Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

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Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

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yo im new to this forum, basically im a 17 year old rapper from Dorking, UK. This is my newest track out atm, let me know what you all think, how i can improve etc thanks for your time.

http://youtu.be/skV3z3GjfK4
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'Im a fucking lowlife, the worse kind of scum,
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Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

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Haha..well tbh I thought this had some
pretty dope punches bro ..no doubt. I do think your delivery and presence needs some work also, but the mixxing was pretty good..and your flow stayed on point..until you got closer to the end..
as for the accent its a lil strong..but you
don't force ya multis too hard so it was bearable..



All in all this was pretty good my dude..welcome to illestlyrics.com

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Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

Post by Deciple »

Your on point pretty good, like Tru said your Delivery and Presence could use some work but that comes with working more and more, the beat is nice and you have some clever lyrics.. Be looking forward to some more from you, Welcome
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Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

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thanks to both of you for the feedback i will take it on board
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nice good were all trying to elevate.....


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Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

Post by Shooter »

That was a good track man
I really liked the flow and the punches also that beat was amazing

Keep up the good work

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Re: Feedback Please! UK MC Habit- No Sleep (prod. By Westy)

Post by 2xS »

Multi's and punchlines are mad nice. I like the beat as well. Mixing is on point, and what I like about this is, your accent isn't making this impossible to listen to. I can still understand what you're saying. That's a big plus, because I usually don't listen to a bunch of foreign artists for that very reason. As previously stated, work on your presence. You can do this by putting more emphasis on the punch lines, and the actual material leading up to those punches. I think the delivery is pretty much good, just need a little more focus on separation and not speeding up words to make them fit, ya know? Good track.
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