Colossus vs Quix (BATTLE CONCLUDED AS A TIE)

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Colossus vs Quix (BATTLE CONCLUDED AS A TIE)

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4 Bars. House Rules. Due by tomorrow night. Czech.
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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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CHECK

-- Sat Nov 13, 2010 6:09 am --

g'LUCK

How yah gonna kill Q, if you can't even AFFORD A GAT your bound to fail spitting that SORTA-CRAP
can't help but SNORE TO THAT; i'm a son him, then we'll watch him 'take a hike' like a QUARTER BACK
leave yah chest TORN, OR CLAPPED cuz plane and simple you don't BALL OR GOT FLOW!
not at ALL, OR GOT DOGUH! cuz only time we see 'Col. on the map' is road trips through COLORADO
i'm kid nap this bitch ass, and up this NEWBIES RANSOM; i'm gorgeous in battles ... Q be TRUELY HANDSOM
ya can't MOVE-ME, DAMN-SON; cuz WE only see him 'moving crack' when BOOTY DANCING
i'm not a FAN OF HIS colossus please CAN YAH SHIT cuz you got horrible punches like you can't LAND A FIST
plus you can't PLAN FOR QUIX ... cuz if 'colossus thinks he's winning here' ..... he Really is a "MAN OF MYTH" (http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/man-myth-vt19161.html Man of Myth by Colossus ... No replies)
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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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His flow's riddled with flaws, I'm really apalled, why diss him at all?
*Q/cue would break on the first shot* *no billiards involved*

He's simply a fraud, wants to be large but DJ's won't fuck with his shit
Man come one *bad nail salons* aren't even *cuttin to Quick*

Never fucked with a bitch, in love with the dick, it's all a fact
*Amazon tribal beings* aren't the only guys to see *Quicks-and swallow fast*

Never miss, leave targets trashed, your writtens suck so I'll win
*Goldeneye* was the only time *Q* could *blow up with the pen*


1st Bar - Pool/Q-Cue/First shot is called a "break"
2nd Bar - Quick is a part of a finger nail...common expression
3rd Bar - See Quicksand swallow fast/See Quix and swallow fast
4th Bar - Q made a pen grenade in 007: Goldeneye
Last edited by Colossus on Sat Nov 13, 2010 7:57 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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Im going to ask both of you to vote in another battle plz. If you have done so, disregard this comment, but other battles could use votes as well...

That being said, when I get back online, if this is closed out, then I'll edit this post with my vote. Thanks guys. One.
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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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I voted in Jesus/JDR vs Plex/Bear right before I left. The tag tourney final or whatever.

-- Mon Nov 15, 2010 2:18 am --
Quix wrote:CHECK

-- Sat Nov 13, 2010 6:09 am --

g'LUCK

How yah gonna kill Q, if you can't even AFFORD A GAT your bound to fail spitting that SORTA-CRAP
can't help but SNORE TO THAT; i'm a son him, then we'll watch him 'take a hike' like a QUARTER BACK
leave yah chest TORN, OR CLAPPED cuz plane and simple you don't BALL OR GOT FLOW!
not at ALL, OR GOT DOGUH! cuz only time we see 'Col. on the map' is road trips through COLORADO
i'm kid nap this bitch ass, and up this NEWBIES RANSOM; i'm gorgeous in battles ... Q be TRUELY HANDSOM
ya can't MOVE-ME, DAMN-SON; cuz WE only see him 'moving crack' when BOOTY DANCING
i'm not a FAN OF HIS colossus please CAN YAH SHIT cuz you got horrible punches like you can't LAND A FIST
plus you can't PLAN FOR QUIX ... cuz if 'colossus thinks he's winning here' ..... he Really is a "MAN OF MYTH" (http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/man-myth-vt19161.html Man of Myth by Colossus ... No replies)
Me and one of my friends are doing a mixtape and if I release it on here I just want to let you know I have a "Quarterback" "take a hike" punch on a song. I don't bite and that's something I find very disrespectful. I just wanted to let you know it's on a track I did last week, and wrote before then, and it isn't bitten. I hope you understand.
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Noted.
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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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That was definitely supposed to be a PM. :think:
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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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Quix's Verse

How yah gonna kill Q, if you can't even AFFORD A GAT your bound to fail spitting that SORTA-CRAP
can't help but SNORE TO THAT; i'm a son him, then we'll watch him 'take a hike' like a QUARTER BACK

This is a nice punch, no doubt, and wordplay. Nothing personal though. Solid opener.

leave yah chest TORN, OR CLAPPED cuz plane and simple you don't BALL OR GOT FLOW!
not at ALL, OR GOT DOGUH! cuz only time we see 'Col. on the map' is road trips through COLORADO

This is a solid bar throughout.

i'm kid nap this bitch ass, and up this NEWBIES RANSOM; i'm gorgeous in battles ... Q be TRUELY HANDSOM
ya can't MOVE-ME, DAMN-SON; cuz WE only see him 'moving crack' when BOOTY DANCING

Okay, I thought your opening line was just lame honestly. The punch was cool though. Again nothing personal.

i'm not a FAN OF HIS colossus please CAN YAH SHIT cuz you got horrible punches like you can't LAND A FIST
plus you can't PLAN FOR QUIX ... cuz if 'colossus thinks he's winning here' ..... he Really is a "MAN OF MYTH"

Again another solid line. Nice way to end it.

Col's Verse

His flow's riddled with flaws, I'm really apalled, why diss him at all?
*Q/cue would break on the first shot* *no billiards involved*

I have seen alot of cue/Q references, but this one is solid. Good opener.

He's simply a fraud, wants to be large but DJ's won't fuck with his shit
Man come one *bad nail salons* aren't even *cuttin to Quick*

The quick/quix thing is kind of a stretch, IMO. Not too hard hitting compared to your other bars.

Never fucked with a bitch, in love with the dick, it's all a fact
*Amazon tribal beings* aren't the only guys to see *Quicks-and swallow fast*

This was a creative bar. I liked how it was worded and everything. Solid.

Never miss, leave targets trashed, your writtens suck so I'll win
*Goldeneye* was the only time *Q* could *blow up with the pen*

This one was solid, but I wouldve closed with your previous bar instead of this one, just because it was the hardest hitting...

I reviewed this, and it just seems like C was more adament about getting at his opponent. Quix had a really solid verse, but two bars were universal while C directed his lines more at Q and delivered his punches well also.

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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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Thanks man, I'm glad you could appreciate the fact all my bars related to him. I usually rely on nameplays and Quix was the hardest one to play on since I've been here.
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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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quix:

How yah gonna kill Q, if you can't even AFFORD A GAT your bound to fail spitting that SORTA-CRAP
can't help but SNORE TO THAT; i'm a son him, then we'll watch him 'take a hike' like a QUARTER BACK

i thought this was dope. nice opener.

leave yah chest TORN, OR CLAPPED cuz plane and simple you don't BALL OR GOT FLOW!
not at ALL, OR GOT DOGUH! cuz only time we see 'Col. on the map' is road trips through COLORADO

multis need work, it was aiight though..

i'm kid nap this bitch ass, and up this NEWBIES RANSOM; i'm gorgeous in battles ... Q be TRUELY HANDSOM
ya can't MOVE-ME, DAMN-SON; cuz WE only see him 'moving crack' when BOOTY DANCING

funny, but didnt hit hard for me..

i'm not a FAN OF HIS colossus please CAN YAH SHIT cuz you got horrible punches like you can't LAND A FIST
plus you can't PLAN FOR QUIX ... cuz if 'colossus thinks he's winning here' ..... he Really is a "MAN OF MYTH"

good personal, decent closer...
some lines were filler and some multis were blan and a tad forced.. overall, a decent verse..


Colossus:

His flow's riddled with flaws, I'm really apalled, why diss him at all?
*Q/cue would break on the first shot* *no billiards involved*

que lines are mad played, u have to come more original than the obvious..

He's simply a fraud, wants to be large but DJ's won't fuck with his shit
Man come one *bad nail salons* aren't even *cuttin to Quick*

wouldnt have gotten this if i didnt read ur expos, and still wasnt feelin it..

Never fucked with a bitch, in love with the dick, it's all a fact
*Amazon tribal beings* aren't the only guys to see *Quicks-and swallow fast*

i get it, mad forced though..

Never miss, leave targets trashed, your writtens suck so I'll win
*Goldeneye* was the only time *Q* could *blow up with the pen*

ur bars are too short IMO, the punch was coo, ur best bar prolly..
i felt the nameplays were played/forced.. ive seen better from u


overall vote: Quix better punches.
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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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Fair enough.
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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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Multi's: Quickie
Flow: Colo
Personals: Tie
Punches: Quickie
Creativity: Quickie


Overall I think Colo forced some of his lines, that nail-cutting too quick was no good. Colo's only good line was the Golden Eye line. Quickie was alright, his Quarterback line was basically the whole battle. Was an alright battle, but I'm definitely not going to get the minute of half I spend writing this back, that's 90 seconds of life, GONE, forever.

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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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Multi's: Colossus (
Never miss, leave targets trashed, your writtens suck so I'll win
*Goldeneye* was the only time *Q* could *blow up with the pen*)

Flow: Colossus - It just all around was readable to a beat, where the other verse wasn't.

Personals: a lot of the bars from colossus were personal
Punches: Quix - I think he just edged it out.

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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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How yah gonna kill Q, if you can't even AFFORD A GAT your bound to fail spitting that SORTA-CRAP
can't help but SNORE TO THAT; i'm a son him, then we'll watch him 'take a hike' like a QUARTER BACK
5/5 clean
leave yah chest TORN, OR CLAPPED cuz plane and simple you don't BALL OR GOT FLOW!
not at ALL, OR GOT DOGUH! cuz only time we see 'Col. on the map' is road trips through COLORADO
2/5 did not like the filler or even the punch
i'm kid nap this bitch ass, and up this NEWBIES RANSOM; i'm gorgeous in battles ... Q be TRUELY HANDSOM
ya can't MOVE-ME, DAMN-SON; cuz WE only see him 'moving crack' when BOOTY DANCING
1/5 did not like this
i'm not a FAN OF HIS colossus please CAN YAH SHIT cuz you got horrible punches like you can't LAND A FIST
plus you can't PLAN FOR QUIX ... cuz if 'colossus thinks he's winning here' ..... he Really is a "MAN OF MYTH" (man-myth-vt19161.html Man of Myth by Colossus ... No replies)
5/5 another good bar.

quix: 13/20

colossus
His flow's riddled with flaws, I'm really apalled, why diss him at all?
*Q/cue would break on the first shot* *no billiards involved*
3/5 not really feelin this bar. i get it, but eh.
He's simply a fraud, wants to be large but DJ's won't fuck with his shit
Man come one *bad nail salons* aren't even *cuttin to Quick*
2/5 again, kinda corny
Never fucked with a bitch, in love with the dick, it's all a fact
*Amazon tribal beings* aren't the only guys to see *Quicks-and swallow fast*
4/5 dope bar

Never miss, leave targets trashed, your writtens suck so I'll win
*Goldeneye* was the only time *Q* could *blow up with the pen*
5/5 very creative

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Re: Colossus vs Quix

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