Chozn vs Sintakz [ Round 1 ]

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/super ... 11163.html

[Sintakz]

As it's thursday i gotta drop early.
Never online friday/sat/sunday.
So hope you show dude, hard to get personal's on homie (1 post & then fuck off?)



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Homie! Quit 'hittin' the dump's', as 'i'ma send ya skyward' wen i 'SPIT THIS PROJECTION'!
Have u 'out on a limb' like a 'FITNESS INFECTION'! no personals bitch!? SNITCH! U part of WITNESS PROTECTION!
Is that how we aint got any personals on you lol!

I aint tryin' on this dude.

I'ma WET THIS GHOST UP! & LET THIS TOAST BURST!
till he SWEAT & FROZE UP cos 'u showin'? NAH! u need ta 'GET YA POST UP'!
(ur verse is a 'post', he has 1 post. get ya post up/get ya verse up)
Only time u 'rush'd in the head' is if you SNIFF THE SNOW & HOT CHARLIE,
cos drugs? u couldn't 'smoke joint's' 'PICKIN' BONES WIT BOB MARLEY'!
(joints/bone joints)
No way SON CAN JUST SHUDDER TREBLES cos even if homie 'beatin' on stat quo', he still aint 'CUM ON ANOTHER LEVEL'!

You're wack & gay,
Very wack & gay

Im too strong
You're too wrong
(ooooooo multis!!)

Suck my dick u
fuckin' bich!
(omg more multis)

last bar, & even if u come on to clash, spar
U'll still torqued to the road like NASCAR!

Ha har, away to watch porn, PEACE



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[chozn1]

This dude sayin he ain't tryin man //
But then again he b postin at 1:00 A.M//
Thinking all day on how he goin get at me
Worriying about when im gonna pos t//
You say you leaving me Froze up //
But my brain still working running like A hard drive //
you & I know it, cuz you can feel the vibe //
Whispering into your ear saying “chozn1 has arrivedâ€

[complexity]

Chozn's verse lacked any good personals at all. He had a much broader range of topics he could have tackled. In the next round, I'd recommend in the next round that Sintakz takes advantage of each bar. All three votes go to Sintakz.

-records updated-