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don't give up ckno n syn

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Shit was banging... First dude came correct... U came nice too....
I was feelin the first half of ur verse more when it slowed down it kinda came off the beat slightly.
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word i dig any feed bak n 4 those wonderin when i said n tha way he flip his words he owe it 2 oldschool i was talkin bout my pops thats his alias

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haha that Cno dude is pretty dope bruh..i never have issues with his verses in your tracks..dude has some decent punches without going overboard..

I wasnt in love with this beat tho...the hook was ehhh..not bad..

your presence is pretty good in this one..deliv is nice..flo pretty much on point ..until you get near the end..but you dont slip too bad i think jus a lil on some of the inner syllables a tiny bit..

well sounds like you and ya crew got your thing on lock..Good shit..Stay grinding...

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i constintly tell others ckno better but if u ask him hed say it was me

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Well not takin anything away from you ..your pretty good bruh..

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I like those first few lines ... sounded from the heart. This overall song just has a real breezy feel to it ... There's something about it ... maybe it's the old-schoolish beat or something but ... I really like the vibe of it ...

Nice shit fellas!

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Nice shit, the mixing was a lil off, first verse sounded completely different quality wise compared to the second, but other than that, lyrics and delivery on both ends were on point, I'm feelin' it.

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