Sintakz vs Hazard [ Round 2 ]

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Sintakz vs Hazard [ Round 2 ]

Post by complexity » Tue Nov 25, 2008 8:02 am


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Post by Sintakz » Thu Nov 27, 2008 11:03 am

[font=Verdana][align=center]Where do you go after you die? [/align]


An envision of solace? Or a prison of no place?
Or the ground, wer you've been diggin' a low grave.
For day's, we stay on a test we're facin' alone,
Try be savin' our own, on a trip to destination unknown.
So easy eliptical, we walk to the darkness of fate
Each breath too late, but still try & out smart death today.


Ahhh, gotta be out. Time's bein' a bitch wit work/college & other real life shit. If i make it back before the deadline i'll post the rest, if not, good luck in the rest of the tourney haz.

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[align=Center]Sintakz
Fuckin' you up with stratospheric sentence's!
-Keep the hate up.
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Post by Haz » Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:48 am

[align=center]Theres More-Than eight Bucks-a-Hour..
I Explore-Lands,Eyes,Struck-Wit-Power..
To Vision Better And Reduct-Da-Screams..
Then Reality Hits It's Just-a-Dream.....[/align]

[align=center] Dream - [/align][align=center]You Can! if You Believe..You Recieve Your Dream Few Decieved!..
Your Never Shootin 4 The Stars 'Neglectin-a-Shotti'
Ready 2 'Give It Up' Like a Girl Not Respectin-Da-Body,Erectins-Ha-Hobby!
Lifes Clay People 'Shape-It-ya-See..Realitys What you Make-It-Ta-Be!...

Kid Dreams Of Big Skeams To Show you Who's Block-is-Dis
He Popps-ya-Crisp! I've Discovered The Foundation of Life Like Democratis!..
Dream's r Pursued-Needs,The Kid Wanted His Block Watch Dood-Bleed!...
Are World Puts The Human Race-Ta-Shame,We Need To Earse-Da-Pain
Have Loss Replaced-Wid-Gain,Baptize The World Lace-Da-Rain
With Holy Water Slowly Slaughter Demon's In The Face-a-Mayne..
Learn 2 Love Break-da-Chains of Fate So Theres No Date-ya-Slain!...
i'll Never Stop Dreamin Like Terrorist Body Parts 'Faith-Remains!'..[/align]
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Post by The Architect » Sat Nov 29, 2008 3:56 pm

difficult battle to judge because one was only half way done and the other had half that was off topic, so to judge it more accurately i eliminated the second half of hazard's drop so the first half(which was more on topic) was being judged, however it seems like 2 different things being said about the same topic, which would be "dreams speaking to me" and sintakz was more on topic as to where u go after u die, unoriginal but none the less the point is to stay on topic, personally i think hazard should move on for atleast trying and dropping a full verse, where sintakz put little or no effort on half a verse but yet reguardless delivered it better

to sum that up..i'm giving it to sintakz even tho i think hazard deserves the win a lot more than sintakz does, hazard u went three different ways on the topic.. which showed diversity but the main point was to stay on topic throughout the entire thing, and even with the second half of ur verse covered it was still 2 split meaning on the same topic which hurt ur verse,

plex and i don't believe either of u deserve the win however hazard atleast put more work into it... and well plex signed off just a while ago..so i can't say who goes on, i'll leave it as 1-1 and let drunken jesus decide who will move on unless plex comes on and decides for sure, im leaning more towards sintakz on this one for being more on topic however





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Post by complexity » Sat Nov 29, 2008 4:12 pm

Nah, I have to agree that I HATE giving the win to Sintakz, but Hazards lack of direction lost him a lot of points. I thought Sinktakz verse was stronger in an overall sense.

"Ready 2 'Give It Up' Like a Girl Not Respectin-Da-Body,Erectins-Ha-Hobby!
Lifes Clay People 'Shape-It-ya-See..Realitys What you Make-It-Ta-Be!... "

Hazard had one strong line. A lot of filler and BLAH, while Sin came with at least 3 bars that were in rhythm and sometimes simplicity wins.

Overall: Sinktakz


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