Cee4 v Rell Fiasco(Rell)

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HKX wrote:damn ya'll both got off Cee got off a lil harder tho nigga snapped nice one homie my vote goes 2 Cee no doubt bout dat dis was a good battle ya'll niggaz need 2 do another one lol

my bad yo he murked u on all 5 cats nigga now there's no way u can't my vote
this was not a cat sweep lol.
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...Thas Why I asked For Cats Seq ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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right im uppin this.
its either 1-0 or 2-0 to me i`ll let the authorities work that shit out.
im not gettin involved lol
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Personals: Cee
Punches: Rell
Flow: Rell
Multis: Cee
Wordplay: Rell

v/ Rell

No Hate Both Was Nice ..
But Rell Edged Dis Battle No Hate
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...Koo ..
Thanks For Votin ..

1-1 ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Kurse »

Best battle I've read all month imo...

Personals: Cee4 (damn...Cee4 kind gangbanged a lil bit on Rell's status...shit was bananas, Rell had a few nice ones though)
Punches: Tie ( It was punchline city between these 2 bruthas...had to give it to both of 'em)
Flow: Cee4 (Cee4's flow/structure was a lil bit easier off the tongue to read than Rell's was)
Multis: Tie (about the same in this...i wouldn't say one outshined the other in this cat)
Wordplay: Rell (Rell knows how to bang wit some word play...that whole Cee-Lo line from Gnarls was sick and was definately a nice ref. change-up)

Overall I'm going to have to give it to Cee4
I agree wit Seq...had this battle had more cats in it...it could've taken a totally different route.

Vote: Cee4
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I Appreciate Tha Vote..

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Post by HKX »

my bad Rell in my opinion I think Cee4 murked u on all 5 cats and I understand y u don't wanna count my vote and discard it no biggie i've been votin' on battles niggaz didn't have a problem wit it until now good lookin Bill on dis shit i'll make sure next time I vote on a battle i won't 4get 2 vote 4 da cats as well lol
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Post by Chicago »

My vote goes to: Rell Fiasco

Rell's Best Line:
I`ma Monster, Raps Stay On Tha Brain Like Wave Caps, Push ya Brain Back ..
ya Raps Stay Wack, But U Quick to 'Stay Behind Mah Bars' Similar to Where ya Brotha Gets 'Raped at' .. *
^^^DaM that was nice^^^

Cee's Best Line:
Stick Em Up! Now wheres ya 'Armed Guard'? u a Cold Killa I`ll make ya Body Fry n ya Brain Thaw!
They thought ya collab was damn Hard? ..well I 'SAW a Pussycat' like Tweety Pie With A CHAINSAW!!!
^^^Nice^^^

Breakdown:

Opener: Cee
Structure: Neither
Punchlines: Rell
Metaphors: Rell
Personals: Rell
Enjoyment: Rell
Multies: Cee
Closer: Rell

Explanation: This was a nice ass battle. My only beef from both is the dam structures. Where the hell did that structure originate from cause its hideous and fucks up the flow of the words. I gotta make a 'Structure 101' thread 4real. Newho, Cee4 verse was nice but it got nice at the end. Rell had punches and wordplay out the ass throughout the whole verse. Made it more enjoyable as well as him taking majority of the cats. With that said, my vote goes to:

My vote goes to: Rell Fiasco

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Post by Haz »

3-2 ... Cee's Winnin ...
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i'll Vote a Lil Lata..
Do it Bar By Bar..
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

..it`s actually 2-2 ..
Cus I Know Damn Well I Didn't Get Cat Swept By a Nigga I Beat Before ..

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Post by Haz »

Im Sayin Den His Vote Dont Count in Are Battle Or??
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

You Can Discarded it If You Want ..
Shit I Don't Give a Fuck Bout That Battle ..
It`s Wateva ..
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Rell Grindin? I`ll turn SAW to Dust, No Dome from HQ but I`ll leave ya Head in Quarters!
Leave J`s Henchmen Slaughtered, Kursed off the site again like u wanna MENTION DAUGHTERS!!
This was a nice opener...multies tied in with the personal punch...prolly your best bar of the verse
U aint a Rapper don't Try and Feign, Goodbye u Lame, Fry ya Name n watch ya Mother Cry in Pain
Disgusting!. looks wise this guy the same, an Ugly Family how could ya BROTHER DIE IN VAIN?!!
Ouch!
the first multie u tried didn't work for me feign and lame, plus i wasnt feelin the punch, even tho it was an attempt at a personal
Stiff In A Box now he 'Hella Str8'! n Rell a Fake, SAW got no teeth I`ll Smash ya Dental Plate!
You Box Office?
Nah Rental Mate, U Typin? Chop ya Paws off Bitch, 'HAND-I-CAPPED' to match ya Mental State!!
Decent Wordplay...shits all crammed...you got some good concepts but they arent hittin hard enough cuz you jam em in...space em out and make him connect and hit harder
U think photos and back n forths wit Bill is sick huh? Like Evolution Theories I`ll Kill those Scriptures!
Cant even talk shit..-Rell-No-Bitcher, Ironic! U got an Image as a Pussy runnin from Dildo Pictures!!
this was prolly your weakest bar of the battle...wasnt feelin this personal punch
Gunna got Skills, shoulda let ya Man Ride, coz this Beyond a Landslide, Cee`s Imposin its Not Fair
Comeback? show him I do Not Care, only time its 'RELL-A-VENT' is when im Disposin this Hot Air!!
again decent nameplay and wordplay...wasnt feelin the flow tho fam
Stick Em Up! Now wheres ya 'Armed Guard'? u a Cold Killa I`ll make ya Body Fry n ya Brain Thaw!
They thought ya collab was damn Hard? ..well I 'SAW a Pussycat' like Tweety Pie With A CHAINSAW!!!
ehhh...not a hard finisher...good attempt at wordplay on the Saw...but it didnt connect hard enough for me



I`ll Destroy ya Flows & Text Spits, Eat ya Hopes For Breakfast, S.a.w Rollin Wreckless ..
Know i`ma Vet Bitch, Blow Tha Tech Clips, & Wet 'Cee`s Sections' Like 'Ocean Segments' ..
liked the nameplay...multies were a little forced tho b
Better Hold ya Breath Quick,cus ya Weak Flows i`ma Squirt, Keys Know i`ma Merk ..
Joke But i`m Hardly Laughin, Like 'Gnarls Barkley Caskets' i`ma Leave 'Cee-Low in Tha Dirt' ..*
again i liked the nameplay...flow was a little better too
...ya Kid Seen you Wit another Man, Now it`s ya Daughter`s Confusion ..i`ll Slaughter ya Bruises ..
Bars is Brought to U Ruthless, But U? Tha Board 'Gas Up Cee' Like Water Polution' ..
haha....this line made me chuckle...good nameplay
Fuck Him i`ll Ruin His Life, I Thought I Seen Some Pussy But it Was U in Disguise ..
Mad Cus His Pops Sicker & Pack More 'Cancer' Than 'Birthdays B/w June & July'* ..
aight personal...it was cool...could hit harder tho fam
British Bitch Never Rippin Spits, 4 Couldn't Even Near Defeat Rell ..
Fear This Geek?..Well, On Keys i`ma Leave 'Cee Life in Danger' Like 'Near Extinted Whales' .. *
liked this bar...good nameplay...flowed good...everything was basically on point
I`ma Monster, Raps Stay On Tha Brain Like Wave Caps, Push ya Brain Back ..
ya Raps Stay Wack, But U Quick to 'Stay Behind Mah Bars' Similar to Where ya Brotha Gets 'Raped at' .. *
wasn't feelin this...weak closer...an attempt at a personal but you shoulda just came harder with wordplay or nameplay to end it and nail the coffin

alright cats

Punches-Rells were more dircet and hit harder...C you weren't a joke tho u came hard with some shit
Personals-Cee 4 mos def...his first bar was a killer personal...Rells attempts were weak and didn't hit that hard
Flow-Rell
Multies-Both
Nameplay-Rell...even tho Cee 4 had the Relevant line...Rell had more tho and they hit way harder
Wordplay-Both had it but I gotta give it to Rell...Cee's shit was all crammed and didn't have enough force to connect the knockout he wanted to give

Overal-Rell gets my vote...His verse was just harder....on point with the punches and nameplay...Cee you werent no joke tho fam...good shit especially your first bar b
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