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Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 6:17 am
by Habit
yo im new to this forum, basically im a 17 year old rapper from Dorking, UK. This is my newest track out atm, let me know what you all think, how i can improve etc thanks for your time.

http://youtu.be/skV3z3GjfK4

Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 4:51 pm
by TreTru
Haha..well tbh I thought this had some
pretty dope punches bro ..no doubt. I do think your delivery and presence needs some work also, but the mixxing was pretty good..and your flow stayed on point..until you got closer to the end..
as for the accent its a lil strong..but you
don't force ya multis too hard so it was bearable..



All in all this was pretty good my dude..welcome to illestlyrics.com

Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 7:53 pm
by Deciple
Your on point pretty good, like Tru said your Delivery and Presence could use some work but that comes with working more and more, the beat is nice and you have some clever lyrics.. Be looking forward to some more from you, Welcome

Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 10:44 pm
by Habit
thanks to both of you for the feedback i will take it on board

Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2012 8:20 am
by TreTru
nice good were all trying to elevate.....


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/hip-h ... 25119.html
^^when you get the chance you can return the feed here^^

Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:31 pm
by Shooter
That was a good track man
I really liked the flow and the punches also that beat was amazing

Keep up the good work

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Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:21 am
by 2xS
Multi's and punchlines are mad nice. I like the beat as well. Mixing is on point, and what I like about this is, your accent isn't making this impossible to listen to. I can still understand what you're saying. That's a big plus, because I usually don't listen to a bunch of foreign artists for that very reason. As previously stated, work on your presence. You can do this by putting more emphasis on the punch lines, and the actual material leading up to those punches. I think the delivery is pretty much good, just need a little more focus on separation and not speeding up words to make them fit, ya know? Good track.