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Phasewon
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Lord of War

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[Phasewon]
Sittin' in the first row, at the end of earth's show
Spray ether at Saint Peter and watch him burn slow
Slipped through a worm hole from which I have ascended
My mind is suspended in a higher dimension
The planets have aligned their directions
I hyper extended through time to collide with the present
Every line, every sentence I scribe is relentless
My rhymes are designed by divine intervention
I'm a descendant of Einstein's invention
A Darwinian millennium defines my progression
Fine, go ahead then, confide in your reverend
The bible's infected with lies and deception
Practice curses in satanic churches
Perfectly crafted verses rappers worship
The master serpent has the Catholics nervous
I'm the Manson of rap, the more graphic version
The paster's sermon speaks of my bone fragments
Deep in an old abyss, with my quotes on stone tablets
I'm so savage with the lyrics I spit
Hearin' me rip is on some imperial spiritual sh**
I get furious, flip, and then I murder my enemies
Stir their extremities with surgical remedies
Many men have attempted to murder me
Their threats are absurd to me, 'cause death is a certainty
My sacrilegious babble's serving rappers in a battle
I convert 'em and then turn 'em into sacrificial cattle
Tie your corpse up to a horse and strap it in the saddle
Send it to your people with your Adam's apple in the satchel
I meditate to elevate my mental state
Phase is a heavyweight, with superior genetic traits
Never underestimate the men you hate
I catch 'em while they're sleeping and then send 'em straight to Heaven's gate
I am The Messiah, The Creator, The Annihilator
Violate a hater who defies my violent vial nature
It's the insane rapper, splatter your brain matter
Shatter your frame, and piss on your scattered remains after
Impalin' souls, and stackin' brains on a pole
Packin' stadiums full of craniums with alien skulls
On ancient pages of gold, my name is in bold
My fate is told on Pagan scrolls translated in code
I brung Armageddon twice, and made light from the darkness
Resurrected Christ, and breathed life in his carcass
I am the heartless warrior, with assorted swords
More than horrorcore, I'm the Lord of War

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Re: Lord of War

Post by Majin »

UGHH!!!!

Fuck it I'm contacting DZK right now.

This shit is HARD AS HELL man. You're one of the only people who entertains me, No one on this site really impresses me audio wise or is as nice as they're praised to be. You should look into battling Tre Tru for the audio belt, would be a good look for the website.




Update

I asked him if he'll let you get on track with him for free, we need to wait until he responds. I have also linked him to your page.
Last edited by Majin on Mon Apr 02, 2012 1:36 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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Re: Lord of War

Post by AntiMaTTer »

we NEED download links bro lmao.. come on.

but this shit was proper. clean. some different over lays used this time i can tell. good mixing, even the mixing reminds me of Dzks shit yall really do have a similar style with how yall delivery ya work. shits good though im digging this, good to see ya on this site. let me know when we can get on that collab.

-- Mon Apr 02, 2012 12:03 am --
Sittin' in the first row, at the end of earth's show
Spray ether at Saint Peter and watch him burn slow
Slipped through a worm hole from which I have ascended
My mind is suspended in a higher dimension
The planets have aligned their directions
I hyper extended through time to collide with the present
Every line, every sentence I scribe is relentless
My rhymes are designed by divine intervention
I'm a descendant of Einstein's invention
A Darwinian millennium defines my progression
Fine, go ahead then, confide in your reverend
The bible's infected with lies and deception

I am The Messiah, The Creator, The Annihilator
Violate a hater who defies my violent vial nature
It's the insane rapper, splatter your brain matter
Shatter your frame, and piss on your scattered remains after
Impalin' souls, and stackin' brains on a pole
Packin' stadiums full of craniums with alien skulls
On ancient pages of gold, my name is in bold
My fate is told on Pagan scrolls translated in code
I brung Armageddon twice, and made light from the darkness
Resurrected Christ, and breathed life in his carcass
I am the heartless warrior, with assorted swords
More than horrorcore, I'm the Lord of War
these were my fav quotables. shits off the wall. the rhyme scheme is crazy and shit def has great imagery and its worded well. good shit man you must been writing for a while
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Re: Lord of War

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

nice shit, hard to say which i like better between this and flying daggers though lyrically i'd go with this one since there was no chorus but both pretty equal, your voice and some of your flow reminds me of a better version of xzibit
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Re: Lord of War

Post by Livenlearn »

I like the lyrical ability, delivery, and emotion u bring to the track, but Its not really somthin I'd vibe too...Like, your lyrical ability is nice and ur creativity is off the charts, I just prefer songs that are more authentic...Other than that, the overdubs and adlibs mesh really well and add to the vibe of the beat, def. got skill...def. as I can tell from the site, u have people who have great interests in this type of music...overall quality work man
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