Hip Hop Forum

I figure since I'm about to start making music again I'd do a brief recap...
a different song every week till I release my new music.

I like it dope shit haz

You kinda sound like Peter Gunz... a little. Good presence, I dig the beat. Lyrics were on point (of course). Only complaint is that the adlibs were like a split second off, makes it sound choppy or echoey or something. or maybe its my internet? i dunno lol. good shit though.

already told you how i feel about this track haz.... but i'll say it again bruh... this shits probably the dopest shit i've ever heard from you... and yeah Gonz his ad libs are a bit off... but i think thats what he was goin for... i like it tho.... some drift away n put it on type of joint.... i like it... but i gotta ask Haz... what beat is that?????

Alright .. the good is that you have nice timing ... a solid delivery and I really enjoy the beat selection ... very cool instrumental! Your voice matches it well too. The recording sounds clean!

So ... you've got nice timing and the syllables rhymes are nice but they come at the expense of content ... that first verse sounds cool n' all but any listener who comes for content (me) isn't gonna find any. It's just gibberish ... that rhymes ... So since phase one is complete ... timing, sounding good; check, check I hope you can keep all that and tighten up the writing.

Nice song though.

I liked your rhymescheme in the first verse a lot in this one..
I agree with law on it being the brest audio I ever heard from
You..
the second verse sounded a lil more rushed than the first imo..
but ya mic presence is way stronger than it used to be..

this was still all in all a pretty dope piece.bruh

pretty sav you. got good presence and delivery...
lyrics on point too...
8/10

Thanks Kurse, i'm humbled. Appreciate it,
feed will be returned to all you guy's by tonight the latest.

Rhyming's good flow's good but the content could be better.

The beat is real ol school, def have used this beat before...The quality is very good, nice delivery and good presence, I like the attack that you have going, it keeps the listener interested...I agree with a lil more complexity to the content, but what you did here meshes with the beat and the structure wasnt too bad either...good wrk

First of all, where do you get your beats? Cuz this is dope as fuck. Do you do the mixing yourself?

Your flow and mic presence is sick as fuck. You also touched on real topics, but did it in a fast and rhythmic way which kind of reminded me of Nas a little bit. I'm assuming you're from the East Coast? Heavily influenced by East Coast raps, can tell by your style.

But yea my dude, we definitely have to get a collab going sometime. I didn't know you could flow like that. Keep it up, always room for elevation. You should also put out a promo mixtape.

Nice track, man. Beat was tight and you matched the mood with the content and delivery. Spittin fire, bruh. Definitely wouldn't mind hoppin on a track with ya when the means are made available to me.

I'm feelin', the doubles were a lil off on the chorus but the lyrical content was strong all the way through and the concept and everything fit the beat real well giving off a legit vibe, nice shit.