Thu Hem -VS- Xpliss (Xpliss Wins 3-0 KO)

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Thu Hem -VS- Xpliss (Xpliss Wins 3-0 KO)

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Re: Thu Hem -VS- Xpliss

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Check...
-No feeding, flipping, biting or recycling.
-First to 5 votes wins, 3-0=K.O. (4-1=T.K.O.)
-Deadline is 48 hours after battle is set up.
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/prove ... 23679.html
I will edit this with my votes...
And please be sure to post your xplained votes...

-- Mon Aug 22, 2011 10:01 am --

Seems you take so many punches it started swellin ya lips
No surprise you changed your name once you developed a lisp*
I spit the shit that makes your 6th loss, my 2nd win
the only time you ever spit is when you giving some neck and chin
ya know after the seed is dispersed in the back of ya throat
Don't you dare come at me with a verse as wack as ya vote*
skim through all your books, use some shit that we'll like reading
but when I'm through wiTH U it will be more then ya mic bleeding
I don't see why you actin nice~ and giving wack advice
This is xpliss bringing closure to "the living sacrifice"

* his name was 2 em and he changed it to thu hem
Well keep it up both of ya... this aint the best battle though

MVGT- P.A
This was his wack vote on my battle vs. plague arsonist
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Re: Thu Hem -VS- Xpliss

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X you spit wacky shit , in the sense that your tongue despise you
Even If your skull is restricted my punchlines will drive through
You’ll get more knuckles visiting your jaw than profile view
Bitch all the blows you launched hit me less, not to talk of few
Even though you’ve grown grey on the site .. you’ll get slept on than bunk
X.. please admit your a punk, with you no dude will get on a song
Your lyrical tactics is wack faggit you needa lot of practice
Mind collaborate with bad habit, more like am blind to know who this cat is
I’ll have your face colliding with concrete punches till ya lower jaw drop
Your fuckin retard son with no DNA proof, it’s obvious in the text you drop




http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/blake ... ml#p179765
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Re: Thu Hem -VS- Xpliss

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Seems you take so many punches it started swellin ya lips
No surprise you changed your name once you developed a lisp*
(decent multies,decent personal,ok punch)

I spit the shit that makes your 6th loss, my 2nd win
the only time you ever spit is when you giving some neck and chin
(decent multies,the punch was ok)

ya know after the seed is dispersed in the back of ya throat
Don't you dare come at me with a verse as wack as ya vote*
(decent multies,ok wordplay,ok personal,ok punch)

skim through all your books, use some shit that we'll like reading
but when I'm through wiTH U it will be more then ya mic bleeding
(decent multies,a bit personal,and nameplay,the punch was ok)

I don't see why you actin nice~ and giving wack advice
This is xpliss bringing closure to "the living sacrifice"

(i liked this ender it was ight,decent personal,ight punch)

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X you spit wacky shit , in the sense that your tongue despise you
Even If your skull is restricted my punchlines will drive through
(decent multies,decent punch)

You’ll get more knuckles visiting your jaw than profile view
Bitch all the blows you launched hit me less, not to talk of few
(flow was ok,punch was decent)

Even though you’ve grown grey on the site .. you’ll get slept on than bunk
X.. please admit your a punk, with you no dude will get on a song
(ok flow,ok punch)

Your lyrical tactics is wack faggit you needa lot of practice
Mind collaborate with bad habit, more like am blind to know who this cat is
(decent multies,not a strong punch)

I’ll have your face colliding with concrete punches till ya lower jaw drop
Your fuckin retard son with no DNA proof, it’s obvious in the text you drop
(i hate that lazy rhyme this with this word shit,i liked the other ender better)

this was a very close decision,both found consistency at times,both had some misses,both emcees had multies i think xpliss took that and the flow catagory, xpliss was also more personal,along with a little wordplay,i didnt really see much NAMEPLAY from either of you though,more wordplay could be used of course,the personals werent too great but he had personal attempts,but i did enjoy both verses,i say too both emcees keep dropping the verses,and keep elevating!

MVGT Xpliss

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Re: Thu Hem -VS- Xpliss

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mvgt xpliss mostly because hem had a bunch of filler lines to waste space

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Re: Thu Hem -VS- Xpliss

Post by Arvincible »

^^ break down your vote plague!


my first time really looked through either of your verses

xpliss has a good delivery within his short lines
just enough to throw a decent punch only down side to this imo
is that you need to need to be a little more creative..none of the
punches would be hard enough to take anyone who really tried

Thu hem -your delivery seems to come up short every bar, i try to read it
in different speeds but its just not smooth. and also your end rhymes
are way too different to consider it a bar imo. for example


"Even though you’ve grown grey on the site .. you’ll get slept on than bunk
X.. please admit your a punk, with you no dude will get on a song"

idk wtf that was..song and bunk sound nothing alike..

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Re: Thu Hem -VS- Xpliss

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2-0, ty for the well explained constructive votes...

I want to appreciate the vote plague but I find it hard to believe you really read my shit considering I am calling him out on his wack ass vote.

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Re: Thu Hem -VS- Xpliss

Post by Enders »

ok, X, All together you presented a pretty nice verse. You had some nice personals, and flow was ok. i think my favorite bar is:
ya know after the seed is dispersed in the back of ya throat
Don't you dare come at me with a verse as wack as ya vote*
Overall pretty good but this personal was awesome lol.

Thu... I was a little lost by what you were saying, you seemed to be a little scattered. Kinda effected your punching abilities. I can say i fully liked any of yours enough to quote.


Saying the above, well I VOTE FOR X

-- Fri Aug 26, 2011 7:49 am --

oh yeah, 3-0 KO
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Re: Thu Hem -VS- Xpliss

Post by Proverb »

it was a good battle all in all the flows were even in my opinion like AR said Thu your slants are just a lil far off maybe you could do it in audio but not text personal gotta give it to X basically it was 1 sided towards X but keep it up THU i can tell your gettin there

MVGT X
Keep comments to yourself cause I heard enough chatter,
hang you by ya throat wit a rope soaked in venom of a Puff Adder

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Re: Thu Hem -VS- Xpliss

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Xpliss Wins 3-0 KO

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