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Scott James vs Colossus (Title Match - Scott wins KO)

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5 bars, 10 lines, house rules.
Verses due by tonight.
Check.
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Re: Scott James vs Colossus *TITLE MATCH*

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WINS:
Ekmos - KO ... Duc3 - KO ... Jesodist - KO ... MagicMark - KO ... Animul_Instinkz - KO ... Old Rotten - KO ... Dr Kevorkian - KO ... Ambition - KO ... Eclipse - KO ... Domino - 5-3 ... Crimson - KO ... MC Scars - KO ... Modern Defiance - KO ... Tempest - KO ... QwarterZ - KO ... TreTru - KO ... Quix - KO ... Grim/Leeroi Green - KO ... Knowmad - KO ... Cre@tiv3 - KO ... MVario - TKO ... Hazard - KO ... ER - KO ... Colossus - KO ... FlipSide - KO ... JackDaRippa - KO ... JSteel - KO ... Kau The Lion - KO ... 32Neilz - KO ... Evolution - TKO ... Shazo - KO ... CBK - KO
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Re: Scott James vs Colossus *TITLE MATCH*

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She looks like Mickey Avalon fell asleep in a tanning salon and got a boob job
Snookie's herpes improved dog or some bitches wig is on RuPaul

The skin tone of U-God: crusty and shaded, his structure is basic
If rap's a race, I'm *passin J's* like keepin *blunts in rotation*

Fuck if I'm hatin; he'll skate in a sec when faced with a test
So when I've spoken you'll see *Scott Rollin* like he *played for the Reds*

One punch'll lay you to rest, in a graveyard, so brace for impact
I reel my fist back and uppercut him so hard it trims his chin strap

I rip tracks, spit crack, raisin the bar of the rap profesion
And James couldn't *budge it* like he *filed for chapter seven*
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Re: Scott James vs Colossus *TITLE MATCH*

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Re: Scott James vs Colossus (Title Match - VOTE NOW)

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Tsk Tsk..



Bitch Ill Rip Ya In Half Like HOGANS TEES, Then Throw Ya In The Freezer Like FROZEN PEAS..
I Own This Tussle Cuz This My First Bar And Already "Col-In-Trouble" Like CROHN'S DISEASE!!
Crush Ya BONES WIT EASE.. Ya See Me Snorin Cuz This Kid Spits The Most BORING OF WRITTENS..
Got This WHORE IN SUBMISSION Cuz I Stay Walkin All Over Col/coal Like FOREIGN TRADITIONS!!
Im The JORDAN OF DISSIN.. Listen I Aint Religious But Ima Leave Ya Holy Like A BIBLICAL AUTHOR
This A LYRICAL SLAUGHTER! My Fists Will Always Hit n Land "On-Col/call" Like The TYPICAL DOCTOR!!
This PHYSICAL MONSTER'll Stomp U!! Dawg, Ya BARS TRASHY INFACT You AREN'T NASTY AT RAP..
Get SMASHED FROM THE BACK Bitch Ya Bars Wouldnt Be Colossus If Ya Wrote Em On Kim KARDASHIANS ASS!!
Stay SMASHING U FAST!! Scotts AWESOME FREE'll OFF THIS G, OFTEN SEEN To Put MC's In COFFINS PROPERLY
While This Battle? Yeah I Got This *Shit In The Bag* Ya Fuckin Right *COL-LOST-TO-ME*!!!!!!!!!!
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Ekmos - KO ... Duc3 - KO ... Jesodist - KO ... MagicMark - KO ... Animul_Instinkz - KO ... Old Rotten - KO ... Dr Kevorkian - KO ... Ambition - KO ... Eclipse - KO ... Domino - 5-3 ... Crimson - KO ... MC Scars - KO ... Modern Defiance - KO ... Tempest - KO ... QwarterZ - KO ... TreTru - KO ... Quix - KO ... Grim/Leeroi Green - KO ... Knowmad - KO ... Cre@tiv3 - KO ... MVario - TKO ... Hazard - KO ... ER - KO ... Colossus - KO ... FlipSide - KO ... JackDaRippa - KO ... JSteel - KO ... Kau The Lion - KO ... 32Neilz - KO ... Evolution - TKO ... Shazo - KO ... CBK - KO
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Re: Scott James vs Colossus (Title Match - VOTE NOW)

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Aight... Here's my breakdown...


Colossus' Verse
She looks like Mickey Avalon fell asleep in a tanning salon and got a boob job
Snookie's herpes improved dog or some bitches wig is on RuPaul

This shit had me crackin up, no doubt, but I do have to say this bar seems directed at her more than anything. I thought you were battling James? Funny shit though, no doubt. Lol.

The skin tone of U-God: crusty and shaded, his structure is basic
If rap's a race, I'm *passin J's* like keepin *blunts in rotation*

Aight this is a cool flip of a played concept, BUT here's where I was like huh? Cuz blunts are referred to as L's, not J's. The first line was good.

Fuck if I'm hatin; he'll skate in a sec when faced with a test
So when I've spoken you'll see *Scott Rollin* like he *played for the Reds*

This one was more like it. Direct, and I laughed. Nice play here.

One punch'll lay you to rest, in a graveyard, so brace for impact
I reel my fist back and uppercut him so hard it trims his chin strap

I really dug the flow with punch on this one. Nice imagery shot here.

I rip tracks, spit crack, raisin the bar of the rap profesion
And James couldn't *budge it* like he *filed for chapter seven*

This is a solid punch, but expecting more from your last bar in a championship bout, honestly. I've seen better verses come from you.


Scott's Verse

Bitch Ill Rip Ya In Half Like HOGANS TEES, Then Throw Ya In The Freezer Like FROZEN PEAS..
I Own This Tussle Cuz This My First Bar And Already "Col-In-Trouble" Like CROHN'S DISEASE!!

This was a sick nameflip and punch, tbh. Good way to open the verse. The set up was pretty good also.

Crush Ya BONES WIT EASE.. Ya See Me Snorin Cuz This Kid Spits The Most BORING OF WRITTENS..
Got This WHORE IN SUBMISSION Cuz I Stay Walkin All Over Col/coal Like FOREIGN TRADITIONS!!

This is another good nameflip. Solid punch. Set up is ehhh.

Im The JORDAN OF DISSIN.. Listen I Aint Religious But Ima Leave Ya Holy Like A BIBLICAL AUTHOR
This A LYRICAL SLAUGHTER! My Fists Will Always Hit n Land "On-Col/call" Like The TYPICAL DOCTOR!!

This set up is better. I see where the punch is going, but it didnt really hit too hard for me...

This PHYSICAL MONSTER'll Stomp U!! Dawg, Ya BARS TRASHY INFACT You AREN'T NASTY AT RAP..
Get SMASHED FROM THE BACK Bitch Ya Bars Wouldnt Be Colossus If Ya Wrote Em On Kim KARDASHIANS ASS!!

THIS SHIT had me rolling, no doubt. Funny as fuck. The set up was aight, but seemed to be a bit cluttered and stretched some... Good punch though.

Stay SMASHING U FAST!! Scotts AWESOME FREE'll OFF THIS G, OFTEN SEEN To Put MC's In COFFINS PROPERLY
While This Battle? Yeah I Got This *Shit In The Bag* Ya Fuckin Right *COL-LOST-TO-ME*!!!!!!!!!!

Another solid nameflip with a punch. The set up feeled the same as the bar prior. One of the better verses Ive seen from you lately, tbh.


Colossus, you seemed off on this verse compared to normal. Didnt really hit hard with the nameflips and stuff like you usually do, and that first bar was out of place IMO. I think you would come much better and direct in a rematch. I would like to see it happen, no matter how the votes go after mine.

Scott, this was one of the better verses Ive seen from you, like I said, as of late. Just seemed more direct and the nameflips were nicely brought into the punches. Solid verse.


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Re: Scott James vs Colossus (Title Match - VOTE NOW)

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Dont Get Mad Or Anything But I Break Shit All The Way Down ..THIS IS MY OPINION ... AND IN NO WAY SO I WANT OTHERS TO COPY WHO I VOTED 4 OR THINK THAT IM SWAY'N IN ANY WAY So Here It Goes
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Bitch Ill Rip Ya In Half Like HOGANS TEES, Then Throw Ya In The Freezer Like FROZEN PEAS..
I Own This Tussle Cuz This My First Bar And Already "Col-In-Trouble" Like CROHN'S DISEASE!!
HOGANS TEES similie was ok,..nice consistancy in the 1st line .. LOL nice word/nameplay overall this was dope
Crush Ya BONES WIT EASE.. Ya See Me Snorin Cuz This Kid Spits The Most BORING OF WRITTENS..
Got This WHORE IN SUBMISSION Cuz I Stay Walkin All Over Col/coal Like FOREIGN TRADITIONS!!
nice follow up multie leading into the next bar.. outter multies is on fire too.. nice wordplay/ nameplay again make'n the punch hard as hell
Im The JORDAN OF DISSIN.. Listen I Aint Religious But Ima Leave Ya Holy Like A BIBLICAL AUTHOR
This A LYRICAL SLAUGHTER! My Fists Will Always Hit n Land "On-Col/call" Like The TYPICAL DOCTOR!!
again nice follow up multi..the holy /holey shit is played as hell tho .. also dont switch up the way u pronounce the name cuz that leads into forced shit .. but punch was iight .. u lost something in it tho .. cuz u said my fists will always hit and land on call ..that really didnt relate too well but its still coo
This PHYSICAL MONSTER'll Stomp U!! Dawg, Ya BARS TRASHY INFACT You AREN'T NASTY AT RAP..
Get SMASHED FROM THE BACK Bitch Ya Bars Wouldnt Be Colossus If Ya Wrote Em On Kim KARDASHIANS ASS!!
other than the multie follow up, this 1st line was filler
and u failed in my eyes on this whole bar

Stay SMASHING U FAST!! Scotts AWESOME FREE'll OFF THIS G, OFTEN SEEN To Put MC's In COFFINS PROPERLY
While This Battle? Yeah I Got This *Shit In The Bag* Ya Fuckin Right *COL-LOST-TO-ME*!!!!!!!!!!
used smashed and smashed in the same mutlie.. eh focused more on the multies than the punches and complexity in the 1st line ..nice finisher ... nuff said lol
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She looks like Mickey Avalon fell asleep in a tanning salon and got a boob job
Snookie's herpes improved dog or some bitches wig is on RuPaul
lol funny opener 1st line ... eh not feel'n the rest
The skin tone of U-God: crusty and shaded, his structure is basic
If rap's a race, I'm *passin J's* like keepin *blunts in rotation*
1st line kinda fillerish ......eh old concept on the blunt shit .. and in actuality a blunt is reffered to as an L .. and a joint is a J
Fuck if I'm hatin; he'll skate in a sec when faced with a test
So when I've spoken you'll see *Scott Rollin* like he *played for the Reds*
filler 1st line .. second line had me chuckle a bit lol
One punch'll lay you to rest, in a graveyard, so brace for impact
I reel my fist back and uppercut him so hard it trims his chin strap
filler , and weak attempt at a jab
I rip tracks, spit crack, raisin the bar of the rap profesion
And James couldn't *budge it* like he *filed for chapter seven*
filler and self hype... eh jeans reference was weak
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Punches= Scott
Personals= Scott
Wordplay= Scott
Nameplay= Scott
Metaphors= Scott
Similes= Scott
Complexity= Scott
Creativity= Scott
Consistancy= Scott
Flow= tie
Imagery= Scott
Vocab= Scott
Structure= tie
Opener= Scott
Closer= Scott

Over All .. Scott Owned The Hell Out Col .. I Think Colossus Just Didnt Know What To Expect
But Then Again When U Have from the 17th To Almost The 30th To Drop It Better Be Dope

Vote = Scott
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Re: Scott James vs Colossus (Title Match - VOTE NOW)

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Why is there a 1 round,miniscule line limit format on a TITLE MATCH,for Christsakes? I know I'm a n00b here and I mean no disrespect...but these guys can punch like crazy so what seems like a clean hard fought round 1 W for SCOTT could change drastically by end of rd. 2. My old site went 2 rounds automatically,and for title matches with bar caps or battle&topical combo battles,we'd go 3 rounds...2 rounds with flips,3rd round inverted order blind drop. We covered all bases and produced monster well-rounded lyricists who kilt it in any medium. I respectfully think that a title match with punchers of these guys' magnitude go 3 rounds in order to make the victor as clear as closely matched MCs can be.

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Multis- Scott
Flow- Scott
Punches- Scott
Personals- neither
Vote- Scott

Damn, I was pullin for Colossus cause he's like the new kid comin up and shit, but no way I could vote against Scott on this one. Good shit, Scott.

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Re: Scott James vs Colossus (Title Match - VOTE NOW)

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From now on the champ should have to post first in his title matches. He dropped a full week after me. Granted I was 5 days after the set drop date but I wrote the first 8 the day this was set up thinking I had 8 more to go. Fuckin bullshit when he can gauge his opponent and spend a week writing his reply. All and all he had 12 days to write this which meant he could spend 2 days + on each bar.
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Re: Scott James vs Colossus (Title Match - VOTE NOW)

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well alot of people give the verse's in pm form to the admin or mods
try that next time
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Colossus wrote:From now on the champ should have to post first in his title matches. He dropped a full week after me. Granted I was 5 days after the set drop date but I wrote the first 8 the day this was set up thinking I had 8 more to go. Fuckin bullshit when he can gauge his opponent and spend a week writing his reply. All and all he had 12 days to write this which meant he could spend 2 days + on each bar.

First of all, I know of several people on this site alone that know Scott can post a verse like this in a matter of minutes, so I dont think thats the case at all. Furthermore, did Scott NOT tell you about him going on vacation to Florida?? Because that's EXACTLY what he informed me. He told me that he had explained to you that he had to go on a trip. Now, I also have to ask, would you be responding the same way had you in fact been winning this battle when you saw it today, as opposed to losing this battle? If you would've acted the same about it, I would be shocked.

And last, the reason I didn't close this all the way out and let you get the win via NO SHOW is because I thought, you being the writer that you are and the personality that you are, you would rather have a MATCH and some competition for the belt, rather than let it slide to your possession on a NO SHOW victory that could always be up for debate on your deserving to have it or not, since you would have won it due to a NO SHOW.

Once again, I'm the bad guy, I'm guessing, for trying to be a fair individual, for listening to all parties involved, for recognizing that during the holidays ALL activity over the ENITRE internest slows down DRASTICALLY, and for trying to give the fans of this site and of both participants the match they wanted to read, which would NOT have included a no show.

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Re: Scott James vs Colossus (Title Match - VOTE NOW)

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You are taking the blame for two battles that you are not at fault in.

First off, I would never take a belt on a no show. I'm not a dick. I just think it's stupid I wasted bars on this.

He said something like "hey I'm in Florida" like 2 days ago and he still had the many days before that to write. If he can key this up in minutes it shouldn't have taken him 12 days. Common sense. Especially when he asked for the reasonable extensions. A full week after my drop is bullshit. If I had been PM'd and informed I would have gladly taken that verse down and posted a better one when he returned.

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Thread closed and records updated.

Scott wins via KO.
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