im back ckno ft lance n syn

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im back ckno ft lance n syn

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i guess imma flood tha audio since no1 else wants 2
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first guy yeah this dudes pretty Sick..i like his similes
Flo and deliv is on point

2nd Guy More of the same..idk if its the mixx cuz im on some shitty Headphones but it gets static-e when the first and second verse come in..

3rd guy ..the voice is a lil more standout from the beat yeah flo and deliv is on point and presence in this one is better than the last one i fed the other day..


im not feelin the screamin in the outro ..personally.. but i feel the emotion your trying to portray so nice attempt..

the beat was dope too so all in all this was a Good Drop bro..

I'm on a work Computer so i can only hear the audios if you embedd them like you did this one...anyway mad Props and put up some Live Show Footage when you can..haha
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thanx i was tha third verse tha 1st n 2nd was my homie ckno tha hook was r boy lance who does metal shit n 4 sum reason tha base in tha beats fuck wit tha sound quality so unless u got bass heavy speakers its gonna sound like shit
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aight i just got earbuds right now..

but yeah I do live shows all the time peep this when you get the chance >> hi-way-vt24840.html
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Re: im back ckno ft lance n syn

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pretty sick track man, love the beat, first guy on key, def like his verse the most, then the third verse i like second most, again good flow and rhythem, second verse also good, i just didnt like it as much as the other two, its my preference. lyrically thats the order anyway. keep it up tho, u got some good songs
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This song is rugged ... rough around the edges ... The mids on the instrumental and vocals sound like they're cranked up ... pretty intense.

the flow from the first verse is solid ... kinda like that nasty dude from D12. the mixing delay could be tightened up a few milliseconds on that one.

The second verse is nice.

I like you on this one (third verse right). Clear delivery, Why panned so hard to the right though? ... +10 or +20 is subtle but I just checked my right ear for blodd .. ha ha

Cool track though ... really heavy ... Gets me pumped up ... I just punched my wife and lit some shit on fire !!!
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I just punched my wife and lit some shit on fire !!!
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Yo, nice track man. You did stand out a tad as mentioned, but not bad at all.... my lap top speakers are poor qualiry so i wont say much on that. Scream...meh
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