Quick Verse...Enjoy :)

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Quick Verse...Enjoy :)

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Just whipped this up today. Leaving Thursday for a deployment, so I figured I'd try to record what I can while I have the time. Enjoy everyone.
New Verse (APOC ANTHEM PREVIEW).mp3
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Verse:
Here’s a story I found, about a boy in a crowd
Who had a “Buzz” for “Lightyears”…and wasn’t toying around
He had the skill and the talent for employing a sound
And everyone who heard it, they enjoyed it loud
Now who’s this story’s about?…well, It’s actually me
The protagonist…with raps I spit so drastic-a-ly
Never been afraid to fly, so I captured a breeze
While ya’ll “pussies” don’t “go out on limbs”, like cats in a tree!
Look…I’m back in the streets, so watch what you talking doc…
2xS ain’t riding? Oh, I was chillin in the parkin lot
Whether it was dark or not…waiting just to spark the shots
And leave your lid hollow, like a motherfucking Sharpie top!
Cuz every bar I got, bangs like a bass drum
I’m toting thangs like Novacaine, to leave ya fuckin face numb!
And I don’t waste em…I spit rounds random
That’ll hit you bitches harder than a Chris Brown tantrum!
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really nothing i can give 'feedback' on ur obviously doing audios for a while. this shit hits hard i like this. flow delivery all that sounds sick. beat was dope too. multis and punchs were nice. shits good yo stay up an active, the audio sections bout to get poppin off lot more.
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hahaaaaaaaaaa damn still spittin that fire bro! glad to have ya back man! keep droppin verses dammit!!! haha
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@ Antimatter...Thanks for the feed bro. I returned some to your track as well. Glad to see the Audio section is going deep now, I remember being one of the founders who got it popping!!!! Lol good times.

@ Lawgix...Appreciate the welcome back message :) Feels good to make a return, even if only for a few days. I left some feed on one of your songs man, your other ones had a bunch of views, so I went with the one that had the least amount.
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2xS wrote:@ Antimatter...Thanks for the feed bro. I returned some to your track as well. Glad to see the Audio section is going deep now, I remember being one of the founders who got it popping!!!! Lol good times.

@ Lawgix...Appreciate the welcome back message :) Feels good to make a return, even if only for a few days. I left some feed on one of your songs man, your other ones had a bunch of views, so I went with the one that had the least amount.
yea no doubt dude, im just starting off recording but it sucks you gota dip so quick, but i guess when duty calls duty calls.
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2xS wrote:@ Antimatter...Thanks for the feed bro. I returned some to your track as well. Glad to see the Audio section is going deep now, I remember being one of the founders who got it popping!!!! Lol good times.

@ Lawgix...Appreciate the welcome back message :) Feels good to make a return, even if only for a few days. I left some feed on one of your songs man, your other ones had a bunch of views, so I went with the one that had the least amount.
fa sho man its cool... good to see u back tho man... u should stay longer :think:
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Well unman yeah you went in hard on this one no doubt..deliver and
presence strong..mixxins high grade too..lyrics were coo for a cypher
style track.some nice punches..a few played ones..I liked the Sharpie line
Alot tho dat was pretty fresh......it'd be dope to hear the whole track when its done ...good to see ya..holla!!!

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loved how u started this it made me curious to know who u were referring 2 and loved how it turns out it was u......

"Now who’s this story’s about?…well, It’s actually me
The protagonist…with raps I spit so drastic-a-ly
Never been afraid to fly, so I captured a breeze
While ya’ll “pussies” don’t “go out on limbs”, like cats in a tree!"

^^^ loved these lines

"Cuz every bar I got, bangs like a bass drum
I’m toting thangs like Novacaine, to leave ya fuckin face numb!"

^^^ very nice

i actually would have liked to have read more, u could have really added another verse...kept we interested in reading more about this boy. :)

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nice... nuff said... anyone lookin for collab?
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wordplay was nice, delivery was on point, mixing was nice as well

just wanted to hear more though haha u went hard fam
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i know i've left feedback already but FUCK MAAAANNNNN!!!!! this goes SO HARD!!!!! fuckin dammit man.... this whole tracks a fuckin disgusting Chris Brown tantrum bro lmfao
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this track is just plain epic aha, the beats hard, the flow is all good, lyrics all on point and go well. def downloaded this and will listen to it multiple times. lookin good man, i also loved the last mixtape u made, have that on a cd too. ur pree sick all around, like hearing your drops :)
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bump ..

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