Proverb<vs>The Dark Prince (Proverb Wins 3-0 KO)

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Proverb<vs>The Dark Prince (Proverb Wins 3-0 KO)

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4 bars due 48 hrs after check house rules yo
Keep comments to yourself cause I heard enough chatter,
hang you by ya throat wit a rope soaked in venom of a Puff Adder

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Re: Proverb<vs>Tha Dark Prince

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mic check 1, 2

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-- Thu Aug 25, 2011 3:28 pm --

Wastin clips in ya yard that'll hitcha so hard it'll rip ya apart, split cha in parts, shit on ya bars that cha did with ya heart coz i'm the ace here boy n you're just 'dis-card'

''He who fucks with tha dark prince shall perish''
now how's that Proverb?
Have you slaughtered, set fire to this fool that's how I torch 'verb


so you been strugglin since an infant n treated different but lemme tell ya it wasn't coz ya lacked the riches, you prolly read proverbs to help the fact that ya lack the inches ta be havin bitches..

even your lyrics is homo coz ye can't even rhyme straight, you a small fry mate so there's no point in arguin that this is my win you're not even debate.. (the bait)


*links should explain everything

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Re: Proverb<vs>The Dark Prince

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they call me proverb cause i spit them biblical scriptures/
your lines are fucked up dog just like michael j fox's signature/
The only reason you attacked me is cuz im a huge threat/
The last time i heard you say a good line.. well i havent heard one yet/
come on dude With no IQ, cause its clear I dont like you/
I'm covering my ass cause God knows what you might do/
I got no slight clue, but I have heard that you were behind bars/
Probably cause you wanted Rockets in Uranus until we find Mars/
Keep comments to yourself cause I heard enough chatter,
hang you by ya throat wit a rope soaked in venom of a Puff Adder

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Re: Proverb<vs>The Dark Prince

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not bad yall,i enjoyed this battle,

Wastin clips in ya yard that'll hitcha so hard it'll rip ya apart, split cha in parts, shit on ya bars that cha did with ya heart coz i'm the ace here boy n you're just 'dis-card'
(multies were decent,the punch was ight)

''He who fucks with tha dark prince shall perish''
now how's that Proverb?
Have you slaughtered, set fire to this fool that's how I torch 'verb
(flow was ok-ishh,not as good as the previous bars flow,the punch was ok)

so you been strugglin since an infant n treated different but lemme tell ya it wasn't coz ya lacked the riches, you prolly read proverbs to help the fact that ya lack the inches ta be havin bitches..
(the flow was ok,nameflip was ok-ish,the punch was ight,not the strongest,)

even your lyrics is homo coz ye can't even rhyme straight, you a small fry mate so there's no point in arguin that this is my win you're not even debate.. (the bait)
(the flow was ok,the ender might have been your weakest bar in the battle,the wordplay was ok-ish,it could have been worded better,the punch just didnt connect for me)

vs

they call me proverb cause i spit them biblical scriptures/
your lines are fucked up dog just like michael j fox's signature/
(the flow was ok-ishh,the wordplay was ight,the personal was ok,and the punch was decent,)

The only reason you attacked me is cuz im a huge threat/
The last time i heard you say a good line.. well i havent heard one yet/
(the flow was ok,as a personal,this was ok-ishhh,the punch was ok-ish)

come on dude With no IQ, cause its clear I dont like you/
I'm covering my ass cause God knows what you might do/
(decent multies,it'd be nice to see use those more,and the punch was ok)

I got no slight clue, but I have heard that you were behind bars/
Probably cause you wanted Rockets in Uranus until we find Mars/
(decent multies,the wordplay was decent,and the punch was decent,i thought this ender was better)

so this battle was ight,as far as who had flows i think it was a Tie,yall both were consistent with rhyming,now with the Multies i think darkprince took that just with his first bar,multies left and right,he uses a fewmore,yall also tied with wordplay,though there really wasnt much wordplay i'd like to see more wordplay,i think there could have been more personals but i'll have to give personals to proverb with that first bar and the fucked up dog,michael j fox signature line,as far as nameplay ,the darkprince takes that though to be honest the nameplay is this battle was a little weak there wasnt any nameplay,as far as the battle verse structure i think proverb got that his verse structure is always on point,and the punches were real neck and neck but im going to give that to proverb i thought the first bar was probably a tie,darkprince had a better second bar,3rd and 4th bar id give to proverb still a nice battle,cant wait too see more from both of you
MVGT Proverb

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Re: Proverb<vs>The Dark Prince

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This battle was actually entertaining, flows from both sides so I'm going to give it a tie, I felt like that DarkPrince has the Multies covered, I prefered Proverb's structure than DarkPrince, as for the wordplay... there wasn't much that I could see unless I missed it out so thats a tie, both punchlines were alright but Proverb's punchlines beat DarkPrince by one line that I felt that I enjoyed was the first bar, I just love seeing people using famous people, quotes, normally people mess them up but that one was actually quite decent, nameplay would go to DarkPrince because I felt that here mentioned more of the nameplay, that punchline that Proverb made on the first opening sumed up the personals for me so Proverb gets the personals, overall it was a close battle so MVGT..

Flow-Tie
Multies-DarkPrince
Structure-Proverb
Wordplay-Tie
Punchlines-Proverb
Nameplay-DarkPrince
Personals-Proverb

MVGT-Proverb
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"my crimes are so unreal, I rob leaders sneakers, stay on them like I'm perfume,
my rhymes are so real, they pop out the of speakers, and walk around the room," - Kulture :D

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Re: Proverb<vs>The Dark Prince

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Keep comments to yourself cause I heard enough chatter,
hang you by ya throat wit a rope soaked in venom of a Puff Adder

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Re: Proverb<vs>The Dark Prince

Post by plague_arsonist »

ok my more legit vote


Wastin clips in ya yard that'll hitcha so hard it'll rip ya apart, split cha in parts, shit on ya bars that cha did with ya heart coz i'm the ace here boy n you're just 'dis-card'(multis ok ish punches a badly worded but i see where u were goin)

''He who fucks with tha dark prince shall perish''
now how's that Proverb?
Have you slaughtered, set fire to this fool that's how I torch 'verb
(fail cuzz there was really no punch and u rhymed verb with verb not very creative imo)


so you been strugglin since an infant n treated different but lemme tell ya it wasn't coz ya lacked the riches, you prolly read proverbs to help the fact that ya lack the inches ta be havin bitches..(funny multi and personals swagg i liked)

even your lyrics is homo coz ye can't even rhyme straight, you a small fry mate so there's no point in arguin that this is my win you're not even debate.. (the bait) (i get where u wanted to go but u didnt set up your punch for it to have meaning so it was kinda a useless one)


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they call me proverb cause i spit them biblical scriptures/
your lines are fucked up dog just like michael j fox's signature/
(nicee pretty good punch )

The only reason you attacked me is cuz im a huge threat/
The last time i heard you say a good line.. well i havent heard one yet/
(personal and funny reason i liked this punch)

come on dude With no IQ, cause its clear I dont like you/
I'm covering my ass cause God knows what you might do/
(also nice again its disrespectful and creative use of that phrase)

I got no slight clue, but I have heard that you were behind bars/
Probably cause you wanted Rockets in Uranus until we find Mars/
(nice closer good word play and all)

mvgt proverb

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Re: Proverb<vs>The Dark Prince

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Proverb Wins 3-0 KO

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