BL#14 Modern Defiance vs MenaCe (Menace 3-0)

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BL#14 Modern Defiance vs MenaCe (Menace 3-0)

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Due Date: 7/17/09

*Yes Here we Go M&M The Battle Everyone Has Been Waiting To See Both Emcees Started Out On Similar Levels n Improved A Lot With Their Mass Battling Rampages.This Will Go Down In The History Books. Will The Menace Be Defied??*

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Check!..





Listen!


Get one thing clear when i appear you Disperse On Demand..
He's Tha Man? Na more like a "Bitch" wit a Purse and some Pads!!..

You need to know mine Hurt When they Land all Pressed Inside You..
In All Catz he Falls Flat wit the only "Flow" he knows is his Mentrual Cycle!!..

And Watch how i Set His Fate you never see this fuck ever Shred A Page..
Or Measure Rage so imma Run Threw this MD for free like some Medicade!!..

Call me leather face wit better taste over shinin this So-Called Giant..
In A Riot i'll Torch Defiance put MOD in an ERN on the shelf at Low Cost to Buy It!!..

Next time Make Sure before i have to Break Ya Jaw when it come to Rappin..Quit!!..
Cause the Facts'll Stick, Everybody hates you what a shock his pops wish he never Had A Kid!!

I can tell by his avy that Mod's life is just like that Mic, Bone Dry..
He Post Lie's just to nose dive similar to like how Marilyn Monroe Died!!..

But fuck suicide you can call this cold blooded murder in the First Degree..
All his Hits Are Buried his verses are like Obituaries the way they Hurt To Read!!.."So Sad"

The end of my Verse is Near and you can't Persever the Loss your Tastin It..
Mod im Replacin With "Fawcett" cause when you hit the floor bitch nobody Gave A Shit!!....
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Re: BL#14 Modern Defiance vs MenaCe

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sorry for the lateness my comp was fucked for like 4 days..

menace

menace ll’ flea/e like tenants-when-pests-involved
cuz I’m battlin a split personality which is it Menace-or-Reckinall?
You aint a “menace to society” or any thing else
Just a “minor” inconvenience.. MAJOR, ha! You playin ya self
Hit a win streak, so you got delusions-of-grander
Tryin to hit hard but couldn’t “nail it” if you was usin-a-hammer
I thought you was a “rebel”? was it just timed-wrong
Cuz I aint seen nothing “Menacing” from him since he’s signed-on
This Menace’s wins are disputed like Iranian-votes
Cept your not winnin a post! Haters!! Shit theres STADIUMS-FULL
you lazy an slow swings miss like you facing-a-ghost
even wit all ya dick riding there’s no way you’ll be swaying-tha-polls
Men Ace this faggot on a regular day-2-day-basis
Menace came scared to crack knuckles and I came-to-break-faces
you aint hard!! The ILLEST-MINDs-aint-Menacin!
If you SO SICK than I just Killed-ya-Rhymes-With-MEDICINE


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Re: BL#14 Modern Defiance vs MenaCe

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This Should Be Good!

Votes Ppl!!!
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Re: BL#14 Modern Defiance vs MenaCe

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Ok battle here nothing too quotable felt both of your verses had some forced punches..But you guys at least threw a bunch so no bar to bar breakdown so...

Flow: Both
Punches: Menace (by a smidge both were pretty weak/forced)
Personals: Modern, but nothing new
Nameplay: Menace
Multis: Neither really, but I guess both

Overall I felt both verses were equal, both had some weak punches, I just felt Menace's weren't as weak as Modern's...Not too many battles I noticed this week so please return the favor vote on my battle with Lungz..Thanks fellas

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menace
Get one thing clear when i appear you Disperse On Demand..
He's Tha Man? Na more like a "Bitch" wit a Purse and some Pads!!..
pretty decent punch no multis so 3/5
You need to know mine Hurt When they Land all Pressed Inside You..
In All Catz he Falls Flat wit the only "Flow" he knows is his Mentrual Cycle!!..
last word didn't really rhyme but its all about da way you say it and another period/girl punch no multis 2/5
And Watch how i Set His Fate you never see this fuck ever Shred A Page..
Or Measure Rage so imma Run Threw this MD for free like some Medicade!!..
damn nice punch and a lil name play and multis perfect bar for da battle 4/5
Call me leather face wit better taste over shinin this So-Called Giant..
In A Riot i'll Torch Defiance put MOD in an ERN on the shelf at Low Cost to Buy It!!..
funny shit nice name play and punch and multis good flow 5/5
Next time Make Sure before i have to Break Ya Jaw when it come to Rappin..Quit!!..
Cause the Facts'll Stick, Everybody hates you what a shock his pops wish he never Had A Kid!!
you do a lotta hits like this so its gettin old and ya flow was a lil choppy here 2/5
I can tell by his avy that Mod's life is just like that Mic, Bone Dry..
He Post Lie's just to nose dive similar to like how Marilyn Monroe Died!!..
nice flow here and funny punch 4/5
But fuck suicide you can call this cold blooded murder in the First Degree..
All his Hits Are Buried his verses are like Obituaries the way they Hurt To Read!!.."So Sad"
lol another good punch and flow 4/5
The end of my Verse is Near and you can't Persever the Loss your Tastin It..
Mod im Replacin With "Fawcett" cause when you hit the floor bitch nobody Gave A Shit!!....
bar a lil stretched but good punch 3/5
total 27/40 man you had some solid bars and then you had some weak bars but overall good drop

MD
menace ll’ flea/e like tenants-when-pests-involved
cuz I’m battlin a split personality which is it Menace-or-Reckinall?
nice multi and personal and decent flow 4/5
You aint a “menace to society” or any thing else
Just a “minor” inconvenience.. MAJOR, ha! You playin ya self
weak filler here but decent flow 2/5
Hit a win streak, so you got delusions-of-grander
Tryin to hit hard but couldn’t “nail it” if you was usin-a-hammer
decent punch multis a lil off 3/5
I thought you was a “rebel”? was it just timed-wrong
Cuz I aint seen nothing “Menacing” from him since he’s signed-on
another weak filler man 2/5
This Menace’s wins are disputed like Iranian-votes
Cept your not winnin a post! Haters!! Shit theres STADIUMS-FULL
didn't flow well but you could say it different anyway shoulda flip da line cuz you finisher was weak 2/5
you lazy an slow swings miss like you facing-a-ghost
even wit all ya dick riding there’s no way you’ll be swaying-tha-polls
wat??? y polls you shoulda you coulda worded this differently and hit way way harder 2/5
Men Ace this faggot on a regular day-2-day-basis
Menace came scared to crack knuckles and I came-to-break-faces
you got multis down but it wasn't really a punch 3/5
you aint hard!! The ILLEST-MINDs-aint-Menacin!
If you SO SICK than I just Killed-ya-Rhymes-With-MEDICINE
this was a good bar and good closer with multis and flow 5/5
total- 23/40 man you had 2 good bars but man you lost it on fillers you had 2 lines if you woulda wrote dem different you woulda won this battle you just missed dem PM me if you want me two show you more on the 2 bars you coulda won with...

ok this was a good battle
Call me leather face wit better taste over shinin this So-Called Giant..
In A Riot i'll Torch Defiance put MOD in an ERN on the shelf at Low Cost to Buy It!!..
fav bar from menace
you aint hard!! The ILLEST-MINDs-aint-Menacin!
If you SO SICK than I just Killed-ya-Rhymes-With-MEDICINE
fav bar from MD

but final vote


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Re: BL#14 Modern Defiance vs MenaCe

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Punches- Menace
Wordplay- Menace
Nameplay - Menace
Multis - Mod By a Bit
Personals Mod
Enjoyment - Mod
Flow - Both
Creativity - Menace
Overall - Menace.

Mod Ur Gettin Alot Better Battling Wise..
Keep Polishin your Style listen To a Few battle Rappers..
U just Needa Fresher Concepts And Better Connections..

Menace U Need Better Wording.
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Re: BL#14 Modern Defiance vs MenaCe

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K KiLLaH wrote:Will The Menace Be Defied??*
Never...


3-0 KO


Close This!


Good Shyt Mod..
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