BL#9 Tre Tru vs MenaCe (MenaCe 5-3)

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BL#9 Tre Tru vs MenaCe (MenaCe 5-3)

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8 Bars

House Cats

Due Date: 7/10/09

*OK Battle Fans This Week We Have The Audio Champ Tre Tru Pitted Against the Controversial But What Seems Like The Up n Coming MenaCe. Both Lost To Teflon via TKO(4-1) Who Is Currently On a 3-0 BL Streak. Both Have Skills And Both Aren't New To This. IDK Which Way This One is Gonna Go Stay Tuned n Find Out This Will Be a Close One.

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Re: BL#9 Tre Tru vs -MenaCe-

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Im Here...

Wats Good Tre....
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Re: BL#9 Tre Tru vs -MenaCe-

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Jyeah ....I'm IN...

yup yup this should be good....g'luck man..^^


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Re: BL#9 Tre Tru vs -MenaCe-

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Listen!


Its down to the final hour and fight power you aint got an Ounce Of It..
How's He Sick? When his styles not lethal but illegal and Counterfiet!..

Cashin false Checks of Respect to never be a Threat to a Single Soul..
While you Sit At Home thinkin of rhymes that grow to be as soft as a Linen Roll..

Fuck Tre Tru! Im gonna make it so that not even god can Save You..
Replace Who? This guy tried to walk in my shoes and couldn't make a Lace Move!!..

I give what the fans want raw barz in the league Live and Direct..
Throwin Punches that Subside In His Chest..
Let it be known that there was a staircase to heaven and he Died On Tha Steps!!..

Livin in the past and can't grasp there aint a Chance of Redemption..
Followed By a hate cloud i got him face down like a Class Of Detention!!..

Washed Up to the fullest throwin blank bullets bitch you Sonin Who?
Lookin behind but you'll find that im ten steps in Front Of You!!..

Droppin verses wit no sting all mediocre with Piss Poor Finishers..
Like i said earlier he's only nice wit a pen when this Bitch Forge Signatures..

Tru tryin to be Ali in this ring and im swingin wit George's Gloves..
I got this in all catz cause i kno his come back'll be as effective as Jordan's Was!!..
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Re: BL#9 Tre Tru vs -MenaCe-

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FYI i didnt even proof read it so...

i'll take wordplay punches and multi cat's by far
and that's 3 way's your fucked call it 'men'ajetwa

ya sructure's never str8 want ya back broke like ledger did
and gay bars,the only place youll see 'menacin' spits..1

you aint menacin shit the only love you gets in tennis
the fuzzy yellow balls reminds you an aisians genits

you aint impressin me presently your a steppin seat
he's illest? never be.. lacks ownership of complexity

get a knife in ya rib my writes put a slice in ya wig
ya shitty scripts worth bout as much as the mic in ya sig

you couldnt wreck minds suckin paint in ya chest guy
you get less time with ya misdemeanor text crimes..2

is this a joke?please,hope you'll win with ya streeetched rhymes?
he's like a coke fiend he always needs an extra line...3


ya fuckin style is feeble no way that this posers lethal
my punches evil im even 'reckin' ya alter ego


expos =
1 Gay's have a higher HIV ratio=menacin spits
2 misdemeanor crimes get you less time in jail..than felonies
3 his bars are stretched long, but he still has 17 lines in there it's supposed to be 16..

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Re: BL#9 Tre Tru vs -MenaCe-

Post by eMCee Havic »

damn tre.. you didnt come hard at all

opener- menace
closer- menace
flow- tre
punches- menace
personals- tre
complexity- menace

vote- menace
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Re: BL#9 Tre Tru vs -MenaCe-

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1-0 Uppin!
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Re: BL#9 Tre Tru vs -MenaCe-

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Opener-Tre
Closer-Menace

Personals-Tre
Punches-Menace

Originality-Tre
Complexity-Menace

Multis-Tie

Flow...Tre Tru

Vote: Tre Tru

Brief:This Was a Close One Just Like I Thought Menace Lengthened His Bar Count For Harder Delivery. He Made One Mistake...When U Stretch Ur Bars U Sacrifice Flow and Sacrificing Flow Isnt Worth It Unless You Jack Ur Verse With Multis

Anyways.....1-1 UPPIN!!!

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Its down to the final hour and fight power you aint got an Ounce Of It..
How's He Sick? When his styles not lethal but illegal and Counterfiet!..
[Not a hard hitting opener brother, good flow though, 6.5/10]
Cashin false Checks of Respect to never be a Threat to a Single Soul..
While you Sit At Home thinkin of rhymes that grow to be as soft as a Linen Roll..
[Again, not a crazy hard hitting, atleast there was a metta for the punch this time though, but the flow was off...6/10]
Fuck Tre Tru! Im gonna make it so that not even god can Save You..
Replace Who? This guy tried to walk in my shoes and couldn't make a Lace Move!!..
[Lol, alright a little witty here, but the flow is chopped.7/10]
I give what the fans want raw barz in the league Live and Direct..
Throwin Punches that Subside In His Chest..
Let it be known that there was a staircase to heaven and he Died On Tha Steps!!..
[Flow and multies are dope but the punch isn't that hard bro...6.5/10]
Livin in the past and can't grasp there aint a Chance of Redemption..
Followed By a hate cloud i got him face down like a Class Of Detention!!..
[Lol, structure wasn't that amazing, neither was the wording, somehow the flow was still good though, and the punch was ok too. 7/10]
Washed Up to the fullest throwin blank bullets bitch you Sonin Who?
Lookin behind but you'll find that im ten steps in Front Of You!!..
[Not a hard hitting bar here, flow was there but no punch at all...5.5/10]
Droppin verses wit no sting all mediocre with Piss Poor Finishers..
Like i said earlier he's only nice wit a pen when this Bitch Forge Signatures..
[Lol..ok a little witty, but nothing over the top with illness. 6/10]
Tru tryin to be Ali in this ring and im swingin wit George's Gloves..
I got this in all catz cause i kno his come back'll be as effective as Jordan's Was!!..
[LMFAO!!!!!!!! That was a dope closer my dude, nice flow as well...8/10]




TOTAL:::: Good verse, a little too much just stating things instead of actually putting thought into creating a simile or metaphor. Still, the closer was nice my dude, sometimes your flow and shit is killer, work on making every bar that same way...52.5/80


i'll take wordplay punches and multi cat's by far
and that's 3 way's your fucked call it 'men'ajetwa
[structure of this bar was really off. Nothing special to me, 6/10]
ya sructure's never str8 want ya back broke like ledger did
and gay bars,the only place youll see 'menacin' spits..1
[Lol, getting better, flow is choppy and structure is off, but its getting better...6.5/10]
you aint menacin shit the only love you gets in tennis
the fuzzy yellow balls reminds you an aisians genits
[ummm...No homo? lmao, this bar was weak bro, not feeling it at all...5/10]
you aint impressin me presently your a steppin seat
he's illest? never be.. lacks ownership of complexity
[Nothing hard again IMO...5.5/10]
get a knife in ya rib my writes put a slice in ya wig
ya shitty scripts worth bout as much as the mic in ya sig
[That mic probably costs a pretty penny, and making anything off your scripts would be fucking dope...So this doesn't even make sense really...5.5/10]
you couldnt wreck minds suckin paint in ya chest guy
you get less time with ya misdemeanor text crimes..2
[Sorry bro, I don't know why it seems like you didn't come with it at all man...I've seen you do way better...5/10]
is this a joke?please,hope you'll win with ya streeetched rhymes?
he's like a coke fiend he always needs an extra line...3
[Cool personal but played way to get it across...6.5/10]
ya fuckin style is feeble no way that this posers lethal
my punches evil im even 'reckin' ya alter ego
[Lol...Witty little closer but nothing speciall...7/10]




TOTAL::: Man I've seen you come better, maybe you were fucked on that vapo-weed or something but you were off today my nigga....47/80







VoTe::: So, even with Tre slipping up pretty bad, it was still a close match. But I think Menace was more consistent, flowed better and came with the harder punches (though both weirdly lacked hard hitting punches which they usually come with). In the end though, like I said earlier, it came down to who knew what would beat their opponent, and Mencace understood more what that meant, so he gets my vote.
Killed: Menace(KO), Sceritz(KO), Modern Defiance(KO)
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Re: BL#9 Tre Tru vs -MenaCe-

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2-1 Uppin!
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Re: BL#9 Tre Tru vs -MenaCe-

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2-1 uppin and lungzz

get a knife in ya rib my writes put a slice in ya wig
ya shitty scripts worth bout as much as the mic in ya sig
[That mic probably costs a pretty penny, and making anything off your scripts would be fucking dope...So this doesn't even make sense really...5.5/10]
^^the mics in his sig...he cant use it..thats what make it useless..maybe i should've dropped an expo..lol

thanks for voting though..

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Re: BL#9 Tre Tru vs -MenaCe-

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TreTru wrote:2-1 uppin and lungzz

get a knife in ya rib my writes put a slice in ya wig
ya shitty scripts worth bout as much as the mic in ya sig
[That mic probably costs a pretty penny, and making anything off your scripts would be fucking dope...So this doesn't even make sense really...5.5/10]
^^the mics in his sig...he cant use it..thats what make it useless..maybe i should've dropped an expo..lol

thanks for voting though..


I don't think it throws the outcome of the battle.
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Re: BL#9 Tre Tru vs -MenaCe-

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opener- tre tru
flow- tre tru
punches- menace
multis-tie
flow-tre tru
personals- tre tru
complexity- menace
closer- menace

really really close battle but tre tru edges it out for me 5-4 good battle you guys

vote tre tru 2-2
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Re: BL#9 Tre Tru vs -MenaCe-

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Opener- Menace
Flow- TreTru
Punches- Menace
Multis-Tie
Originality- TreTru
Personals- TreTru
Complexity- Tie
Closer- Menace

Really good battle. Likin both of what you all had to say. But imma have to give this one to TreTru

TreTru - 3
Menace - 2
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