Round 1: Raiza Sharpe vs Subsist(Sub)

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Round 1: Raiza Sharpe vs Subsist(Sub)

Post by Omega Bill »

The sense is: Hearing, rules were posted in the sticky.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

FUCK!
Why do i have to be against subsist?
Like i rag out on the guy now i have to back it up.
:(:(



EDIT: Can we drop earlier?
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Post by Brah-Vo »

oH AND CHECK.
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check
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Keyed quick ...
Had fuckin no idea how to interpret this topic.
Lmao so i just threw it in..

peace.






U can talk u can laugh u can listen
Without ya ears thats all u would be missin
The soundwaves dont register, though doctors found ways
to give ya hearin back, ya ears give ya balance, dont veer off track
Vibrations in the air, elation u cant bear, when they enter in ur ear
In a crowd miss the opportunity when u were meant to leer
Without ya ears the cold silence is there to center on ya fears
listen to the teacher LISTEN coz u meant to earn ya years
Hearing, How Pricesless it is
without ya ears the rap industry would be a micless biz
Plug in ya earphones, Listen to the Music
Ya hearing u would lose it if u choose to abuse it
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Post by Subsist »

-One fine thursday, woke up excited it was my birthday
-Through the hallway, dad yells out "Get the first aid!"
-Heart beats a few times before I hear my mom weep
-A car screech and a gunshot its those gun creeps
-But hands on my ears, noise and screams im in fear
-The sirens break and and it seems the cops are here
-Suddenly it stops, I hear nothing for a moment
-Footsteps treading on the stairs I felt cornered
-The doorknob turns and the door's slowly creaking
-Under my cover I shivered but someone was speaking
-I hear moaning, it gets louder and closer to my ear
-My cover gets pulled , "SURPRISE" and a happy new year!
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Post by Arvincible »

Flow: Subsist cuz RS seemed more like a poem.
Creativity: Raiza...subsist's was stupid in the end.
Vocab: Subsist, he had terms more related to the topic than RS

Overall: Subsist


RS, how come when it comes to battling it seems you dont put a lot of effort into it?
I know u can write but it really looks like you dont try to me. U wont improve if you
dont start putting more into it.
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Post by MesaR »

thats unrational he probley did put in, but it's hard to spit on a topic witch you know little abit like he said.. like me in our battle even though i think i won it, anyway.

this is a cat sweep to subsist, good to see you dropping.

Raiza, keep droppin
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Post by Arvincible »

What? Idk man, just cuz u say words that relate to the topic doesnt make it good.
Raiza was more creative cuz his flow had more to do with the sense with his metas and similes

Subsist didnt really have as much metas and similes, cuz it was more a story.

U might as well google the sense if u dont know much about it, i mean its really not that hard to talk about a sense you have had all ur life..
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Post by Haz »

cat Sweep like this Dood Sed

To Subsist,

Stayed on Topic , Flowed & wus Creative..
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Bleh.

3 -0 KO.

Someone update.
good job subsist.
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Post by Omega Bill »

Closed and updated. Keep droppin Raiza, you're not a bad writer.
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