Lance vs Blakedowns (Blake wins KO)
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Lance vs Blakedowns (Blake wins KO)
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-- Mon Jul 04, 2011 1:18 pm --
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blkedowns aka splashking,
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This battles a waste of time, your verses need some fire in there
I'm wondering who the fuck 'hand me, down'....just like the style you wear
Lets throw this up for bets ! I got no problem clowning groupies
at illestlyrcs we never back Down, and I aint talking about the movie
this a roam in the park, the one where kids are scared to be alone in the dark
imstill baffled at how we watched this faggot downshift his career without owning a car!
no other than a poser you'll be covered by a load of frowns,
I dnt need a panel of judges to know your text game has just been brokendown
this foe's average....u cant throw punches, u need ur flow managed
funny how ppl who dnt even like pokemon know that Splash did no damage
-- Mon Jul 04, 2011 1:18 pm --
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blkedowns aka splashking,
'
This battles a waste of time, your verses need some fire in there
I'm wondering who the fuck 'hand me, down'....just like the style you wear
Lets throw this up for bets ! I got no problem clowning groupies
at illestlyrcs we never back Down, and I aint talking about the movie
this a roam in the park, the one where kids are scared to be alone in the dark
imstill baffled at how we watched this faggot downshift his career without owning a car!
no other than a poser you'll be covered by a load of frowns,
I dnt need a panel of judges to know your text game has just been brokendown
this foe's average....u cant throw punches, u need ur flow managed
funny how ppl who dnt even like pokemon know that Splash did no damage
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Re: Lance vs Blakedowns
if we was brands,than let me drop the names,Im Rocky,Your Betty,
I'll adVANCE ,Taking LANCE outta the GAME now im TOMMY VERCETTI
yeah bitch i Got-Class,your DROPPED TRASH,you recite i.c.p. at-a-bar,
Gang-Bangin and After the punches your changing colors faster than your Avatar
when you see men at a WATERPARK,you want Man-Rides,youve been sit on more than any Damn-Slides!!
like its battle time,if Lance ever said he got this one,thatd be the only time i see(LANCE-Lied)
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i slang rhymes,last thing you do is spray nines,in them gay minds
you droppin faster than Landslides,NIGGA as far as Illest lyrics dicks your gettin alota HANG-TIME
Im PRO Wit FLOWs,so your SMOKED,i could say Ur close to dropped,but i suppose you stopped..
mmm...cookies..and no matter how many POSTS you DROP,to me you always be THE ROOKIE!!
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I'll adVANCE ,Taking LANCE outta the GAME now im TOMMY VERCETTI
yeah bitch i Got-Class,your DROPPED TRASH,you recite i.c.p. at-a-bar,
Gang-Bangin and After the punches your changing colors faster than your Avatar
when you see men at a WATERPARK,you want Man-Rides,youve been sit on more than any Damn-Slides!!
like its battle time,if Lance ever said he got this one,thatd be the only time i see(LANCE-Lied)
(LanceLyde)
i slang rhymes,last thing you do is spray nines,in them gay minds
you droppin faster than Landslides,NIGGA as far as Illest lyrics dicks your gettin alota HANG-TIME
Im PRO Wit FLOWs,so your SMOKED,i could say Ur close to dropped,but i suppose you stopped..
mmm...cookies..and no matter how many POSTS you DROP,to me you always be THE ROOKIE!!
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Re: Lance vs Blakedowns
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Re: Lance vs Blakedowns
Lance: I like the nameplay, you kept punching every line you dropped, only problem is that most of them were on the weaker side, it felt like you were gauging him and never really throw that knockout punch, "imstill baffled at how we watched this faggot downshift his career without owning a car!" That just seemed forced. You did kill it with, "I'm wondering who the fuck 'hand me, down'....just like the style you wear"
Blake: Got some good multis in there, I like the inlay rhymes too, "'ll adVANCE ,Taking LANCE outta the GAME now im TOMMY VERCETTI" Nice touch. The last line and a half though...completely lost me, it came almost out of nowhere. You dropped lance's name twice (three times, but two hits) that second was the strongest when you said it would be the only time you saw lancelied.
My card will have to go to BlakeDowns in this one 8-6 after ten bars.
Blake: Got some good multis in there, I like the inlay rhymes too, "'ll adVANCE ,Taking LANCE outta the GAME now im TOMMY VERCETTI" Nice touch. The last line and a half though...completely lost me, it came almost out of nowhere. You dropped lance's name twice (three times, but two hits) that second was the strongest when you said it would be the only time you saw lancelied.
My card will have to go to BlakeDowns in this one 8-6 after ten bars.
Ride out, Glide out.
Re: Lance vs Blakedowns
Pretty weak battle imo. Both need to step ya game up!
Basically both of u had hardly any hard hitting punches.. But anyway
Punches: B
Multis: B
Personals: B
Enjoyment: B
Name-play: B
Handsdown: blake
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Basically both of u had hardly any hard hitting punches.. But anyway
Punches: B
Multis: B
Personals: B
Enjoyment: B
Name-play: B
Handsdown: blake
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Re: Lance vs Blakedowns
2-0 , bumpin for votes
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Re: Lance vs Blakedowns
Yo both were weak overall, but IMO it was a cat sweep to blakedowns, both needta step it up a bit.
I liked both structures tho.
Mvgt BD
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I liked both structures tho.
Mvgt BD
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Re: Lance vs Blakedowns
Is this a test battle sorry for free posting but its dudes 1st battle and Blake is on # 30
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Re: Lance vs Blakedowns
Wordplay - bd
Nameplay - bd
Structure - bd
Similies/metas - bd
Enjoyment - bd
Overall mvgt bd
This battle was overall weak, bd you could've definitly came much harder...lance for a first battle you did pretty well, you have the basic idea so now work on all aspects of your writing and you will be pretty nasty. You have the potential to be a beast, so now let the beast out
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Nameplay - bd
Structure - bd
Similies/metas - bd
Enjoyment - bd
Overall mvgt bd
This battle was overall weak, bd you could've definitly came much harder...lance for a first battle you did pretty well, you have the basic idea so now work on all aspects of your writing and you will be pretty nasty. You have the potential to be a beast, so now let the beast out
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Re: Lance vs Blakedowns
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Blake wins KO
Blake wins KO
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