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Reality By Ambition

Post by Haz » Mon Feb 20, 2012 12:21 am

I figure since I'm about to start making music again I'd do a brief recap...
a different song every week till I release my new music.
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Re: Reality By Ambition

Post by AntiMaTTer » Mon Feb 20, 2012 1:59 am

this is you? fuckkk... you already like fucking way better than me...how long you been doing audios cuz you dont sound new to it. i heard something of yours in the past but didnt remember how it sounded. this shits tight though i like it. pretty good quality, flow is tight, energy/delivery all there. helll yes, we will be collabing soon yes sir
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Re: Reality By Ambition

Post by The Gonz » Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:53 am

You kinda sound like Peter Gunz... a little. Good presence, I dig the beat. Lyrics were on point (of course). Only complaint is that the adlibs were like a split second off, makes it sound choppy or echoey or something. or maybe its my internet? i dunno lol. good shit though.

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Post by Lawgix » Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:30 pm

already told you how i feel about this track haz.... but i'll say it again bruh... this shits probably the dopest shit i've ever heard from you... and yeah Gonz his ad libs are a bit off... but i think thats what he was goin for... i like it tho.... some drift away n put it on type of joint.... i like it... but i gotta ask Haz... what beat is that?????
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Re: Reality By Ambition

Post by Cyan » Mon Feb 20, 2012 3:04 pm

Alright .. the good is that you have nice timing ... a solid delivery and I really enjoy the beat selection ... very cool instrumental! Your voice matches it well too. The recording sounds clean!

So ... you've got nice timing and the syllables rhymes are nice but they come at the expense of content ... that first verse sounds cool n' all but any listener who comes for content (me) isn't gonna find any. It's just gibberish ... that rhymes ... So since phase one is complete ... timing, sounding good; check, check I hope you can keep all that and tighten up the writing.

Nice song though.

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Re: Reality By Ambition

Post by TreTru » Mon Feb 20, 2012 3:31 pm

I liked your rhymescheme in the first verse a lot in this one..
I agree with law on it being the brest audio I ever heard from
You..
the second verse sounded a lil more rushed than the first imo..
but ya mic presence is way stronger than it used to be..

this was still all in all a pretty dope piece.bruh

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Re: Reality By Ambition

Post by pest » Tue Feb 21, 2012 10:27 am

pretty sav you. got good presence and delivery...
lyrics on point too...
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Re: Reality By Ambition

Post by Kurse » Thu Feb 23, 2012 3:54 am

Young Haz...I see you've stepped your game up over the years. Voice still sounds the same, but your presentation by delivery has improved in stride. Mixing is clear enough to understand and you spit with good feeling behind vocals. Hope you plan on putting a mixtape together at some point...it's be a shame if you didn't.

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Re: Reality By Ambition

Post by Haz » Thu Feb 23, 2012 6:39 am

Thanks Kurse, i'm humbled. Appreciate it,
feed will be returned to all you guy's by tonight the latest.
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Re: Reality By Ambition

Post by PeyotePearl » Fri May 25, 2012 5:49 am

Rhyming's good flow's good but the content could be better.
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Re: Reality By Ambition

Post by Livenlearn » Fri May 25, 2012 2:25 pm

The beat is real ol school, def have used this beat before...The quality is very good, nice delivery and good presence, I like the attack that you have going, it keeps the listener interested...I agree with a lil more complexity to the content, but what you did here meshes with the beat and the structure wasnt too bad either...good wrk
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Re: Reality By Ambition

Post by NeverOddOrEven » Sat May 26, 2012 5:44 am

First of all, where do you get your beats? Cuz this is dope as fuck. Do you do the mixing yourself?

Your flow and mic presence is sick as fuck. You also touched on real topics, but did it in a fast and rhythmic way which kind of reminded me of Nas a little bit. I'm assuming you're from the East Coast? Heavily influenced by East Coast raps, can tell by your style.

But yea my dude, we definitely have to get a collab going sometime. I didn't know you could flow like that. Keep it up, always room for elevation. You should also put out a promo mixtape.

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Re: Reality By Ambition

Post by MonuMental » Sat May 26, 2012 11:53 am

Nice track, man. Beat was tight and you matched the mood with the content and delivery. Spittin fire, bruh. Definitely wouldn't mind hoppin on a track with ya when the means are made available to me.
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Re: Reality By Ambition

Post by Phasewon » Sat May 26, 2012 1:06 pm

I'm feelin', the doubles were a lil off on the chorus but the lyrical content was strong all the way through and the concept and everything fit the beat real well giving off a legit vibe, nice shit.


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