Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat

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Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat

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This is for anyone to hop on
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat

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not bad, this was pretty beasty dog. you had some witty punchlines, and some dope ass flows. Emotion was good too no doubt. im actually impressed wit how hard you came since im kinda used to your slow really emotional joints, so this was a real nice surprise.

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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat

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I would like in on this. If its ku wit u lj

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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat

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have at it man. let me know what you come up with
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Mos def! Pm me ur email and ill shoot it over

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hmm this is actually pretty nice bruh..quality decent too..
yeah punchlines were pretty dope..no doubt..

yeah i like it bruh....good shyt
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat

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ok. heres my verse! anyone else?
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat

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Great job loon. If we can get another person on this we could have a dope song
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Hell yea man. Maybe the first of more to come

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Decent quality. You definitely have powerful presentation...you put energy behind what you spit, which is such an IMPORTANT factor in music today. You have to sound like you believe and really feel the lyrics that your spittin, and I feel like you did a decent job providing that feel. I kinda dig the vocals skips you threw in there, it had a Nikki Minaj kinda feel to it haha ...but I think that's dope. Decent track...with the right collaborating artists on here, it'll make a solid track for a mixtape. I'ma give this a 7/10
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daaaaamn. This shits fiyah! Seriously love this beat. Leroy - nice punches, quality was dope and love how you pieced this shit together. Tough emotion could really feel you goin off on this Loon - you killed this shit. Flow was amazing. Quality 100 and punches dope.

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ayo save this collab for me i'ma download this.... i'll send my vocals to ya bro.... PM me...
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat

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Here's mine
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IM GOING IIIIIN ON THIS!!!! recording monday or tuesday, and loon im gunna record that 'other' track too
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat

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Loon E Lou wrote:ok. heres my verse! anyone else?
Amazing.

Love your verse.

Great flow. Great quality.

Love it.

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