M33Kish vs. -Menace-(M33k wins KO)

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M33Kish vs. -Menace-(M33k wins KO)

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5 bars,
house rules,
due 48 hours after check.

This is my check.
The Meek Shall Prosper... So they say :P

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Check....

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-- May 9th, 2011, 4:48 pm --

Listen!!!!!



You thinkin you gotta chance is a pure Waste of Thoughts..Stop Fakin Dog..
This guy'll blow up.....yea just like that space shuttle when it was Takin Off!!!
It's hard to swallow bein called Apollo and not in no Reference to tha Theatre..
Don't approach me thinkin I'm soft for that.. you can just Step In to ah Mirror!!!
You'll see a human Form of Softness gettin ripped n spun left Torn n Nauseous..
Try to run shit wit Poor Enforcement..when u ain't got Dick like a Ho's Lost Endorsements!!!
So watch ya mouth kid you will get Killed Rappin..dont sleep my skills can Still Happen..
Soon as they say ACTION you'll be walkin off with ah loss by the end like Phil Jackson!!!
You can run around Talk about your battles and you'll be Hurtin When You Mention This..
You Deserved it for Stepping In..you just got folded like a flag at the Service For a Veteran!!!
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Re: M33Kish vs. -Menace-

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That it.... and your suppose to be good.... smh.

Efforts wasted, just face it, cause even though you dropped you still lost it/
Cause I ain't 'lion' on you when I say no shows count for most of your losses/ http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post1 ... ce#p159735

Your garbage, you flow as hard as broke faucets/
And that's just spewing from the side, like that sperm on your face where your mouth is/ (Flow creation?)

Watch them kiddie rhymes get murdered, 24 but your only insurance is gerbers/
The only reason your a menace in the hood is cause niggas don't want none of your burgers!!!/ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H_4nupAxvNw

Silly trick, your prissy punches only give weak (sugar) rushes like pixie sticks/
So quit the bitch shit, or get yourself 'man handled' on some "give it up quick" shit/

I'm spittin the I.L.L.est punches, you sick for thinkin you over my style/
Get smoked like heat on pine piles, that's how you crack a 'menace'ing smile/

:P

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Re: M33Kish vs. -Menace-

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M33kish came harder for me,flow was m33 i could read it better,multies was m33,personals m33,punches Menace ,enjoyment m33... mvgt m33

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Uppin

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Post by Joe Saint »

this was a one sided battle. m33kish got every cat. menace you looked like you didnt even try

mvgt-m33kish


the break down:

flow-m33kish
punches-m33kish
wordplay-m33kish
enjoyment-m33kish
everyother cat.-M33kish

my vote still stands with M33kish
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Re: M33Kish vs. -Menace-

Post by Alvin »

-Menace-

You thinkin you gotta chance is a pure Waste of Thoughts..Stop Fakin Dog..
This guy'll blow up.....yea just like that space shuttle when it was Takin Off!!!
Nice wording as well as image, but punch wise it fell short man.
It's hard to swallow bein called Apollo and not in no Reference to tha Theatre..
Don't approach me thinkin I'm soft for that.. you can just Step In to ah Mirror!!!
Who is called apollo? i guess that part confused me. The punch i dont really get either... Kinda lost by the whole bar really, but the connection from appolo to your last line of a space ship is nice.
You'll see a human Form of Softness gettin ripped n spun left Torn n Nauseous..
Try to run shit wit Poor Enforcement..when u ain't got Dick like a Ho's Lost Endorsements!!!
lol. Funny, but not really aimed at M33k.
So watch ya mouth kid you will get Killed Rappin..dont sleep my skills can Still Happen..
Soon as they say ACTION you'll be walkin off with ah loss by the end like Phil Jackson!!!
lol, again, but not aimed at him really, again.
You can run around Talk about your battles and you'll be Hurtin When You Mention This..
You Deserved it for Stepping In..you just got folded like a flag at the Service For a Veteran!!!
Damn, prob my favorite bar, cuz i know how much power the flag folding holds. BUT, its not really aimed at him man, i would have liked to see more personals and nameflips so it doesnt read like a general battle to anyone.


M33kish


Efforts wasted, just face it, cause even though you dropped you still lost it/
Cause I ain't 'lion' on you when I say no shows count for most of your losses/ post159735.html?hilit=menace#p159735
lol with the personals and the Kay tie in wordplay.
Your garbage, you flow as hard as broke faucets/
And that's just spewing from the side, like that sperm on your face where your mouth is/ (Flow creation?)
I think its funny how you were wrecking his flow, but failed to flow it lol. Nice tie in with his title though.
Watch them kiddie rhymes get murdered, 24 but your only insurance is gerbers/
The only reason your a menace in the hood is cause niggas don't want none of your burgers!!!/ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H_4nupAxvNw
lol, i'm pretty sure i know the video without clicking the link.
Silly trick, your prissy punches only give weak (sugar) rushes like pixie sticks/
So quit the bitch shit, or get yourself 'man handled' on some "give it up quick" shit/
nice bar, but rather general.
I'm spittin the I.L.L.est punches, you sick for thinkin you over my style/
Get smoked like heat on pine piles, that's how you crack a 'menace'ing smile/
Not sure what the pine pile has to do with smiling.... but ok. Overall, prolly the best I've read from you. Makes me think ghost writer lol, but anyhow, other that a few flow errors, and the general bar, good job man.


Although both were nice reads, I feel M33K came more prepared for the battle, with personals, name flips, and punches. I'd say the flow was pretty much owned by Menace though, not sure what others read... condecending maybe? One way or another...

MVGT M33Kish

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Re: M33Kish vs. -Menace-

Post by EcKsTaSy »

Watch them kiddie rhymes get murdered, 24 but your only insurance is gerbers/.... (right then and there, murder)

I was thinkin the same thing bout Menace's flow, it was just too simple. M33 got em bad with that line. KO.

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Re: M33Kish vs. -Menace-

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-Thread Closed & Records Updated-

M33Kish wins KO

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