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[soundclick]11050455[/soundclick]

Been a long time...tried to fix the levels a little. Think the vocals are a little loud still and i dont have a pop filter. But, oh well. I had the itch and its been a long ass time. Feed is appreciated.
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ILL!!!!. I thought the vocals were a lil low an the beat a bit too high, so i couldnt catch everything you were spitting but flow was on point! an the lyics i did catch were quality. you got more of that track???

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damn dawg been a while.

nice beat selection to come out to. nice emotion set in this one. the mixin sounds a lil LOW. iunno i hear it like that on these speakers. nice snippet man. hope to see you hoppin back in the game more now

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ya it is low... i dunno why i thought it was high.. i prolly lowered the vocaLS TOO MUCH DUE TO THAT THOUGHT... anywho, thanks for peeping... btw love the pic... the hairstyle u had in grammar school was sick yo.
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Ok, well im doing this based off of memory, cuz im at work and gov's dont display soundclick. I member, once upon a time, THE END.





Anyways, i member, you had fallen off the flow a couple spots, like not enough syllables so you had to stretch how you say a couple words so it fits, and other than that the quality and length. Drop more, the more you drop the better you'll get, even if content isnt great, its practice. In the cypher section theres a post for audio, like you suggested, but never hit up foo, maybe nows a good time ? lol ... stay culero.

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I see my suggestions were heeded...maybe i will drop.a.couple joints on there. No mames guey

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beats a touch loud man.... drop the beat some n turn ya vocals up... drowns you out too much... but still lyrics are cool... just work on that bro... turn the beat WAAAAYYYYYYY down haha
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agree with levels things said

but other than that this shit was tight good emotional push on the this type of track kinda a higher BPM so fast rap was necessary which you delivered on

just work on those mixing skill (I'm doing the same) and shit will pop off
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Word.. I bought some new Koss headphones and it sounded loud as fuck... My dumb ass lowered the vocals with out hearing it on the speakers first.... :/ never been good at Mixing. Time for some practice.
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