yo im new to this forum, basically im a 17 year old rapper from Dorking, UK. This is my newest track out atm, let me know what you all think, how i can improve etc thanks for your time.
http://youtu.be/skV3z3GjfK4
Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)
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Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)
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'Im a fucking lowlife, the worse kind of scum,
just ask my ex girl she'll tell you Im a cunt'
just ask my ex girl she'll tell you Im a cunt'
Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)
Haha..well tbh I thought this had some
pretty dope punches bro ..no doubt. I do think your delivery and presence needs some work also, but the mixxing was pretty good..and your flow stayed on point..until you got closer to the end..
as for the accent its a lil strong..but you
don't force ya multis too hard so it was bearable..
All in all this was pretty good my dude..welcome to illestlyrics.com
pretty dope punches bro ..no doubt. I do think your delivery and presence needs some work also, but the mixxing was pretty good..and your flow stayed on point..until you got closer to the end..
as for the accent its a lil strong..but you
don't force ya multis too hard so it was bearable..
All in all this was pretty good my dude..welcome to illestlyrics.com
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Ya gettin Bodied qwik chop you up like a saw mill..my Lines are 2 Raw "yeah" i should get my Bars Grilled!!!
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Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)
Your on point pretty good, like Tru said your Delivery and Presence could use some work but that comes with working more and more, the beat is nice and you have some clever lyrics.. Be looking forward to some more from you, Welcome
Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)
thanks to both of you for the feedback i will take it on board
'Im a fucking lowlife, the worse kind of scum,
just ask my ex girl she'll tell you Im a cunt'
just ask my ex girl she'll tell you Im a cunt'
Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)
nice good were all trying to elevate.....
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^^Hustle Life Mixx Tape^^
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Ya gettin Bodied qwik chop you up like a saw mill..my Lines are 2 Raw "yeah" i should get my Bars Grilled!!!
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0hgN0MacRqg&feature=fvst[/video]
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IZ-VXwki ... ature=plcp[/video]
It's Jah boy "Tre Tru" holla
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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/tre-t ... 12597.html
http://www.zshare.net/download/6399071566e45a94/
^^Hustle Life Mixx Tape^^
[align=center][/align]
Ya gettin Bodied qwik chop you up like a saw mill..my Lines are 2 Raw "yeah" i should get my Bars Grilled!!!
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0hgN0MacRqg&feature=fvst[/video]
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IZ-VXwki ... ature=plcp[/video]
It's Jah boy "Tre Tru" holla
Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)
That was a good track man
I really liked the flow and the punches also that beat was amazing
Keep up the good work
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I really liked the flow and the punches also that beat was amazing
Keep up the good work
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Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)
Multi's and punchlines are mad nice. I like the beat as well. Mixing is on point, and what I like about this is, your accent isn't making this impossible to listen to. I can still understand what you're saying. That's a big plus, because I usually don't listen to a bunch of foreign artists for that very reason. As previously stated, work on your presence. You can do this by putting more emphasis on the punch lines, and the actual material leading up to those punches. I think the delivery is pretty much good, just need a little more focus on separation and not speeding up words to make them fit, ya know? Good track.
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