Alpha Bill vs -ViP(Alpha Bill)
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- Omega Bill
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Alpha Bill vs -ViP(Alpha Bill)
Cats:
Punches
Multies
Flow
Entertainment
Deadline tomorrow.
5 or 6 bars. You choose.
Good luck.
Punches
Multies
Flow
Entertainment
Deadline tomorrow.
5 or 6 bars. You choose.
Good luck.
LoL Ya Can Take it How You Want it, It just A Battle, You Come hard Or Not..
Double Fl is a Girl, I Call Girls Bitches..
Cee4's Mother is Dead Koss She Got Raped, He Talked About My Fam So I'ma Do it
Too.
Complexity Thing Says "Wild Bill Sucks At Life"..
Banged = What Gangsters Do/And Had Sex
Hazard Clims he Streets But Never Banged, And One Time Wild Bill Said He Still A Virgin, if Ya'll Say its a Fake Personal Then I'ma Bring Up The Page WHere hE Said it..So Ya STop Bitchin ...Hahahah
Precise Fucks HIs Dog (HE GOT EXPOSE FOR THAT LOL)
Thats RIght I'm CHANGIN-THIS-FUCKIN-SITE, Offline I Grind And Shine And I Make it RAIN-IN-THIS-LOVIN-NIGHT..
But You Like "Hazard in The Streetz" Youll Would Never BANG-IN-YA-FUCKIN-LIFE..(His A Virgin)
My Scripts So Sick And You A Bitch So Quit Spittin, Koss -Vip Going GET-RIDE-OF-YA-NAPPY-RAPS...
Then I'll Do You Like When "Precise Fucks His Dog"..I'ma Be SHITTED-ON-YA-NASTY-ASS...(Daamnn)
You Goin Be Like Cee4's Mother Be Burried Quick, Koss I Got STUFF-THAT-STRIKES-PUNKS..(Scripts)
You Aint Good Standin Next To Me And Ask Complexity, All You Do is SUCK-AT-LIFE-,(WHAT)??...
And I Cant Say I 'Fucked Yo Bitch' Koss YOu'll Never Goin GET-YOU-A-WIFE..I Done RIPPED-YOU,ALRIGHT?,
Koss I WISH'D-YOU-WOULD-FIGHT, But Your Just Like "Double FL" A BITCH-TO-THE-SITE...Daaaammn
And You Wont Win Koss You FACIN-THE-DEVILS-WHIP..,-vip the Type to Start BLAZIN-THE-META-CLIPS
But I'm Just Goin Treat You Like The Ninja Turtles And Put Your FACE-IN-THE-SHREDDA-BiTCH...(Over)
Double Fl is a Girl, I Call Girls Bitches..
Cee4's Mother is Dead Koss She Got Raped, He Talked About My Fam So I'ma Do it
Too.
Complexity Thing Says "Wild Bill Sucks At Life"..
Banged = What Gangsters Do/And Had Sex
Hazard Clims he Streets But Never Banged, And One Time Wild Bill Said He Still A Virgin, if Ya'll Say its a Fake Personal Then I'ma Bring Up The Page WHere hE Said it..So Ya STop Bitchin ...Hahahah
Precise Fucks HIs Dog (HE GOT EXPOSE FOR THAT LOL)
Thats RIght I'm CHANGIN-THIS-FUCKIN-SITE, Offline I Grind And Shine And I Make it RAIN-IN-THIS-LOVIN-NIGHT..
But You Like "Hazard in The Streetz" Youll Would Never BANG-IN-YA-FUCKIN-LIFE..(His A Virgin)
My Scripts So Sick And You A Bitch So Quit Spittin, Koss -Vip Going GET-RIDE-OF-YA-NAPPY-RAPS...
Then I'll Do You Like When "Precise Fucks His Dog"..I'ma Be SHITTED-ON-YA-NASTY-ASS...(Daamnn)
You Goin Be Like Cee4's Mother Be Burried Quick, Koss I Got STUFF-THAT-STRIKES-PUNKS..(Scripts)
You Aint Good Standin Next To Me And Ask Complexity, All You Do is SUCK-AT-LIFE-,(WHAT)??...
And I Cant Say I 'Fucked Yo Bitch' Koss YOu'll Never Goin GET-YOU-A-WIFE..I Done RIPPED-YOU,ALRIGHT?,
Koss I WISH'D-YOU-WOULD-FIGHT, But Your Just Like "Double FL" A BITCH-TO-THE-SITE...Daaaammn
And You Wont Win Koss You FACIN-THE-DEVILS-WHIP..,-vip the Type to Start BLAZIN-THE-META-CLIPS
But I'm Just Goin Treat You Like The Ninja Turtles And Put Your FACE-IN-THE-SHREDDA-BiTCH...(Over)
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- Omega Bill
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[font=Comic Sans MS]You a little faggot, that talks ratchets, but dont play till ur bigger
If Im the fake one, how come ur a spic and cry about the word nigger?!
Having the po-po's drop when the fo-fo's pop soon as your lo-lo stops
Put holes in ya brain, u paintin cocks in Paint cuz u too poor 4 photo-shop!
I shoulda murdered u "Sooner". but u the type to hide how you fuck guys
This gringo from Oklahoma, way Im fuckin u up u can call me the Buckeyes!
"I got money", lie on a rap forum, bout u carry a heater, but ya lifes weaker
You rollin in dough like a bakery? y the fuck u wearin khakis n a wife beater?!
The fuck u keep spillin about? How u fucked Hazards ass n he came in ya mouth?
You the type to cry on friday night, while you dry hump the cushions from ya couch![/font]
Oklahoma Sooners - NCAA Football
Good battle, man. You've gotten better from your first battle.
Uppin' votes.
If Im the fake one, how come ur a spic and cry about the word nigger?!
Having the po-po's drop when the fo-fo's pop soon as your lo-lo stops
Put holes in ya brain, u paintin cocks in Paint cuz u too poor 4 photo-shop!
I shoulda murdered u "Sooner". but u the type to hide how you fuck guys
This gringo from Oklahoma, way Im fuckin u up u can call me the Buckeyes!
"I got money", lie on a rap forum, bout u carry a heater, but ya lifes weaker
You rollin in dough like a bakery? y the fuck u wearin khakis n a wife beater?!
The fuck u keep spillin about? How u fucked Hazards ass n he came in ya mouth?
You the type to cry on friday night, while you dry hump the cushions from ya couch![/font]
Oklahoma Sooners - NCAA Football
Good battle, man. You've gotten better from your first battle.
Uppin' votes.
- Dead Silence
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Punches-Bill
Alright here it is
shit was way to fucking close in this.
Vip's Best Bar-
My Scripts So Sick And You A Bitch So Quit Spittin, Koss -Vip Going GET-RIDE-OF-YA-NAPPY-RAPS...
Then I'll Do You Like When "Precise Fucks His Dog"..I'ma Be SHITTED-ON-YA-NASTY-ASS...(Daamnn)
Bill's Best Bar-
Having the po-po's drop when the fo-fo's pop soon as your lo-lo stops
Put holes in ya brain, u paintin cocks in Paint cuz u too poor 4 photo-shop!
both were very good but bill had more harder hitting ones
Vips had some buut it was more of a slap to the face rather than a punch
Multies-Vip
He just simple had more
bill did mostly 2 word multis
Flow-Bill
Simplely hes was easier to read.Flowed very well together but i could still feel his emotion thru this
as for Vip
he was just straight going for ur throat but in a bad way
its like when u record a track and its an angry one you dont wanna scream into it and make it sound all distorted but u want your voice at the right level so the listeners can save their ears from bleeding
Entertainment-Bill
Hes shit was just fun to read
but so was Vips
but i got more chuckles outta his punches
that is what u want to do in a battle sometimes
Vote-Alpha Bill
Alright here it is
shit was way to fucking close in this.
Vip's Best Bar-
My Scripts So Sick And You A Bitch So Quit Spittin, Koss -Vip Going GET-RIDE-OF-YA-NAPPY-RAPS...
Then I'll Do You Like When "Precise Fucks His Dog"..I'ma Be SHITTED-ON-YA-NASTY-ASS...(Daamnn)
Bill's Best Bar-
Having the po-po's drop when the fo-fo's pop soon as your lo-lo stops
Put holes in ya brain, u paintin cocks in Paint cuz u too poor 4 photo-shop!
both were very good but bill had more harder hitting ones
Vips had some buut it was more of a slap to the face rather than a punch
Multies-Vip
He just simple had more
bill did mostly 2 word multis
Flow-Bill
Simplely hes was easier to read.Flowed very well together but i could still feel his emotion thru this
as for Vip
he was just straight going for ur throat but in a bad way
its like when u record a track and its an angry one you dont wanna scream into it and make it sound all distorted but u want your voice at the right level so the listeners can save their ears from bleeding
Entertainment-Bill
Hes shit was just fun to read
but so was Vips
but i got more chuckles outta his punches
that is what u want to do in a battle sometimes
Vote-Alpha Bill
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jesus... not a great battle..
imo bill should have took this, as he's better than his verse. VIP came average.. he used personals on everyone else and applied them to bill... besides the complexity "sucks at life" punch... theres nothing that couldnt be used on anyone else on the site... aka - indirect, which is always bad in a battle, as you need solid, personal punches to clown your opponent..
breaking it down.. i'd give..
Punches: bill
Multies: bill
Flow: bill
Entertainment: VIP
let me explain..
bill had smoother flow... just from less words lol... hi multis where also smoother, im not a fan of Vip's style of multi use.. thats just me.. i prefer the less forced, simpler type in a battle.. and bill had more personal punches, that where clever enough... i voted vip entertainement, cause he put effort in, and he had some funny shit, but it was funny for the wrong reasons, ie i was laughin at precise and hazard etc.... not at bill.. so thats where you went wrong..
Further breakdown and advice..
Bill - the closer is wtf? lol.. its barely a punch.. its just a tiny jab of a played virgin joke.. a newbie would think twice before posting that in a battle.. you really need to cut those out if you trying to become a pro and give everyone a problem.. buckeyes punch was cool.. the rest you have decent ideas.. but are just stating facts.. not turning them into real creative punches.. ie.. you wear a wifebeater.. you cant afford photoshop etc.. its okay.. but you gotta learn to twist em and be more creative.. also use more nameplay..
VIP - you came correct but as said.. diss your opponenet more.. your coming up with all this shit about other people that it barely even applies to bill.. are you battling cee4, prcise and hazard??... no.. so why they even being mentioned.. unless a situation of theirs directly applies to bill etc..like the suck at life punch was your best.. but it again was stating fact.. you cold have worked it like.. "who does bill dickride".. even if it was a one off accusation, it could still be used.. so .. "call complexities dick, "life".. cause all you do is suck at it"... etc.. not great.. but you get the idea.. some wordplay thrown in.. and as complexitiy says that joke. it applies to bill personally.. get me.. overall work on dissing your oppoenent with wordplay and personal punches
vote alpha bill
imo bill should have took this, as he's better than his verse. VIP came average.. he used personals on everyone else and applied them to bill... besides the complexity "sucks at life" punch... theres nothing that couldnt be used on anyone else on the site... aka - indirect, which is always bad in a battle, as you need solid, personal punches to clown your opponent..
breaking it down.. i'd give..
Punches: bill
Multies: bill
Flow: bill
Entertainment: VIP
let me explain..
bill had smoother flow... just from less words lol... hi multis where also smoother, im not a fan of Vip's style of multi use.. thats just me.. i prefer the less forced, simpler type in a battle.. and bill had more personal punches, that where clever enough... i voted vip entertainement, cause he put effort in, and he had some funny shit, but it was funny for the wrong reasons, ie i was laughin at precise and hazard etc.... not at bill.. so thats where you went wrong..
Further breakdown and advice..
Bill - the closer is wtf? lol.. its barely a punch.. its just a tiny jab of a played virgin joke.. a newbie would think twice before posting that in a battle.. you really need to cut those out if you trying to become a pro and give everyone a problem.. buckeyes punch was cool.. the rest you have decent ideas.. but are just stating facts.. not turning them into real creative punches.. ie.. you wear a wifebeater.. you cant afford photoshop etc.. its okay.. but you gotta learn to twist em and be more creative.. also use more nameplay..
VIP - you came correct but as said.. diss your opponenet more.. your coming up with all this shit about other people that it barely even applies to bill.. are you battling cee4, prcise and hazard??... no.. so why they even being mentioned.. unless a situation of theirs directly applies to bill etc..like the suck at life punch was your best.. but it again was stating fact.. you cold have worked it like.. "who does bill dickride".. even if it was a one off accusation, it could still be used.. so .. "call complexities dick, "life".. cause all you do is suck at it"... etc.. not great.. but you get the idea.. some wordplay thrown in.. and as complexitiy says that joke. it applies to bill personally.. get me.. overall work on dissing your oppoenent with wordplay and personal punches
vote alpha bill
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