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Whats good ya'll

Post by drunken jesus »

This is some shit that'll probably end up on my tape thats dropping near easter time, its gonna have about 20 tracks, i'mma rock some hott new beats, some ug/hard to find beats, some from other producers, and a few of my own productions, its about 50% wrote, 20% recorded, i just been going thru some shit lately thats been fucking up my schedule

Anyways this is just a verse over a beat i got from a homie, shits hott.. verse ain't pefect cause i just did it live in one take and smoked a pack of newports this morning so my flow n breath control falls off in some lines and you can hear it haha

Finished tracks going to be done up with layers and adlibs and probably be a full length track
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Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by precise »

lyrics are coo, yea youre right about youre breath control, voice is commin off shaky. try turnin the vocals down and just rapping louder, sounds like yer tryin to hold it in, let it out
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you talk it down man? the wma doesnt exist anymore
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