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I'll be droppin tomorrow night most likely, here's my check, check and drop whenever or wait for me. I'm on every night don't worry about no shows with me.

Check .

Check, hope you drop a lot quicker than my other battle...

I should change my name to Coke how all I post is classics
And the way I'm Sonnin you, I can't wait to file my taxes
Let's get this started, you're dirt bitch, I'll clean your face with a brillow
I know this fag bites…In the bed ass up with his head in a pillow

Aight let's get serious now...


Murk this guys respect.. No running.. I murder lines in step
Oxymoronic? Maybe.. But I'll take his life to say I'm burglarizing death
Kid you're words are boring as fuck, put us to sleep with ya crap, worthless
So everytime I hear of a Kid-Napping...I blame it on ya rap verses!
Battlin' Teph? you must be stupid, going to get blazed and scorned
I'll send verses that'll lift this dick-head higher than his favorite porn...




I don't explain metaphors or punchlines if you don't get it read it again until you do, if you still don't well then don't vote. Goodluck man

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O .. Shit ..
That Was Talon Lmao
My Bad..

Then The Play Is 'Can't Deal With Duce' (Shit).
It's Not A Personal.

Psych's Vote Doesn't Count Until It's Explained.

0-0.

I should change my name to Coke how all I post is classics
And the way I'm Sonnin you, I can't wait to file my taxes

lol, not bad...never heard this concept b4...nice dude..

Let's get this started, you're dirt bitch, I'll clean your face with a brillow
I know this fag bites…In the bed ass up with his head in a pillow

ehh...decent imagery..

Murk this guys respect.. No running.. I murder lines in step
Oxymoronic? Maybe.. But I'll take his life to say I'm burglarizing death

not bad not bad...

Kid you're words are boring as fuck, put us to sleep with ya crap, worthless
So everytime I hear of a Kid-Napping...I blame it on ya rap verses!

heard something like this b4...but it was aiight..

Battlin' Teph? you must be stupid, going to get blazed and scorned
I'll send verses that'll lift this dick-head higher than his favorite porn...

haha....decent closer..





When I'm Steppin In It's Over! Cause My 'Bars Go Over Lawns' Like Mexican's With Mowers!!..
I'll Pierce Thru His Armer,He's 'Killing Himself Over Lands' Like Indian Farmers!!

wasnt feelin this opener...

Why?..
Cause Tef's Trash N Suck's He's Just Wack AS Fuck! Tell His Ass ENOUGH!
He Ain Made 4 This Rappin Stuff Like Stack Bundles With New Joints He Has Ta 'RAP IT UP!'

no.

You a Killa.. Then Show Me Prick! U Gunna Fold Me? Shit..'Jesus Ya Nuts!' Like U Gainin Holy Dick!
I'ma Slowly Git Da Strap N Stuff Da 'Banana In Ya Pipe' Like An Axel Foley Trick!!

i get it, but not that hard hitting..

I Got Pen Bar's You About-Pencil's Shit's That'll Break N Leave You Ass'd Out..Mental!
You'll Pay 4 Ur Word's Like A Mouth Rental! U Couldn't Even 'Deal With Duce' Like Ariens Out Of SOUTH CENTRAL!!!

mmmmmmmm wasa iight.....

He's Armless Taking a Shit Give His ASS A HAND! Dood Needs Practice..DAMN! I'm Hungry But I Already PASSD THA STAN!![

weak closer..



damn, IMO this battle was one sided...

punches, multis, wordplay, humor = tef

my vote = Tef

hes got mad potential..

Thanks for the vote man finally someone votes...1-0 up

not sure if my vote matters but watever here's a quick category drop

teflon's intro was a waste of text.. i dont get the purpose of that cuz it sucked donkey balls but the rest slightly outshun hazard's bars

creativity:hazard (bit of nameplay and a little more thought)
complexity:hazard (way more effort put into his)
entertainment:teflon (indirect funny puns and simple)
flow:teflon (haz's rhymescheme was stretched n a bit forced)
nameplay:hazard (played off teflon with lawn in the intro)
punches:teflon (indirect but nonetheless effective)
personals:neither (not that i know of..)
rhymescheme:teflon (once u started trying it was done precise)
structure:teflon (haz was a little all over the place)
wordplay:neither (not to my definition)

vote:teflon

this was kinda hard to really judge.. teflon was indirect and hazard focused more on his opponent, normally i dont like indirect punches cuz they can be used on anyone.. but in this case i felt like hazard was trying to hard on being creative n complex with his punches that it killed the flow and rhymescheme.. and the punches itself weren't that hard

take it or leave it..

Thanks for the vote..2-0

-- Tue Apr 28, 2009 11:45 am --

Up.

-- Tue Apr 28, 2009 2:02 pm --

Up

Tef u had a nice flow but the substance was missin i felt,i mean ur opener was ok but nothin really stood out.

haz ur flow was better then i last seen so props on that,wordplay and multis are gettin good kiddo,i think u needa work on ur punches a lil more. u got em but u gotta really utilize ur creativity an just go all out,seems to me ur holdin back or somethin. idk maybe its just me

anyways

it wasnt a total cat sweep but haz took it

if u want it broken down ill do so,it was a decent battle.keep droppin yall

It was a great battle, both emcees ripped it but...

Creativity:HaZard
Complexity:Teflon
Entertainment:HaZard
Flow:HaZard
Punches:HaZard
Rhymescheme:Teflon
Structure:Teflon
Wordplay:Both
Nameplay:Teflon

Who's Ill: HaZard

Sorry Teflon your shit's prime 2 but I enjoyed HaZard's lyrics better. Things like,

When I'm Steppin In It's Over! Cause My 'Bars Go Over Lawns' Like Mexican's With Mowers!!..
I'll Pierce Thru His Armer,He's 'Killing Himself Over Lands' Like Indian Farmers!!

This shit iz true but Hilarious which makes it classic...

- NoVeL

2-2 ..

Up couple more votes please

-- Thu Apr 30, 2009 9:44 am --

God damn this battle will never get closed out....

this was pretty close IMO..

Murk this guys respect.. No running.. I murder lines in step
Oxymoronic? Maybe.. But I'll take his life to say I'm burglarizing death
^^Teflon this line was pretty good IMO ..


I Got Pen Bar's You About-Pencil's Shit's That'll Break N Leave You Ass'd Out..Mental!
You'll Pay 4 Ur Word's Like A Mouth Rental! U Couldn't Even 'Deal With Duce' Like Ariens Out Of SOUTH CENTRAL!!!
^^^I really liked this bar of Hazards..too bad it wasnt a personal..


opener-tie-i actually thought haz's was a good concept tef's opener was good too but i didnt like the set up..
flow-Haz was a lil easier for me to follow the rythm
punchlines-Tef haz did a lil self hype on bar 4 da axel foley thing..it was good stuff but more self hyping
wordplay-n/a didnt notice anything significant
structure-tie
multis-Haz
closer-Tef-haz your didn't hit as hard as some of your other lines..

i thought it was gonna be anopther easy win for Haz..but Teflon had some fire i especially liked the first 5 or 6 lines .... dope shit man props..

My vote's for haz cause he was more direct with his disses.. (except that duce shyt)haha still a str8 verse though.. good battle..

3-2 come on more now.