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Post by M33Kish »

New song from I for a project (maybe). I feel it needs something, more ad libs and backings? maybe a little autotune? tell me what you think ill return that favor, just leave a link.
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Post by Kuhlerblynd »

The beat's cool, I can dig that paired up with the topic. I thought your flow was on point, but some areas felt more rushed than others, and because of that it was hard to make out a few of the words, which also tends to take away from your verses a bit. The lyrics, that I could hear, were enjoyable, and there were a few clever lines that stuck out to me... Um, the only other thing I feel is worth mentioning is the ending to your chorus. Im not sure if you are wanting it to sound like that, but I feel like the delivery there should be stronger and more clear. Also, maybe you could add some background lapping vocals with your chorus to help it stand out a bit more... Just some thoughts fam, keep the tracks coming...
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Re: GodsDead

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UHHHH thats the shit im talkin bout, ya i was pretty off that day. i had like 2 other songs i did that day we had to trash and set aside, so i can see the rush in it too. and ya i was hoping someone would bring the hook up, imma try and add some backings to it and maybe some more shit to make it not so boring. Thanks essay
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Your flow makes me happy. Reminds me of some really good old school shit. Apart from a couple parts where you jumbled a few words or lost your mic presence, your rhythm and flow were tight the whole way through. I feel the chorus could use a bit more separation from the verses, but you actually did pretty good with it. The concept is good, and your vocab keeps things interesting. Great job, man, keep it up.

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