Blake Downs -vs- Jayzon Black (Blake Wins 3-0 KO)

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Blake Downs -vs- Jayzon Black (Blake Wins 3-0 KO)

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4 bars due in 2 hours from this post..

-- Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:37 pm --

so ur gonna try and battle me,thats dumber than playin the carter
you arranged that name with a Z,to remind us that the real Jason is smarter
then you do something you call music while we snooze,
ur raps get stepped on more than shoes,even if you show, you'll lose
i know you can remember,ive conquered what makes you shiver more than rivers in december
ur flows couldnt be cold if you was pissin all winter
my blades on ur mom like a splinter,i enter,i been in her,i mixed her up like a blender
we've never met,and as far as guys jayzon touches more balls than any center
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Re: Blake Downs -vs- Jayzon Black 4 bars 2 hours

Post by jayzon_black »

8:05pm system time is the due date as per the challenge rules. Consider this my check.

What you coming wit? Either "burning jay" or racial shit
Well I got ya facial shit, learning ways to straight deface ya bitch

I toss the first round, second go i fuckin clowned you
Losses surround dude, and you know he suckin down dudes

Look around dude anagrams call him winning "Bleak"
I'd rather catch him miming his lyrics than have to hear him speak

And when I cut a track ya boy Black be throwing beat downs
You winning ha, I laugh at silly shit you know my heat clown

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post1 ... ml#p179567
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post1 ... ml#p179547

-- Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:10 pm --

Unlike this clown I actually have a life, a wife, and kids to tend to. So the drop took some extra time to post, plus you don't even have ya links dude.
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Re: Blake Downs -vs- Jayzon Black

Post by Proverb »

first off good battle i enjoyed it read it over a couple times that bein said im high so ill make it simple

flow=close kinda similar ima give it to j just felt it a lil more
punches=blake just threw more and felt liked they hit harder
nameplay=blake, i think j said his name more than he said his
enjoyment=blake liked em both but
i know you can remember,ive conquered what makes you shiver more than rivers in december
ur flows couldnt be cold if you was pissin all winter
that line set it off
mvgt=blake
both you keep em comin tho i enjoyed this one
Keep comments to yourself cause I heard enough chatter,
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Re: Blake Downs -vs- Jayzon Black

Post by Tha Dark Prince »

Punches go to blake he just had better and harder ones
flow is tied, both had simple structures n similar flows
personals are tied too both didn't have much really just one attack on the names each
multis go to jayzon there wern't much in this battle but jay had a few and within a cleaner structure
enjoyment is blakes, i felt jayzon didn't come as strong as he normally would and blake had some funny creative shit here n there

decent battle..

MVGT: Blake Downs

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Re: Blake Downs -vs- Jayzon Black

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Re: Blake Downs -vs- Jayzon Black

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Blake Downs wrote:4 bars due in 2 hours from this post..

-- Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:37 pm --

so ur gonna try and battle me,thats dumber than playin the carter
you arranged that name with a Z,to remind us that the real Jason is smarter
Nice multies N nameplay here.

then you do something you call music while we snooze,
ur raps get stepped on more than shoes,even if you show, you'll lose
not bad.. but could be more better

i know you can remember,ive conquered what makes you shiver more than rivers in december
ur flows couldnt be cold if you was pissin all winter
the 2nd line kill it...

my blades on ur mom like a splinter,i enter,i been in her,i mixed her up like a blender
we've never met,and as far as guys jayzon touches more balls than any center
Not bad.. but could be more harder.
-- Fri Aug 26, 2011 4:41 pm --
jayzon_black wrote:8:05pm system time is the due date as per the challenge rules. Consider this my check.

What you coming wit? Either "burning jay" or racial shit
Well I got ya facial shit, learning ways to straight deface ya bitch
not bad.. nice opener

I toss the first round, second go i fuckin clowned you
Losses surround dude, and you know he suckin down dudes
multies was iight...

Look around dude anagrams call him winning "Bleak"
I'd rather catch him miming his lyrics than have to hear him speak
wow...I'd rather catch him miming his lyrics than have to hear him speak.. me like this one LOL

And when I cut a track ya boy Black be throwing beat downs
You winning ha, I laugh at silly shit you know my heat clown
multies was iight.. no hard punch

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post1 ... ml#p179567
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post1 ... ml#p179547

-- Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:10 pm --

Unlike this clown I actually have a life, a wife, and kids to tend to. So the drop took some extra time to post, plus you don't even have ya links dude.

Enjoyment- BK
Flow- JB

Nice drop guys ..MVGT -BK
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Re: Blake Downs -vs- Jayzon Black

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Blake Wins 3-0 KO

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