shows.
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Re: Arvincible vs Comeback Kid

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ARV wins KO
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