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Leeroy Jenkins
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Down N Dirty

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This one is meant to be taken with a grain of salt...I was forced to sell all of my recording equipment at home, so I would have to go into a studio and record this track. I'm recording this rough draft though so I know the jist of how it sounds and I can work out any kinks before the final version

Let me know what you think? There's a couple things I have issues with, but I would rather not mention them because one of them I don't know if it's just my imagination and I don't want to make anyone forcefully see an error


Horribly quality, I know I know


D E F...

D E F...

D E F I N E's Me

No average by any means
Ask a fan in my indie scene
Tight Right down to my skinny jeans
Quite Renowned
I show up in the club and the lights go down
I don't even gotta try to hype the crowd
If you don't put your hands up then the knife comes out
How you like me now?
Throw a jab on the mic like a Tyson bout
Yall gassed up, I'ma siphon out
Tell me do you really wanna try me now,
cause I'm bout to bout to wild out out out
oh but if you aint really know
then you better better call somebody cause i kill em with the flow
im a problem for the government promise if I ever get a modicum of fame
It'll go up in flames
Better never let me get my foot into the game
Yall can paint a picture, I can put it in a frame
Breeze through opponents like I should've been a saint
Real estate swag, put em in they place
So you better tell your man to plan to fall back
Kenan and Kel...heh, I'm all that
Fuck what you heard I'm a monster...rawr
Better lock all the doors in your car
Flay you out alive, leave you scarred
Make yall racist, scared of the dark
Ha ha ha ha....
Quit playin
I'm Goku, Just sayin
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honestly? not the best i've heard from u... lyrics were tight... the delivery on em? not so much... lol
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What do you think of the flow though? the delivery will be significantly different when I record the final. I don't do a lot of doubletime
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the flow is dope... double time would be dope man.... ya vocals sound like theirs static.... i don't like the hook...
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