Hip Hop Forum

Loose logic verse, Weznilez made the beat, i drop after loose logic.
Wez did my mixing. hes got mixtapes and albums, check em out. http://weznilez.com/



ill edit links in:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/big-t ... ml#p187368

Daaaaaaamn ya boy nasty man. Its only his verse tho. Where yall at? Unless my phone buggin. Iunno

[ Post made via Android ]

Logic tore it up pretty good. Your flow was sounding a bit rusty. Rushed in parts with a few awkward pauses, but overall not bad. Maybe be a bit more aggressive with this type of drop. Beat was simple but ok. Nothing wrong with it, really.

well... beats nice.... mixing on it is pretty dope... lyrical content was good too...

first verse killed it!!! nice flow... delivery was on point... i believe in dubs cuz they just make the verse stand out on beats like this... so good job on that man

second verse... flow was off... listen to the beat and get the patterns down of how the beat sounds... cuz ya flow was all over the place... lyrics were nice... but it always helps too shorten up verses to make it fit to the beat so it doesn't sound like you're trying too hard to make it all fit... and that dead air sounds reeeeeeallllyyyyyy bad.... makes it sound (hate to say it) amateurish... again this comes with following the beat and gettin ur flow down to the beat... listen to the first verse and you'll better understand how he followed along with the BPMs of the beat... other wise lyrically it was dope....

wheres the third verse??? lol

its not bad... second verse work on what was mentioned above and you'll be golden...

i'll give this audio a 6/10...

keep elevating

imma haveto listen to this cuz ive been dying to hear anti on a track...plus you always leave me feed...so imma peep this one either tonite or tomorow morn...1

thanks for the feedback guys.. if you dig Loose Logic or My music
why not check out our mixtape on datpiff http://www.datpiff.com/Wez-Nilez-The-In ... 77993.html
if you dig the mixtape buy the cd version of it with bonus
tracks not included in the free download version.
I also have details if you're interested in purchasing any of my albums
on my website
http://www.weznilez.com
http://www.weznilez.net

ya'll put in some good work. like to see the audio around here more and more. keep it up.

haha this shit is Dope bruh..

beat a lil dreamy feel...but sinister..not bad..

Wow U already know Loose brings that fire ...no doubt

hmmm ..your lyrics are dope bruh..voice was pretty good too..deliv almost there, mixxin and all that was good tho imo....you just need work on a few things is all..flo, Presence and timing ..keep doin ya thing more tracks bro practice makes perfect..I like it bruh i gave it 3 plays my dude...

damn thanks Tre...lmfao. i mean if you think ALVIN sounds bad on a beat then i cant imagine how stupid you think my shit really sounds haha but appreciate it. ima keep doing the record thing till i get this shit nailed.

and everyone should peep www.weznilez.net
and help promote underground hiphop

Yo that first guy was FYAR honest.. and you did your thing too.. as the for the third wasn't my favorite of the song but defiantly a good collab thats for damn sure man... keep doing your think and keep polishing that delivery style of yours

peACE

appreciate the love on the feed guys.. ill be posting some more on here..

uppin this.

dope shit.
im feelin that beat, definitely on that underground hype. for sure a lot of energy on the track. some nice lyrics. i think the vocals on the first verse may have been a bit louder than necessary.
ur flow coulda been polished a bit. it was definitely an interesting flow but coulda been tighter i think specifically where u were puttin the accent on certain words.

other than that some good shit. nice underground feel to it. it did sound unfinished tho, the way u ended ur verse and the beat jus rode it. all good tho.
keep it up