Sequence Vs Menace.

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Sequence Vs Menace.

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4 bars due 24 hour's after check in..

Punchlines
Nameplay's
Flow
Multi's
Enjoyment..

Consider this my check in.. :evil:
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Re: Sequence Vs Menace.

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Listen!!



Pay Attention cause every Fukin Thing You Mention Isn't Strong..
Reppin Wat is Soft! i'll make sure Ya Road to Exceptance Isn't Long!!
Kill this Brit wit ah Slit to his throat..Flamin hot when this kid is Engulfed..
Fuck puttin Flames Out id rather leave em Layed Out like a Bitch on Ah Boat!!
Wit Those Barz Ya try to Go Far N then Lose..Gotta Case Ah Postpartum Abuse..
He'll try to Speed Threw This Battle and End up like Nodar In Tha Luge!!..
My Punches Break Em Rapidy by the bulk they Deface his Masterpiece..
Im tha Hulk Here i just hit this guy wit more green then a Haitian Charity!!..
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Re: Sequence Vs Menace.

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If you're the boss, i'm breaking-duties you're more up and down then shaking-booties,
Cause last i seen " menace on the set " dennis was making-movies,
(dennis the meance) :evil:

i key a written-up-so-brutally, cause winning is just so immune to me,
The only time he's a " menace to soceity " is acutally living-in-the-community,
(know one want's you there fam)..

i'll smash Ace like tennis serves, this battle, you got spits-to-wreck-it..
Check it.. if you acutally made songs i'd have " men on pause " like when chicks-arent-pregnant"..
(dont ever start)...

anit something to fuck with, i wreck-the-stars, but you're whack check-ya-bars,
You anit no battler, " ace could get flipped quicker then a deck-of-cards"!,
( 8) )
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Uppin Votes!!
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^ Damn straight on that one,
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Re: Sequence Vs Menace.

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Menace:
Pay Attention cause every Fukin Thing You Mention Isn't Strong..
Reppin Wat is Soft! i'll make sure Ya Road to Exceptance Isn't Long!!
2/5 – Not a strong opener at all Menace
Kill this Brit wit ah Slit to his throat..Flamin hot when this kid is Engulfed..
Fuck puttin Flames Out id rather leave em Layed Out like a Bitch on Ah Boat!!
2.5/5 Set up was better than the punch. “Bitch on a Boat”? Did I miss something?
Wit Those Barz Ya try to Go Far N then Lose..Gotta Case Ah Postpartum Abuse..
He'll try to Speed Threw This Battle and End up like Nodar In Tha Luge!!..
3/5 Didn’t like the set up, but props for being the first to use the death of Olympian Luge slider in a punch
My Punches Break Em Rapidy by the bulk they Deface his Masterpiece..
Im tha Hulk Here i just hit this guy wit more green then a Haitian Charity!!..
2.5/5 Not quite sure about this one “hit this guy wit more green”.. not sure if that punch was effective.
10/20 Probably should’ve aimed your punches more at Sequence

Sequence
If you're the boss, i'm breaking-duties you're more up and down then shaking-booties,
Cause last i seen " menace on the set " dennis was making-movies,
2.5/5 Loved the setup, but Dennis the Menace lines are played
i key a written-up-so-brutally, cause winning is just so immune to me,
The only time he's a " menace to soceity " is acutally living-in-the-community,
2.5/5 again nice set up, but the punch is played
i'll smash Ace like tennis serves, this battle, you got spits-to-wreck-it..
Check it.. if you acutally made songs i'd have " men on pause " like when chicks-arent-pregnant"..
2.5/5 your setups are better than your punches. Punch was forced
anit something to fuck with, i wreck-the-stars, but you're whack check-ya-bars,
You anit no battler, " ace could get flipped quicker then a deck-of-cards"!,
3/5 nice closer
10.5 Barely squeaked by Sequence. Work on the punches, or either flow off the setups.

All around, I got to give this to Sequence because it seemed as if he was actually battling Menace. Menace just seemed to be throwing out punches that weren’t relevant to Sequence.

Wasn’t the best of battles fellas. Probably why it’s not getting any responses.
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Thanks for the vote and feedback riggz. greatly appreciated.
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Re: Sequence Vs Menace.

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Menace

Pay Attention cause every Fukin Thing You Mention Isn't Strong..
Reppin Wat is Soft! i'll make sure Ya Road to Exceptance Isn't Long!!

^ Weak Opener, Didn't Really Attack Him, And The Bar Wasn't Effective Overall, You Should Always Start Ya Shit Off With A Bang.

Kill this Brit wit ah Slit to his throat..Flamin hot when this kid is Engulfed..
Fuck puttin Flames Out id rather leave em Layed Out like a Bitch on Ah Boat!!

^ Not Really Feeling This Bar Either Bro..

Wit Those Barz Ya try to Go Far N then Lose..Gotta Case Ah Postpartum Abuse..
He'll try to Speed Threw This Battle and End up like Nodar In Tha Luge!!..

^ Nice Concept, Ya Best Bar To Be Honest, Flowed Pretty We'll Through Out.

My Punches Break Em Rapidy by the bulk they Deface his Masterpiece..
Im tha Hulk Here i just hit this guy wit more green then a Haitian Charity!!..

^ Nice Ending.


Sequence

If you're the boss, i'm breaking-duties you're more up and down then shaking-booties,
Cause last i seen " menace on the set " dennis was making-movies,
(dennis the meance) :evil:

^ Smh@ This, Not Feeling It At All To Be Honest. But The Opener Is Stronger Then Ya Oponents Opener Though.

i key a written-up-so-brutally, cause winning is just so immune to me,
The only time he's a " menace to soceity " is acutally living-in-the-community,
(know one want's you there fam)..

^ Decent Line..

i'll smash Ace like tennis serves, this battle, you got spits-to-wreck-it..
Check it.. if you acutally made songs i'd have " men on pause " like when chicks-arent-pregnant"..
(dont ever start)...

^ Blah, Played Ace Line, Forced Wordplay, Wasn't feelin It Overall.

anit something to fuck with, i wreck-the-stars, but you're whack check-ya-bars,
You anit no battler, " ace could get flipped quicker then a deck-of-cards"!,

^ Also Another Played Line,


Punchlines menace
Nameplay's Sequence
Flow sequence
Multi's sequence
Enjoyment.. tie

Vote? Sequence

Sequence I Noticed That You Depend On Nameplay In All Ya Battles. I'm Not Saying This Out Of Hate Or Anything, But MOST Of The Nameplay I Seen From You Are Predictable/Uneffective Man. If You Gotta Sit There For 15 Minutes Just To Think Of A Way To Twist Around The Concepts, Then Do It. No One Wants To Read Predictable Lines. Because If You Can't Think Of A Good Name Play, You Can Be Working On Another Category Like Punches/Wordplay/Personals For Example And Make It Even More Effective Then Ya Nameplay Bar. If You Get What I Mean..

Menace You Should Of Tried Attacking Your Oponent. You Can Defiantly Create Punches, Why Not Mix It With Nameplay/Personals? Even If You We're Gonna Type Down One Bar Attacking Him, It's Better Then Nothing, Quality Over Quanity. Also Never Waste A Bar, Like Ya First Bar For Example, I Think You Underestimated Sequence in This Battle. But Besides The Nameplay, You Should Try Working On Making Your Verse Fit The Categories That You Both Agree'd To..

Overall Sequence Put More Effort In His Battle Verse, And Was More On Point. He Attacked His Oponent Better Then Menace Attacked Sequence, And He Went By The Cats Y'all Agree'd To Better.
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Re: Sequence Vs Menace.

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Yeah and without nameplay i would get the votes that meance gott, no nameplay didnt attack the oppenent so i cant really win on that one fam, lmao.. nameplay and punchlines win battles, thank's for the detailed feedback and vote.
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Re: Sequence Vs Menace.

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Riggz wrote:Menace:
Fuck puttin Flames Out id rather leave em Layed Out like a Bitch on Ah Boat!!
2.5/5 Set up was better than the punch. “Bitch on a Boat”? Did I miss something?
"Bitch" "layed out" girls are always "layin out" on the front of a "boat" you kno catchin a tan or what not..dammit riggz i shouldnt have to explain...lol
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Re: Sequence Vs Menace.

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my vote goes to seq. i feel he swept every category. wasnt the best verse i seen from ya. and Menace it seemed you must took the day off or something, the verse seemed kinda nursery rhymish.

+1 Seq

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