All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:13 pm
Check us oouut will ya, what youz think? Free beat so no, hook not mixed by us, or beat.
Verse 1 I
Verse 2 Skit
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Verse 2 Skit
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All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
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Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:28 pm
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIITTT!!! First off, nice choice of tracks to hop on, second of all, y'all ripped this fucker out the frame hardcore. Both Pan and Skit, both of y'all came with some sick rhymes and had a great presence on this track. Required some punch behind the vocals which I felt you both had, great delivery. I listened to this bitch three times, right off the bat. Good shit. I'd bump this creepin down the road, so mad props to both of you for crafting some tight shit.
Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:57 pm
Good shit. Very nice folks, I enjoyed the drop. Lyrics were on point, beat hit, nice choice. Overall it was on.
Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 11:51 am
I listened the song earlier. Nice job, this is very entertaining. The flow goes well with the beat. Nice beat selection too.
Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 1:30 am
Appreciate the feed fellas... anyone else care to elaborate?
Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 6:57 am
ok first off, nice beat selection. i feel you guys both did a good job on this. the hook was a big help on this as well. it just vibed well with everything.
alvin- youve come a long ass way from our first topical we had way back. your structure, delivery and everything has just elaborated in more ways than one. you handled your verse nicely with dope rhymeschemes and nice multies scattered throughout your verse. your still gay tho. you had some great emotion in it which really brought out your verse more than usual. nicely done sir. good show.
skit- before our recent battle, i never even heard of or about you. you kinda came in outta left field. BUT you did come in with a good guy backing you so i just assumed you HAD to of had some sort of talent. and you do man. you held your own on the track with one of the dopest writers i know. you came with a good delivery as well as some above par rhymeschemes which really impressed me. a liiiiiiittle fall offs here and there but nothing major. one suggestion, maybe reciting your verse a few more times before laying it to get that confidence behind the verse. itll bring out emotion and, itll sound like you know what the hell your doing. all in all though man, good job dawg.
production as far as quality was nice. no complaints there.
alvin, fuck you. skit, good job man.
dopenesssssssssssssssssssss
alvin- youve come a long ass way from our first topical we had way back. your structure, delivery and everything has just elaborated in more ways than one. you handled your verse nicely with dope rhymeschemes and nice multies scattered throughout your verse. your still gay tho. you had some great emotion in it which really brought out your verse more than usual. nicely done sir. good show.
skit- before our recent battle, i never even heard of or about you. you kinda came in outta left field. BUT you did come in with a good guy backing you so i just assumed you HAD to of had some sort of talent. and you do man. you held your own on the track with one of the dopest writers i know. you came with a good delivery as well as some above par rhymeschemes which really impressed me. a liiiiiiittle fall offs here and there but nothing major. one suggestion, maybe reciting your verse a few more times before laying it to get that confidence behind the verse. itll bring out emotion and, itll sound like you know what the hell your doing. all in all though man, good job dawg.
production as far as quality was nice. no complaints there.
alvin, fuck you. skit, good job man.
dopenesssssssssssssssssssss
Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 7:21 am
GOOD, BUT I HATED THE CHORUS
Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 7:37 am
LMFAO, thats prolly the nicest thing you've ever said to me scotty. Thanks man, means a lot.
Loon, y tu mama tambien. Grassy ass for the feed homie.
Loon, y tu mama tambien. Grassy ass for the feed homie.
Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 12:15 pm
beat is on some craaazytip..coo
verse 1 starts off strong..flo is sik..@ first..uhhm no lie i listen to your tracks hopin to hear your elevation..i will say that your presence @ this point is pretty dope deliv seems on for what u'r attempting..but theres just some lil tweaks that you need to do to your flo to line everything up ..you had too many syllables in a few lines and there were a couple lines that were short on syll's imo
real talk tho if you fixxed the flo problem youd def be beastin it..
verse 2 nice flo no doubt on point most the whole way..lyrics had a cool twist but i was feelin the lyricism in verse 1 more..
all in all that makes it a good track NO Doubt...1
verse 1 starts off strong..flo is sik..@ first..uhhm no lie i listen to your tracks hopin to hear your elevation..i will say that your presence @ this point is pretty dope deliv seems on for what u'r attempting..but theres just some lil tweaks that you need to do to your flo to line everything up ..you had too many syllables in a few lines and there were a couple lines that were short on syll's imo
real talk tho if you fixxed the flo problem youd def be beastin it..
verse 2 nice flo no doubt on point most the whole way..lyrics had a cool twist but i was feelin the lyricism in verse 1 more..
all in all that makes it a good track NO Doubt...1
Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 1:52 pm
i happen to like the chorus... the whole songs fuckin illy bro... liked it when i heard it on Facebook... good shit fam...
Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 12:37 am
Appreciate the love fellas, tre, thanks for taking the time man. Ima work on the kinks, just doing little projects to practice, almost at a good point lol. Lawgix, thanks for the love man, appreciate the fb comments as well.
Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 5:45 am
im feelin this shit, yall both killed the shit. hook was pretty dope too. the mixing you did on this sounds damn near perfect (but i really dont even know what mixing is 
)
Overall good job ya animal.
)Overall good job ya animal.
Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:12 am
dug it man.. one thing is i think the beat overpowered some of the vocals maybe drop the beat a decibel or two...
but other than that i was feeling this shit.. great choice of beat.. and the chorus snapped right in..
good lyrics and good job from the 2s of yas
but other than that i was feeling this shit.. great choice of beat.. and the chorus snapped right in..
good lyrics and good job from the 2s of yas
Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 8:33 am
i listened to this on the main page shits nice man not much i can say other than great..
beat is sick sample is a good choice
first verse is unique and like the rhyme scheme
second verse is a little muffled a little more pronouciation and you'd be straight
good track overall
beat is sick sample is a good choice
first verse is unique and like the rhyme scheme
second verse is a little muffled a little more pronouciation and you'd be straight
good track overall