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Livenlearn
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Post by Livenlearn »

Was suppose to be delivering a Mixtape this month, but Audition is wack...So now Im working in Reaper and must transfer the mixtape over smh...not sure if i want to, but here's a new track in the mean time...

http://hulkshare.com/argw9136g5ud


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cyan-eighteen-vt25881.html

inside-my-heart-emotional-lyrical-song-not-a-love-song-vt25893
Life Lessons Volume 1 Mixtape:

http://www.usershare.net/56nqkqtksmq6
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Post by Cyan »

Ha ha ... Yeah ... I use Audition too ... It's tough to switch away from what you're familiar with ...

The delay bit after the spit is interesting but you've got the delay timing set too high so it's out of sync with the beat itself ... I see what you're shooting for ... it just needs calibrated tighter.

Some of this is inaudible to me ... I don't quite understand what you're sayin' ... you have a high voice which is cutting through the beat somewhat .... but the mix seems a bit distant ...

This beat is all over .. you picked a tough one to spit over ...

Keep doin' your thing man ... try to get those vocals more up front ... fuck around with the settings on your mixer ... fuck around with EQ's, Comps, and Reverbs ... When playin with the delay ... slide those timing scales around ... and see what's right ...

Most importantly ... Keep making music! ;)
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