Just a lil "keystylin" my life pt. 2

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Just a lil "keystylin" my life pt. 2

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I push the rewind button and playback thoughts,
How could we end it like this? My minds so lost/
Repatin them words I guess you gotta pay the cost,
With shattered dreams, hopes, memories, and the lines that you crossed/
I tossed them all away, broken promise after promise,
All I asked for was your trust and for you to be honest/
All the nasty things you said and you expect me to comment?
My response to that......I'll get right on it/
I'm happy now can't you be happy for me,
All the pictures set a blaze when even my own daughter ignores me/
I'm torn to pieces, I guess my life was stuck in the creases,
But now I'm really blessed like I was face to face with jesus/
Believe this, August 10th 2010 my whole life changed around,
I'd never change it again/
Remember when you were little and you were gettin in trouble,
Preparing yourself for now so you survive through the struggle/
Everytime I think at night, to myself I might mumble,
What would my life be like now if all of my thoughts crumble/

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this shit is the tightest thing I read from you homeboy...I can def relate...good job I dont even want to break it down 4 feed because I like it and it is an emotional peice...you know emotional thoughts are never complete because they lack the analysis...hence nothing you can say when someone says some real shit
I CHANNEL all my ENERGY,
while my SPIRIT is SOLEMN//
you HEAR my WORDS in the STREETS-->
because I'm SPEAKING in VOLUMES//

I'm like the MEDIA with QUESTIONS-I never stop SHOOTING
so IF you really got a PROBLEM-we can make this EXCLUSIVE...//
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Man you definitely got that right. Thanks

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I push the rewind button and playback thoughts,
How could we end it like this? My minds so lost/
Repatin them words I guess you gotta pay the cost,
With shattered dreams, hopes, memories, and the lines that you crossed/
I tossed them all away, broken promise after promise,
All I asked for was your trust and for you to be honest/
All the nasty things you said and you expect me to comment?
My response to that......I'll get right on it/
Siick Build-up. It had a lot of emotion here, and It reminds me of when I'm too hard on myself. Everything else I can't critque because it's personal. Overall I would leave this drop the way it is, It's great the way it is.


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Thank you

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Nice piece, bruh. I agree with all above.
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