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tell me what you think

o and me and my boy silence hold all rights to this beat so let me know before you try to use it lol
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I will tell you how I feel after i hear it

this shit's sick my dude! no doubt I'd use it if someone else didn't
it gots that we shall overcome vibe
or it could prolly be switched like I'm fallin' type shit
or I don't know! sounds dope tho' man
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yea we are recordin on it right now and we got that we wont be stopped on the come up style on it... we are mixen it tomorrow
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nice! I'm diggin' it
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anybody can spit on it i dont care im just sayin this is comin up on the lp so anyone can use it for a mixtape just dont try and publish that shit lol if you dig me
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I dig you, I would use it but ehhh

you guys are goin' to rip it before I can lol
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thanks for the feed bro keep them comen
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u def got da beats down man dis is ill as well like da sound on dis 1 dope stuff man keep them comin'
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this jawn goes hard has a nice arrangement of instruments and plenty of emotion and movement throughout only thing that could use a bit of tweaking was the drumline it could use a bit more flavor and variety throughout mix was pretty good their was a little distortion in the lower range
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thanks for the feed guys yea i know what you mean jesus ima try and keep an eye on that next time but im thinkin about cuttin the beginning down a bit.
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The beat is tight man, you can go all different ways on that, the very first instrument you use and it goes like half way thru the song, i would cut that and use it as only like a hook and then where it slows down (A minute in the track) i would use that style as the verses.. Dude, like the bridge i think it is(at around 2:30 in)man, that is fire.. way got me stopping what i was doing to listen..this is tight man, i would definitely spit something real on this, good work
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Yo i got you ill stick my foot in this if you want i started writing i got 8 lines to this uhm i'll call you and rap my verse if you want before i record it u still got room for two more verses if you want i got people in my camp thatll get on it n shit or we can get two more people from illest
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Diggin' the composition. The drums are a little too weak for me, and I didn't really like the pattern at first. Nice switchups. Could have used more instruments thrown in there, like maybe some different synths, maybe some different strings, but overall. Good job.
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recorded 2 it today, i'm have it mixed when i get some more free time/
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