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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 4:51 am
by The Architect
sorry bout that, ended up goin to sleep early since i had to get up at the crack this mornin,

i'll read and judge it later n find out wat dj or kurse thinks about it then get down to a decision

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 8:18 am
by complexity
EkomS wrote:sorry bout that, ended up goin to sleep early since i had to get up at the crack this mornin,

i'll read and judge it later n find out wat dj or kurse thinks about it then get down to a decision
I'll vote if you and Jesus split your decision.

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 9:12 am
by The Architect
ok im just gonna give my single vote, and i'll use categories to explain

Punches:Sintakz (close imo)
Personals:Sintakz (both had some sin had more)
Flow:Sintakz (due to his rhymescheme)
Wordplay/Nameplay:C4 (only wordplay was nameplay)
Rhyme Scheme:Sintakz (definitely more complex imo)
Metaphors/Similes:C4 (close imo)
Vocabulary:C4 (sorta close imo)
Entertainment:Sintakz (for the punches and flow)

Vote:Sintakz

favorite punchline overall was by c4

"U Couldn't Get A 'Sin King Feeling' On Board The Titanic! "



and i didn't see any flipping either way, it was all out of context

i believe kurse voted for c4 so this is a 1-1 situation, i requested for plex and dj to also give their votes..since this is the final round

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 10:23 am
by Kurse
Yea, my vote was for Cee4...here's the breakdown.

Punches: TIE (Tie..both we pretty equally riddled)
Personals: Sintakz (Sintakz edged this out by a few)
Flow: Cee4 (Sintakz rhymescheme is more complex, but Cee4's offers one that is solid enough for a smart person to grasp, yet structured easy enough for a dumbed down reader to enjoy...if that makes sense. It's what I consider as diversity of the actual read itself.)
Wordplay/Nameplay: Cee4 (Wordplay was not heavy, but Cee4 had obvious better nameplay)
Rhyme Scheme: Sintakz (Sintakz was slightly more complex)
Metaphors/Similes: TIE (too close to surface a winner in this cat imo)
Vocabulary: Cee4 (again close becuz both have their own play on words, but Cee4 edged this one out)
Entertainment: Cee4 (simply because of his flexible rhyme scheme as well as entertaining nameplay)

Vote: Cee4

Couple of favorite lines with good nameplay/wordplay were..
Cee4 wrote:**Ya Hopes Restin On Just Who Quits, Cats Always 'Tryna Moccasin/Mock A Sin' N They Aint Testin If A Shoe Fits!

**But Ur A Loser, A Sad Case Who Give A Damn? A Baking Trays The Only Place That 'Cinnamon/ Sin A Man!


Sintakz wrote:**so BITCH 'hang tight' wit ya 'NECK IN A NOOSE'! while i 'throw c4 through the door so many time's' ima get 'CHARGED-WIT-DOMESTIC-ABUSE'!!

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 1:09 pm
by The Architect
think ur sintakz quote was done wrong lol, that's wat cee4 said as u mentioned above it, n e ways uppin for dj and plex's thoughts on this battle

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 2:14 pm
by Kurse
Good eye. I erased the wrong line when quoting him. lol Fixed!

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 9:11 pm
by drunken jesus
Quotables
Cee4 wrote:
Cats Always 'Tryna Moccasin/Mock A Sin' N They Aint Testin If A Shoe Fits!

Get 'Rocked N Roll' Over By A King With Pressley Hype, The Crown Practice 'Takz Evasion' Like Its Wesley Snipes!

But Like Paris Hilton Ur Always Crying To The Judges!, I Dispute Ur Oppression

Open Casket!, Expose 'Sin In A Box' Like Dudes At Confession!

This Man`s Dolo, So Indicates, A 'Sex Life Like Star Wars', Hans Solo,

Its Your Honour To Die Slow, Bitch U Better Dial 911 If U Wanna See Five-O
Sintakz wrote:[font=Verdana]& i rebound like 'fuck wot u been buildin'', i'll 'bring u tumblin' back to ya root's' wen 'DESTROYIN'-YA-BLUE-PRINT'!!

Plus its ASTOUNDIN'-I-MENTION that ya 'cockyness' was 'SHOUTIN'-WIT-TENSION'cos u knew i was winnin' started 'COUNTIN'-ON-SECOND'!!

ya 'concept's are rush'd' it's like they 'WAITIN'-FOR-THE-QUIX-SOLUTION'

heats hot it'll make 'C walk' without 'DANCIN'-WIT-CRIP'S'!!
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Overall I think Cee4 took this, his wordplay and punchlines were hitting harder, he had alotta duds cause he tryed to fit one in per line but the strong ones made up for it, i didn't like that he relyed too much on nameplay and didn't get real personal (especially since they both live in the same town), that being said Sintakz personals weren't all that effective his verse was slightly less generic but his punchlines weren't really connecting well he had alotta stretched concepts, his rhythm and rhyme scheme were a lil better but in the long multi strings he had some forced shit, overall rap battles come down to lines and Cee4 just had better lines

btw in both verses those were the longest 8 bars i've ever seen lmao

congrats, Cee4 gets the win by split decision

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 9:15 pm
by drunken jesus
already closed so i just updated the records