Quix vs C4 [ Round 2 ]

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Quix vs C4 [ Round 2 ]

Post by complexity » Tue Nov 25, 2008 8:01 am


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Post by Quix » Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:36 pm

Topic??? Dreams speaking to you ...or....Speaking to the mic????
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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dreams speaking to you

Post by Quix » Thu Nov 27, 2008 2:46 am

Dreams Speaking to me.





i'm been Portrayed as a villian by Enemies and mah Children
Entity of a Murderer cuz Mah Tendencies are for Killings
But i Invision a place, where its All Real, and no Decisions are fake
allows a Limit-less Faith, race to the finish but there Consistanlly late
they Eventually Make the bad better and all yah commitments seem Great
your Pain dissapears, you dead Mother Appears, like an Angel in front of you
as soon as that happens, they rip away Erything they Dangled in front of you
and you awake in a sweat, wid crust round yah eyes and a TAste of Regret
in a state of Neglect, not believeing what you saw cuz it don't Make Any sense
but your just protecting your goals like you were playing Defence!
now your taking a stance, thinking, this won't HAppen to me
untill yah subconcience tired, and your BAck in a Dream
and they Tell you to shoot, its like a Spell over you
you come in contact with there dirt like you Fell from the roof
but again, they Tell Me tah Shoot, but i awake from theses Tendencies
and for some reason, i'm leaving wid Guns and Bladez for mah enemie!
go figure....:)




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Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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Post by Cee4 » Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:18 am

When You Die You Go To A Place Where….

Life Was A Tributary, To A Sea Of Segregation…Cold As The Night Air
Enter An Empire Of Emptiness, Empty Like The Souls That Reside There
A Place Where Everything Is Nothing, Just A Black Seismic Chasm
Time On Earth A Forlorn Forgotten Figment, In Your Eyes A Spasm
But Your Memories Departed, Your Not Conscious Of Your Own Skin
No Angels With Red Carpets, Your Not Conscious Of Your Own Kin
A Place Where Everything Is Nothing, Where You Never Really Exist
Unknown Past, No Future, A Last Chance To Float Freely But Missed
Coz Ur Perception Has Perished, Imagine If You Could See Its Brutal
Your Deception Is Cherished, Unaware All Lifes Good Deeds Were Futile
An Abyss, Where Galaxy's Intertwine, You Roam Amongst Infinity
Alone In The Vicinity, No Affinity, There's No Home For Your Divinity
Everything Is Nothing, The Meaning Of Life Is An Historical Lesson
With Logic And Comprehension, It Would Be A Rhetorical Question,
But Your Oblivious, In Oblivion, Conveyor Belt With No End To The Line
A Place Where You Are Nothing, Merely DNA….Suspended In Time





basically i believe you dont go anywhere that your consciously aware of after you die. ie.. no god, no seeing your dead relatives, no live 2pac and biggie freestyle battles..etc you just kinda float unaware in a black hole type thing
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Post by The Architect » Sat Nov 29, 2008 3:50 pm

i'm been Portrayed as a villian by Enemies and mah Children
Entity of a Murderer cuz Mah Tendencies are for Killings

^^ i liked that bar but i think it hurt u for the topic,

but your just protecting your goals like you were playing Defence!
now your taking a stance, thinking, this won't HAppen to me

^^ this bar could've been replaced with something direct instead of how u felt and y, as well as thoughts in ur head,

overall.. quix delivered the "dreams speaking to me" better than everyone else in the tournament who chose it did, perfect example of dreams actually sending u a message..the ending was nice as well,

however cee4 stuck with it a little better in my eyes, the verse's quality wasn't as smooth as quix's but it had its advantages and seemed a little more original, although both topics i've written before with the same message u both sent..seen quix's concept more often, n e ways cee4 was a little more on topic, i think the topic was easier than quix's as well but there's no points awarded for who had the harder topic so it has no effect, overall cee4 took it by a hair for the topical, complexity agrees that cee4 won as well so cee4 moves on to the next round
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