Dead Silence VS Gorilla Mist (Gorilla Mist wins via TKO)

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Dead Silence VS Gorilla Mist (Gorilla Mist wins via TKO)

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Audio Battle
Track must be 90 Seconds minimum/3 minutes maximum
No Recycling, No crew votes

We will be watching for:
-Flow
-Entertainment
-Swagga
-Creativity
-Overall Delivery


When voting time comes, there will be absolutely:
-No Dick Ridin
-No Hate Votes


ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED

Due: Each particpant has 3 days to check in from this post; and 1 week to drop their verse from the final check-in time.

As usual:
3-0 = KO
4-1 - TKO
Goodluck to you both.

[align=center]---UPDATE---[/align]

here are both battle verses streamed.

[align=center]First is Gorilla Mist's verse...
<a href='http://www.soundclick.com/EmceeBattles'>
</a><object type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowScriptAccess="never" allowNetworking="internal" height="60" width="473" data="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
<param name="allowScriptAccess" value="never">
<param name="allowNetworking" value="internal">
<param name="movie" value="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
<param name="loop" value="false">
<param name="menu" value="false">
<param name="quality" value="high">
<param name="wmode" value="transparent">
<param name="flashvars" value="playType=single&songid=7256117&scid=7256117&q=hi&ext=1&autoplay=0">
<param name="scale" value="noscale">
<param name="salign" value="b">
<param name="bgcolor" value="#000000">
</object>


Here is Dead Silence's Verse...
<a href='http://www.soundclick.com/EmceeBattles'>
</a><object type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowScriptAccess="never" allowNetworking="internal" height="60" width="473" data="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
<param name="allowScriptAccess" value="never">
<param name="allowNetworking" value="internal">
<param name="movie" value="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
<param name="loop" value="false">
<param name="menu" value="false">
<param name="quality" value="high">
<param name="wmode" value="transparent">
<param name="flashvars" value="playType=single&songid=7256086&scid=7256086&q=hi&ext=1&autoplay=0">
<param name="scale" value="noscale">
<param name="salign" value="b">
<param name="bgcolor" value="#000000">
</object>[/align]

Voting for this battle is now open. Please vote by the listed categories and explain your vote.
Last edited by Kurse on Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:41 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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check
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Post by Gorilla Mist »

This Mah Check..! But How Can I Download the beat when i click the link all it does it go to section and play it?


what the fuck is up?
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Right click over DOWNLOAD

...and select "Save Target As"

and then just save it to your desktop or whatever.

But you've both checked in now...You're verses are due 1 week from today. (tues 6PM my time)

*remember..just becuz it doesn't say NO FLIPPING in the rules doesn't mean you can. So no flipping please.

Good luck to you both.
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Ight Verse Being Posted Tonight or tomorrow.
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Gorilla In The Mist

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Post by Dead Silence »

gorilla mist let me explain//
you do not know how to play this game//
Slit you from head to toe//
Wholl win this battle? i gotta know//
Delete ya name,coz Illest cant stand ya//
Your actin like a kung-fu panda//*
Tired of Shittin on Doods so i toss em//
ppl who listen to u proceed with caution//
How do you have rep with Non-Existing Tracks?//*
How can you walk when im twisting your back?//
In this battle ull get bruised and battered//
than ill leave you abused and shattered//
you can not fuck with my game//
and if u do im gonna take aim//


There is no need for this applause//*
because im finna show all of his flaws//
hes style is whack,flow is lame//
and nursery rhymeing is His A Game?//
Overall hes shitteir than Big P,Happy Mothers Day//*
Dear mama, that wanna be MC was murdered the other day//*
Looking for his grave but it could be found//
guess everyone didnt care bout u when u were above that ground//
no need to exlain all his scars//
One track from TK6 left him seeing so many stars//
after that he was never the same//
so he decided retired from the rap game//
and vowed to never ever return again//
Hip-hop is save,thank god Amen//*

* in order of appearance
sig says somtin bout kung fu panda
Didnt see any of his songs in the creation chamber
has applauding in his song
big p sucked and did a song called happy mothers day
again referring to the big p thing but he recorded it to The Dear Mama Beat with 2pac
saying he was killin Hip Hop and since he "retired" hip hop is saved

other bars not here were freestyled
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^ Had to clean up the thread from a few freeposts and unecessary posts. Please vote.
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Post by Arvincible »

Both need mad work, i know i aint audio but i know skill when i..well...hear it.

anyways cats...

Flow...GM, DS was just chanting the whole time.
Entertainment...tie, i really wasnt.
Swagger...GM only cuz DS was nonexistant
Creativity...DS obviously put more effort in the intro and outro
Overall Delivery...GM

get to work guys

2-0 Gorilla Mist
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Yea...unfortunately if you're in the tourny you can't vote for one another because it's almost like dictating which direction the tourny'll take. I'm sure your vote is un-biased Tre...but it can't be accepted unfortunately.

Appreciate the effort of participation though. lol

Thus making the vote count only 1-0 in favor of Gorilla Mist.

Keep the votes coming.
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My bad guys I didnt know...OK uppin for votes..
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Post by HKX »

Flow - GM; was feelin his flow more than DS, DS sounded like he was bored u really need 2 switch up ur flow dawg cuz u sound like u ain't even tryin honestly its a battle dawg dis ain't a speech class.

Entertainment - GM; I was fallin asleep when I was listenin 2 DS no entertainment wat so ever, GM had me rollin wit his freestyle lol

Swagga - GM; DS u need sum swagga on ur presence when u get on da mic kid, GM took dis all da way

Creativity -

Creativity - DS; Da intro and outro was funny and u took da time 2 write ur shit and 4 dat u get dis I was readin thru ur shit it sounds good readin it but ur mic presence is a no no homie

Overall Delivery - GM; besides ur whole vocals bein all loud and all u got dis one could feel ur battle more than DS

VOTE: GM

DS on da real dawg u need 2 amp up or shit a lot dawg u sound da same as u did da year b4 and when u started flowin it shouldn't be dat way kid u need 2 ante up and dis asap cuz if u goin da route u go ur jus gonna keep gettin murked and u wonder y niggaz don't vote 4 u on da awards and all. When it comes 2 a battle u gotta go off not sound bored dawg, I'm not sayin dis 2 bring u down and all but I see Kurse tell u i see other niggaz on illest tell u there opinion and ur jus like fuck it imma do me i don't care wat they say. Homie u sound like ass no lie u sound like a robot and shit u need 2 practice a lot i mean a lot kid. No hate 2 DS and all but think everyone on illest would agree wit me I kno dat u ain't got da much experience on da mic but how long have u been doin dis kid trust me try harder cuz it don't sound like u r.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

^^ damn haha, i think dead silence been doin audio longer and more than i have, u got the right idea u just ain't puttin work in, i can understand and relate, i mean yea sure i got more experience in writing and i got other people to push me, but honestly i would think u'd do better alone and on ur own, cuz i would...i just dont have the equipment, i mean now i sorta do but still..ur quality's not that bad, ..just do wat other people do..listen to urself and compare it to ur favorite artist..(other than lil wayne)..and try to match up the flow and show confidence

n e ways just a word of advice from the underdog...2-0 gm leads
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Damn.
This battle was hard to judge, due to the fact that I wasn't really impressed by either drop. (no offense to neither of you)
But here's the cat-score:

-Flow: Gorilla Mist
-Entertainment: Tie
-Swagga: Gorilla Mist (barely)
-Creativity: Dead Silence
-Overall Delivery: Dead Silence (barely)

As you can see. From my point of view, the categories are tied. The point of this tourny is to crown a new Champion. Someone who is truely deserving of the title. We're not searching for the punchline king...or the topical king. We're searching for the best overall entertainer! Who keeps us interested, who keeps us listening, and let me tell you...when it came to both of your drops...listening to them was as painfull as pulling teeth! Both of you could've done better. But I can tell just by listening that both of these were rushed! And when you're in a competition...rushing can only introduce you to failure quicker than you'd like.
Gorilla...You took no-time preparing this at all, and that's just insulting to the integrity of the competition and tournement itself. You free-styled the whole thing, which is fine...had you freestyle had an impact. It was barely an attack directed towards Dead Silence. It was just a bunch of rhymed words that really had no pack behind their punches. You had a WEEK to write a diss, and all the listeners get is a "less than impressive" freestyle. Very disappointing! But atleast you had somewhat of a flow, so I will give you that.
Dead Silence...you had barely any flow whatsoever. You haven't the slightest idea on how to ride a beat and that's always been your down-fall as an audio artist. The beginning of your second verse, you stayed on beat for a total of 6 bars and then you fell off. But those 6 bars were the only time you were on beat! That's horrible. You need to work on that BIG TIME!!! Now for the positive side. The fact that you atleast wrote your battle was good. So it was more than evident that you took preparation time and made an actual effort to do this. Which showed in your creativity. But the Martin Luther speech at the end...made no fuckin sense at all. Don't just cram shit into an audio to fill time...that's just tasteless.

My vote for the overall presentation goes to Dead Silence. But barely. If it were my call...neither of you would advance. But none the less...there has to be a victor. Dead won this in my opinion because he actually took time out to do it and didn't just half-assed it. Neither of you threw any real punches at one another, so it came down to the presentation. Dead's what slightly more creative with his intro and outro, as well as how he structured it. And for that the scales tipped in his favor. Bottomline...whichever one of you wins this round and advances to the second round.
TAKE YOUR TIME.
Write it out...practice your flow and get it down.
There's noway in hell either of you will win unless you bring your A-Game to the table.

Vote: Dead Silence
Current Score: 2-1 in Gorilla Mist's favor
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Post by Omega Bill »

-Flow - Gorilla Mist


-Entertainment - Dead Silence had some funny bars.


-Swagga - Gorilla Mist. DS you sounded nervous or something.


-Creativity - Both.


-Overall Delivery - Gorilla Mist.

Vote - Gorilla Mist.

Dead Silence, you really gotta work on your flow, it's almost like spoken word when you're spitting (atleast in this)
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