Time line VS Jesodist ( Rematch!!)

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Time line VS Jesodist ( Rematch!!)

Post by Time Line »

I know winnings important Jes, but your excuses are like
period issues I wipe my jizz with my girls thong, you can keep it as
a tissue

Your speaking but nobody listens, damn hell fuck
no ones caring I'll put this cancer in remission, war drums hum as I'm
staring

watch your hubris consume you, while chemo shots take
your soul easy access to your mind through paper skin, my tactics
cold

I musta missed the forum where everyone called me
whack, Was that before or after the forum your bitch whinning
got you jacked? you Lost, you Lost leverage your ass.

I can obtain losses while u just slide into wins like molasses,
Don't ever fear my for passes, because u couldn't read between my lines even if u had high definition glasses.


Everyone allowed to vote and first to reach 5 votes win.

Flow
Punches
Creativity
Entertainment
Multies

i expect some proper feedback, atleast 2lines clearly stating the category sweep, i would appreciate for no hate votes, i apologize if i was rude and disrespectful to anyone, i expect jeso to respond in less than a day since we both agree on yahoo. good luck Jes
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Im the reaper of 'life' the fright at night that makes you wanna keep on the
'lights!!', my attacks are sick on all 'fights' you couldn't dig this find caz
my flows deep on the 'mic!!'

My matrix is a 'lyrical rhyme compose' retro fitted with 'symmetrical aligned electrodes' that deliver shocks through 'electrical timed bar codes'… your 'sentimental body decompose!!' as my 'mental lines flows' through your chakra like chrome pointed beaks of 'diabolical spined crows'.

this bitch must be 'lirically lost' because when i cast my 'initial attacks' of 'rhythmical ghost traps' leave him more frozen than the 'physical of jack frost!!'.

not new to the site, but youll soon see that im the 'rap master'
you couldn't blow up a 'whack challenger' if you worked for 'black nasa!!'

this cat is nothing compared to this 'irritated lion' cant find bars like these unless they made of corrugated 'iron'......this guy's nothing but a rhyme 'stealer!!' just another 'dreamer' my words explode in his face like we in 'Hiroshima!!'
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Post by Arvincible »

Flow - jesodist
Punches - jesodist
Creativity - Jesodist
Entertainment - Tie...
Multies - Time line

by cats jesodist wins, and timeline used some really played punches like the "read between the lines..." one was pretty fuckin played

ur sorta gettin better jeso, give it more time and effort...

jesodist up 1-0

uppin this shit
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Post by Def-init »

Flow: Tie
Punches: Jes
Creativity: Jes
Entertainment: Time
Multies: Time

I am gonna give this vote to Time. It seems he is the more inexperienced out of the two and to be able to equal Jes in that drop gives him the win imho.

Vote: Time.

1-1

Uppin for more votes!
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Post by Jesodist »

Who the hell are you ^

1-0 Me leading

uppin for votes!
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Flow: Jes
Punches: Jes
Creativity: Tie
Entertainment: None
Multies :Jes
Vote: Jes.

take it or leave it time-bitch
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Post by Jesodist »

I'll accept Def-nit's vote because time line knows him.

Thanks for the vote R.A.I.
2-1 Me leading
Upping for a KO!!
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Post by Time Line »

Uppin for votes!!
finish this shit
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Post by Jesodist »

Upping for a KO
anyone out there?
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Post by MagicMark »

Flow - jes
Punches - jes
Creativity -jes
Entertainment -tie
Multies - jes

yeah, same as a vote above this..

timeline had basic stuff, wasnt really attacking his opponent, nothing personal, no original punching concepts

jes's wasnt crazy good either, but atleats had some punches and came more complex and creative

vote jes..
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Post by Jesodist »

Thats a KO!!
someone lock this thread
nice tearing yo apart AGAIN timeline.
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Post by Omega Bill »

Thats not a K.O.

3-0 = K.O
4-1 = T.K.O

3-1 = Jack shit.

Read the rules.
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Post by Jesodist »

Damn i forgot i accepted Def-nit's vote my bad bro.
Well anyways Uppin For KO!
anyone online?
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Post by Jesodist »

Upping for votes anyone who check my battle i'll be sure to do the same.

Damn i am surprise people dont check my battle and i always check all the battles on here.
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Post by Jesodist »

That punk should voted instead of just free posting on my battle. Stay the fuck outta my battles ALPHA BITCH with your pink avatar.
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