The W Freestyle- studio track numba 2!

[Seanny T]

well, here it is...the secod track from the studio. the original one i did might be somewhere in the records here lol this one is WAY better alrighty, lemme know how ya feel this one. cheers,
Seanny T.

[littlefranky]

the beat and hook aint really my style, but this aint bad. i think for bein in the studio, the mix could be smoother. theres quite a difference between the quality of the hook and the quality of the verse.
ur raps werent bad tho, i think u coulda upped the energy tho, and played wit the delivery a bit. it jus felt the beat was on a much greater energy level than ur delivery. overall not bad, but could use some work.

[Phasewon]

Ok, your quality isn't bad, the mixing levels were good, but lyrically and vocally you could practice a bit more, sharpen up the pen work before you record, keep at it.

[Seanny T]

thanks for the feedback!

-- Wed Apr 04, 2012 10:15 pm --

my mixtapes on hold cuz i got college finals but after april ima be wrapping it up asap. lol. get ready for it!