Proverb vs Baron Enders (Baron WIns ko)

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Proverb vs Baron Enders (Baron WIns ko)

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Re: Proverb vs Baron Enders

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Keep comments to yourself cause I heard enough chatter,
hang you by ya throat wit a rope soaked in venom of a Puff Adder

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C'mon, This dudes no verb pro, 64 posts shows his words go into WHO GIVES A FUCK LAND
Crush where this herb grows, keep him like nerds stowed with his NUTS TUCKED IN HIS HANDS

STUFFED BY HIS MANS' he still wants some beef?!?! like he's obese, straight adDICKted to meat
admit your weak! I'm taking the dub, faster than we throw your books in the street!!

I'm a beast on a beat, this fortune cookies wet on his knees, I'm SICK, your FUCKING PATHETIC!
your careers like your name, sure we like some here and there, but we'll be QUICK TO FORGET IT
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Re: Proverb vs Baron Enders

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since i basically no showed on this ill keystyle a verse

i leave fags gashed and slashed more than jack the ripper/
i looked you up and this kids a child molester...repeat offender/
hatin on my shit well dont gloat on ya 48 posts/
cause half that shit was a hoax or more transparent than a ghost/
come on dog so get up im the baron this a stick up stick up/
before i ender i enter then cut up like this was nip tuck nip tuck/
Keep comments to yourself cause I heard enough chatter,
hang you by ya throat wit a rope soaked in venom of a Puff Adder

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Re: Proverb vs Baron Enders

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C'mon, This dudes no verb pro, 64 posts shows his words go into WHO GIVES A FUCK LAND
Crush where this herb grows, keep him like nerds stowed with his NUTS TUCKED IN HIS HANDS
(you had ok multies,punch was ok-ish,it could have been better,)

STUFFED BY HIS MANS' he still wants some beef?!?! like he's obese, straight adDICKted to meat
admit your weak! I'm taking the dub, faster than we throw your books in the street!!
(flow was ok-ishh,the punch was a bit off to me,not really efective....)

I'm a beast on a beat, this fortune cookies wet on his knees, I'm SICK, your FUCKING PATHETIC!
your careers like your name, sure we like some here and there, but we'll be QUICK TO FORGET IT
(flow was okish,the punch was ok-ish wasnt too strong,maybe your best attempt here...)


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i leave fags gashed and slashed more than jack the ripper/
i looked you up and this kids a child molester...repeat offender/
(flow was ok,punch was decent,personal was decent)

hatin on my shit well dont gloat on ya 48 posts/
cause half that shit was a hoax or more transparent than a ghost/
(ok flow,not a bad punch either,)

come on dog so get up im the baron this a stick up stick up/
before i ender i enter then cut up like this was nip tuck nip tuck/
(decent multies,ok nameplay,punch was decent,decent ender)

this was an enjoyable battle,both had punches,not much nameplay except for proverbs closing bar,this was a close battle,as far as multies i say its a tie,and flow wise its a tie,but i think proverb had more punches,personals,and overralll enjoyment ,it seems both have been stepping up though good battle,keep progressing
MVGT Proverb

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Re: Proverb vs Baron Enders

Post by Enlightend »

I couldn't possibly disagree more with Blake's vote...

Enders came with clever punches with decent wordplay nameplay... like usual good flow and rhyme scheme...

Proverb had a ok first bar... but it really wasn't very clever and the rest of ur bars were boring simple remarks instead no real hits IMO...

Anyways Mvgt...... baron enders.
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Re: Proverb vs Baron Enders

Post by jayzon_black »

I'll be the one to point out the flip of the post comment in pro's second bar. Clever, but a kickback to baron's first bar. Outside of that here are the cat breakdowns:

Flow: I'm giving this one to Proverb, it just read and flowed with more balance

Multies: Baron, the multies were there and plentiful

Personals: Baron, I liked the couple of drops that proverb had, but baron was more consistent

Punches: Baron, for the same reason as personals.

Overall: MVGT Baron. Good battle folks, Pro, I really liked the keystyle, but Baron took this one in my eyes.
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Re: Proverb vs Baron Enders

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BARON

C'mon, This dudes no verb pro, 64 posts shows his words go into WHO GIVES A FUCK LAND
Crush where this herb grows, keep him like nerds stowed with his NUTS TUCKED IN HIS HANDS

8/10 nice set up but the punch didnt hit as hard

STUFFED BY HIS MANS' he still wants some beef?!?! like he's obese, straight adDICKted to meat
admit your weak! I'm taking the dub, faster than we throw your books in the street!!

9/10 nice punch but the flow was off for me

I'm a beast on a beat, this fortune cookies wet on his knees, I'm SICK, your FUCKING PATHETIC!
your careers like your name, sure we like some here and there, but we'll be QUICK TO FORGET IT

6/10 good multies but not a good closer


PROVERB

i leave fags gashed and slashed more than jack the ripper/
i looked you up and this kids a child molester...repeat offender/

7/10 good opener would have been good but didnt rhyme

hatin on my shit well dont gloat on ya 48 posts/
cause half that shit was a hoax or more transparent than a ghost/

9/10 the flow was on point but the personal was wrong he has 51 posts not 48

come on dog so get up im the baron this a stick up stick up/
before i ender i enter then cut up like this was nip tuck nip tuck/

8/10 decent closer but the double stick up and nip tuck messed the flow up

BARON-23/30
PROVERB-24/30

MVGT-PROVERB. this was a close battle

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Re: Proverb vs Baron Enders

Post by Sir Kevin O Shea »

Fish?

Punches: Baron, I feel like he is the only one who really tried to use any real punches.

Flow: Pro, due to shorter bars.

Personals: Baron's personals are better stated.

Enjoyment: Baron, his verse is the kind of verse you write for a match up, while Pro's seemed too relaxed.

Vote: Baron
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Re: Proverb vs Baron Enders

Post by Loon E Lou »

Mvgt baron

Flow-Moneymaker. His period jus flowed heavier.

Personals- baron

Punches- baron

And this is probably the most legit vote........ Sad

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Re: Proverb vs Baron Enders

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Punches:Baron
Flow:MM
Personals:Baron
Enjoyment:both
originality:Baron

overall: baron

def. enjoyed this battle..big ups to both mc's def. doing their thing and going in..it was a short battle, hoping to see more in the future..good shit ya'll

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Re: Proverb vs Baron Enders

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Baron Wins

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